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Prince von Schullenberg
Northern Dutch Guy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
Also Mark , I think you are back in the way and style of writing when I first visited this story site. You were one of the writers that I came back for again and again. So I am really happy with the more regular postings here and the quality of writing. Thanks. 🤗😘- 36 comments
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Prince von Schullenberg
Northern Dutch Guy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Prince von Schullenberg
Thanks for this new chapter. I really like the pov from JJ. and yes it feels like a very good continuing of this saga 🤗😘- 36 comments
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As reader I am a bit sad too when a story or book ends. But often when reading I almost can not go fast enough to the end ☺️. Though there are some books I put away some days to ‘digest’ parts of the story and think about it a bit more before going on. For you as a writer, a whole series, of course it is a very long traject. Much longer than it takes for readers to read it. But it is much appreciated. Thank you
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Though I rarely yet have been reading stories about ‘shifters and other varieties’ I almost could not stop reading most of the time. Very captivating story and style of writing. Loved it
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Thank you for this story and the whole serie. Was a joy reading it
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Almost did not breath till I was at the end… 🥵
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Wow… I am so glad ‘our’ heroes had the extra protection from Kage. I feared the attack in Texas for a moment, when ‘the big cat’ claimed that attack had been a huge succes. it could have easily shattered the defenders resistance if Huntington suddenly had produced prisoners. In the end I was glad that his own acts caused the Huntington to fail. Without that I fear the outcome could have been very different. Thanks for the excellent chapter 👍
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The fact both Jake and Travis have been there… is certainly complicating things a bit. Though I do not think Travis is capable of that. And Zach has seen Travis, so he was around too. of course there is always an option for an ‘outsider’ who was involved with Curtis scheming to have Travis killed and who is now covering his tracks. My guess is not one of them though. I think Brad had it organized. That is why he is so mad, about the situation and at Jake, for he realizes that Jake now might have become a suspect because of his own actions.
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Thanks for the new chapter and certainly … it ended in a very surprising way. real ‘whodunit’ 🤣🤔👍
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Also I do think ‘the big cat’ will launch an attack somewhere else too. He is not the type to gamble all in one place.
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Not sure I liked the preparation for the attack. They could have had a team at all of these airports to blow up at least one of the aircrafts ‘the big cat’ used. Just to sting him.
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For Travis this period was heavy and difficult, but for Jake we still have no clue how he will react and there is still Buck, probably thinking about revenge. Not only against Travis and Jake but to most of the people that were or are involved in them and helped Travis escape the attacks Buck had planned.
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Thanks Mark for another nice chapter. It seems ‘Big’ is internally less an asshole than the way he acts.
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Agree with that. Moms perving on the friends of their kids… Though it was not the only older woman Darius has been with I think.
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Maybe another option is to exploit the way Asa was caught. If they can use it to smuggle in something that will harm Huntingdon and his cronies 🤔
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Big problem is no one knows so far, what capabilities Huntingdons ‘asian shifter friends’ may have 🫢🤔
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I agree. This is is maybe a moment for Caleb to ‘shine’. And make up for his mistakes of the past. The fact he was not seen by Huntingdon and his people is probably a a weak point in their defense. A weak point they could exploit. Not by by sending Asa but by ending Caleb instead.
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Really nice intriguing story. I finally read the whole till here. Love it , thanks. 😊
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Northern Dutch Guy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
I really enjoyed the last few chapters here. Sometimes with banter, but almost always with a serious meaningful deeper underlying emotion. 🫶 Your new posted chapters usual bring a big smile on my face or make me feel better even when on the days I feel saddest. Thanks Andy G- 57 comments
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Northern Dutch Guy commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Many thanks for the chapter and the whole amazing Saga of Lord Granger you wrote so far. a bit sad this part of the saga ended here, but happy with the fact it will continue. And also thanks for the outstanding quality of story-telling, but also about what I find important …the very accurate historic setting of the stories. 👏❤️ Andy G- 57 comments
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Guess Kit and Tom did the right thing. Though breaking up is most times a bit hard and emotional, sometimes it is better to do it soon, for it would be something in the making probably after a long period of troubles, lies and hurt. And like here… the friendship will be even better, because of some good history together. great story and fun reading so far. Thanks.
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Great chapter, fun reading and great characters. And being in the situation Mitchell is in… very realistic. Almost too close to my own situation. Reading this… Maybe I should start looking for ‘my own Tom’ 🤣🤣 or someone to put me one a date like that 🫢😇
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Hi Mark, Thanks for the new chapter, and nice to see some characters from the past return in the story too. Also a bit of quiet relaxed time for all. But somehow I have the feeling we are not done with ‘the fireworks’ in this story. Again thanks for all the amazing stories here from you. AndyG
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OMG, the things you remember doing sometimes when younger, when looking back. And reading this here, set my mind on that track too 🫢🤣
