Northern Dutch Guy

Totally agree with that. Not a dull moment in this story so far and fun to read. Now, though personally I’m not a big fan of most tattoos, sometimes on a very beautiful body and the way you described it, it made me go looking and searching on the internet for an image like that 😊😉. Have fun writing. The story has me smiling every chapter so far.👍

I can see and feel you’re back in your style of writing. Witty, clever, hot and funny banter … Thanks. Surprising and good follow up of this series. 😊😘👍

Thanks for another funny chapter. Just with the other pov. Would not mind being set up like that myself 🤣 !

Thanks for the new story/chapter. It seems to me you are back in your mood and style of writing 👍. Funny, witty, fast forward and addicting 👍. Already longing for more chapters soon 😊

I do understand Mitchel’s feeling. Even after 3 years when your lover has passed away. For me it is just over two years… but I do understand completely the feeling. That the joy is gone… Androgene… don’t know if this autobiographical … but your absence here and not writing and posting here, I could easily see that from that pov. The story to me seems promising.👍 Have fun writing 😘🤗

Thanks for the new chapter. And also nice more coming soon 😊. Though bit sad too as you stated ‘getting closer to the end’. Hope you will not abandon these characters, but continue with a new part of the Confounded series. Have fun writing.

I did too 🤣😉

Funny chapter and best English I saw from a ‘dutchy’ in a long time 🤣🤣😉

Yes I can imagine for you as a writer, to get back in the characters, it is much harder after such a long time. As a reader, I had to do the same, but more easy… just to get back in the story line.

Nice to know you are have more chapters regularly coming 😊. Needed to go back quite a few chapters to get in the story again. So I’m not yet at the new chapter. And no, not the 5th, mine is the 4th 🤣.

Good to find you here back. One of my favorite writers, and stories ☺️ And a lands man and the same birthday too 😜 need to go back a few chapters 🤣 but I think having you back here writing, makes me have a happy day. not too often here so… finding suddenly a new chapter from you 😊🤗🤗

Good to see the ‘widow(s)’ are back in the story. 😉. They are always in for a new surprise. let me guess we have not seen yet the last of them... Thank you for the chapter.😀

Mark, funny chapter. And thanks being back and posting chapters again.😊 The situation during dinner, at the end of the chapter, I liked it, for I guess almost everyone there, at that table, did some stupid things in the past, that were not made public, as in being shamed in front of all of the family and friends. Now a lot of main characters are focussed on trivial stuff again, I guess they are vulnerable again for the next attack by the black widow😝. Mark, I guess we have to fasten the seatbelts again ? have fun writing, hugs ND.

Just finished reading the story and I liked it.

I like it when good older stories are brought up for there is so much to read here and older stories seldom get the attention they are worthy off. Thanks for bringing it here.

I guess for Granger it was not too difficult a decission to give back those ships as they had little value. Also it may al give him some credit wih the Russians a bit later. And I guess Weston must also have realised the state of 'his' ship and have feered a gale on the North sea in this price ship. Mark Thanks for the nice chapter. Love the Bridgemont series. ND

They are very different from Mark's other stories. For they are short. 😉 . Absolutely beautifull short stories. Gems in my POV. A must read... ahh yes again in my POV. Written in a setting and time that is so different for gays nowadays. Both stories made my hearth cry for the main characters and I was touched by their compassion deeply.🤗 Mark thanks, ND

Ahh it was nice that the Granger family line turned up in the Black Widow/CAP series. I guess that leaves Mark a lot more years for writing the Bridgemont series ... for the CAP series are (unless Mark starts delaying the story) catching up with the time/days we live in... real soon.

Mark thanks for another part of this story. I love the historical setting of this book and of the whole series. When reading the Bridgemont series I often search for items/places that you write about and read and learn some more about those and this chapter was no exception. And the way you write often brings a happy smile on my face. Thanks ND

Me too... Ehhhmmm no I mean ... no not ME TOO in that way ! The shopping scene was hilarious and I was LMAO and and then you beautifully skipped via the flower scene to the roller-coaster emotions of the graveyard scene . Andy

Loved this chapter. Good pace of writing and loved the verbal and non verbal interactions. Had some laughs about the way you describe things. When he went all bossy and possessive like that, it raised my heckles like nothing else, a surefire way to go against it immediately. ... When I met Sandro, it had been like that too, but different. He’d been possessive but never bossy. Jealous, yes. Very. Somewhat honest but not always, but he was honest where it counted. Strong as a bull, built like a brick shithouse and tall though not as tall as Kit. I'm sure you meant 'hackles'... and... would you like being described by your lover as 'a brick shithouse'. Now be a good boy and finish this story and of cause ... have fun writing.

OMG ... You FORGOT !!!!! You must be joking ! Yes please, if you could humour me... phhlease finish this

Same as me. Never posted comments reading this story the 1st time. Yes loved the chapter as well, and whole of the story so far is a joy to read again.

Loved the chapter. Tom is just like a cat... Now he feels more save and relaxed he starts purring (talking/opening up). About the glaring error... either you changed it or you mean twofaced instead of two-faced or “It was so easy. Skip school, sneak out every night, cause some trouble. Get (Got) picked up by the police a few times…heeeere’s Johnny!” Andy

OMG. Can only hope the worst part of Tom's story was/is fiction.