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Michael9344

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  1. This ghost wasn't scary;). I like. You developed the story well, for a short story. You did a good job:).
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    The Library

    Defintely definitely hot. Just great.
  3. I like:). Quite interesting. Write more faster;)
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    Chapter 1

    OMG. This is one of those plots that if it was poorly written I'd be very disgusted. But this? Superb!
  5. This is your first story that I'm reading and I liked it. I felt something when you talked about writing... Something familiar... Good story:thumbs:
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    Chapter 14

    Interesting. I'm starting to understand The Brotherhood and although I know we are not seeing the big picture yet, I'm terribly intrigued. I'm guessing Jake is a very important person (betting on the lost 'brother') linked to a body like 'The Prince'. I'm hooked. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
  7. Logan is just so good at making enemies. This fight used to be about revenge, not it's social survival. I just hope he won't be dragging Steve into a huge mess
  8. Welcome Misaki. I'm certainly counting on that Muffin.
  9. For a moment there, I felt sorry for Eric, but then I just lost it. And I think I might to be right to say that I'm not tripping for Logan either.
  10. Michael9344

    Iron Man

    Touche... Excellent description, lively dialogue and a wonderful story. Dude, One word - beautiful.
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    Chapter 10

    It just feels like Glory is on an emotional roller coaster.... And I second carrington. You're a terrific writer:)
  12. Jolene by Dolly Patron. I just re discovered it and it's been replaying in my head;)
  13. Hmmm. I don't hate it, but I don't even like it either.
  14. Okay... Maybe I shouldn't be posting this but Nigerian accent has been voted as the fifth sexiest accent in the world by cnn. Why isn't my phone singing? http://www.cnngo.com/explorations/life/worlds-sexiest-accents-130333
  15. I just started reading but I'm hooked. I'm not a huge fan of this genre but this story is rather different. Going to read faster:)
  16. Baliamos by Enrique Iglesias
  17. I like. For some reason, this your first story as far as I'm concerned.. You made James' feeling and emotions apparent. You painted the picture quite well. It was a good read:)
  18. Michael9344

    I live

    Good. Simple and short..
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    Chapter 8

    Okay. This is the best chapter of the story so far for me. I don't know why but I think so. Everything was just smooth and Dig the cliff hangar:)
  20. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    Good. I felt Brandon's despair. And I'm hooked. Pls post the next chapter rather quickly.
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    Chapter 8

    Great. Just great. Like Conner, I wasn't expecting this to happen this fast but I liked it. Finally...
  22. Okay... I hate to break it to you, but this post is not funny - well to me. Because I know it could be true. I live around this kind of place and I gotta tell you, Magic does exist. And it's still in use. They can make your dick fall off - I mean, really, I've seen this first hand - and they can make it useless. I can't start explaining it, but yes, magic is real around here, and most ppl are pretty scared of it.
  23. Happy Birthday:)
  24. Michael9344

    Chapter 7

    Good. I think I'm liking the brotherhood a little bit more;). I couldn't help but notice that Jake sounds smarter than he did in the begining of this story and I like the smarter Jake better. Good chapter.. Thanks for posting. P.S. I think you've used 'two cents' just enough:)
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    Chapter 1

    It is great letting others into your life. And I got it. The taunts. The abuse. The hurt. The fear. The loneliness. And The want. Oh, the want. I don't have much to say. I can't say for a fact that this what I can do. But I can say that you're a survivor. And a survivor is one who has lived. And you'll live on. The gate won't be keeping you in.
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