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    Alarms

    Michael9344 commented on darkfoxprime's story chapter in Alarms

    I liked the way the lines and stanzas rhyme. Although you missed they rhythm at some points. The emotions became more apparent in the later end of the poem and what the hell is he thinking? Going off in a running car with windows closed:)
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    Wales

    Michael9344 commented on Nephylim's blog entry in Nephylim's Blog

    Well..., Wales is beautiful. And the waterfall is epic. But my home town is more prettier
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    Rainy Day

    Michael9344 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Rainy Day

    Thanks for letting us in.... My life is too boring to have a pattern. I don't have a special thing I do when it's raining or on Sundays. I do the same thing almost everyday, which can be fun sometimes;).
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    I don't know what you meant by 'good' use, but I totally understood and enjoyed the story. But I have a lil request. Can you write something with a gay family in it next time?
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    Yeah. I know you convened the message because I could all but see Arelene's anxiety. I loved the suspense where she was asking about TJ. And you know I'm a kicker for suspense:)
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    Awww. Now you made feel bad for not having a birthday party...
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    Hmmm. I think I know her just enough. I got the idea that she's pretty:). That means that you described her well. And, just a quick question. Are you sure you're just gay?
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    Hmmm. She sounds nice. And she obviously meant much to you. I'd say you did her memory justice. Thanks for sharing.
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    Okay. I read this prompt in the forum. And I'd have to say that the first line kinda missed it. Yes, tension must have been around the room/atmosphere but I don't think the first line quantifies what was happening before it. But for the story, I loved it. You write this family/romantic thing quite well. I actually envy that. I'm a sucker for that:).
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    Cool. I was thinking of Christina as BFH and Lou was... but then things got clear in the end. You made Christy's feelings clear. I don't see any minus in this one:)
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    I don't know about the prompt. Actually, I don't follow them. But I can say that you showcased your past quite well. More depth would have been excellent for the story but it's not bad either. I mean, there's only so much that you can write with three hundred words.
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    Oh... So poetic. It was generally great:) I never had a teddy bear. But I had a doll fish. This did bring back some few good memories:).
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    The Goodbye

    Michael9344 commented on comicfan's story chapter in The Goodbye

    I like it. And it isn't sexy. This story shouldn't be sexy. It's just perfect. A lil bit erotic and romantic, though.
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    Good story. I'm quite intrigued. James is obviously into a wrong business and poor Adam is falling for him. I'm guessing it won't be long before he gets his hand - or should I say mouth - dirty.
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    James does know how to grief... .
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    Chapter 7

    Michael9344 commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Liked. I getting lie hang on how this cat's works. Funny and interesting for. And you write it so well that I wonder if you are a cat yourself. Okay scratch that:). Liked this. And I felt sorry for Rover...
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    Hey. I'm Mike. It's my real name. My middle name. I don't use my first and surname often because most people can't pronunce it - they usually butcher it.I joined GA last December. I was recently coming to terms with being gay and wanted some place I could belong. I originally joined to read stories that would fuel my fantasy of finding Mr. Right.Anyway, I'm a wee bit shy. I love music and write. Have I mentioned that I love reading?
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    Happy Birthday girl. Have a blast and a very huge cake:)
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    Welcome to GA, Rose. As Frosty mentioned, we have a Bee here. So if you don't mind, Rose:)
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    Chapter 5

    Michael9344 commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Finally! Some man on man. But why did they have to stop? You shoulda let then blow;). I'm waiting for the next chapter. *P.S. You need to spend more time on editing.
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    Chapter 4

    Michael9344 commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Interesting. Another cliffhanger. There were some typo errors. But you were all good.
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    Chapter 3

    Michael9344 commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Okay. Another chapter gone. Good. But the hetero sex almost grossed me out. Almost. I'm still wondering what the Brotherhood really is? Good writing though.
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    Chapter 2

    Michael9344 commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I enjoyed this chapter. Hot! Very erotic. Why is everybody so straight? Looking to find out if Arsen swallowed Jake's cum...
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    Chapter 1

    Michael9344 commented on The Writer X's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Wow. Interesting. A very long chapter:). Some of the scenes were intense. And I would like to see where you are taking this story. Is Jake bi? What's the deal with the brotherhood?
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    Welcome Rosie:)
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