Kev

I can understand Amasis and how he feels or rather not feels about Nabia. Pleased he is going to look after Amir. Not happy at all about the military and what is happening up above... will just breathe in deeply until the next chapter comes out ... hurry up or I'll turn blue!!!

Looking forward to see how this develops, Morsi doesn't look promising at the moment ... General not sure I want the military involved.

Poor Nabia, if only she had trusted them ... Loving the new Amasis. Like a man with a bald head, but it has to be able to grow ... totally love a 5 o'clock shadow and stubble.... Can't wait to see how Amasis develops. Everything ends ... WOW ! To quote David Tennant as Doctor Who when he was about to become Matt Smith ... "I don't want to go! I'm not ready. I don't want it to end...." Looking forward to see if Devon comes up with a way to save Amasis City with the power problem ....

Military? They have to keep that in tow or they'll want to control the vampires and create a fighting force ... I wonder if that was the goal all of the time. Loving Stan... I just know that he will crack the code and win the prize. Loving that Amasis is going through the serum... Not sure what to think of Nabia though, it's almost as if there is something there that we don't know yet.

How to win friends and influence people ... take lessons from Devon... I love the friendship that is developing between Devon and Amasis, it is as if showing him that he was truly like them broke down the final barriers and Amasis went from God in his mind to a man that had been tricked and duped for thousands of years. I love how he has kept his humanity and how he has created a city for his people so that even though he can not be int he sun there is a place for them. It will be interesting to find out more about this alchemist / Court Magician and what he combined to create the venom that created the Old Ones. One thing is certain it wasn't magic it was something in the poisons that he mixed and fed to his lab rats ... God! How could he use pregnant women???? Really looking forward to seeing Amasis as a man, his character has already started to show... it should be a fun ride!

I feel honoured that you allowed us to see your world. Tony / Daniel must have been a pretty spectacular person. I wish that I had met my Daniel .... You know from my comments that I love your writing, thank you for sharing your Daniel with all of us. Totally agree ... would love more please.

I cried my eyes out !!! Don't do that to me, I love Mitch and Tony.

Stunning ... amazing ... Mind blowing ... I love Devon!!! Not even going to try to say anything about it other than Absolutely wonderful.

Ditto ... Mind I am growing to love Mitch's dad!!!

Why am I always at midday looking and pining for my daily Colin/Devon dosage? At last we see the human part of Nabia... A woman needs to feel wanted and worshipped herself. She needs to feel she means something. It sounds as if Amasis is so up hos own arse with this God thing that he wouldn't know a woman if she sat on his face! Also where are the other wives and people that he has "Kissed"? He said that he had changed some wives so where are they? What did he do to them? Listening to Amasis though, I don't think that it is only Nabia that is disillusioned. Amasis hinted that it is definitely not what he was promised ... " I nodded. “Are there other new demons or creatures that are evil here?” He nodded. “There are some.” He frowned. “There were times I questioned this Otherworld. At times I thought my trip was to the Underworld.” To me that sounds like it has been torture for him to exist like he does... Always wanted to play rugby, but when I grew up I realised it was for the bath they they all have together at the end of the game. I could quite easily enjoy becoming part of the team every morning!

I never knew my grandparents so Nick we lucky. I love Angelo and the way that he accepted Mitch ... I don't know why I keep reading though as I'm doing more crying that reading!!! I think Kathy has stepped into Kathleen's shoes. I just love a woman with chutzpah!!!

I'm getting old now and often wonder if I'll forget my mother. She died when I was twelve of thyroid cancer. She was my best friend and I was lost for years when she was taken from us... Cancer is an alien that invades the body and destroys the ones we love from the inside. Years later just after I met my partner my father died of COPD and we spent many hours at his bedside. He even accepted my partner and gave us his blessing. Now as I get older and things slow down I worry what the future will hold.... I love Angelo and Kathleen ... they remind me so much off my family when we were happy before mum was taken from us. I have been crying none stop now for the last chapter and fear moving forward... need to get supper before I move on ... Thank you ... Thank you ... Thank you

When we married (I was confused and had 4 kids) we had a four tier cake. This was so that we could keep the bottom tier for our anniversary. I was the same ... no way!! When we sliced it after TWO years the taste was even better than it had been on the day. Apparently the proper wedding cake ( equivalent of a fruit christmas fruit cake) is soused in brandy and then when the royal icing is placed over it, it is sealed and no air can get to it until the icing is broken. It has to be royal icing the rock hard stuff, butter cream does not seal it from the air. Also has to be proper wedding cake as sponge cake become a mouldy mess as my sister law found out!!!

Love this... Great start... It will be interesting to see how Amasis accepts the team. I have always love Egyptian history with the Pharaohs and pyramids and stuff! Now mixing my favourite story with my favourite history what else could I ask for? It will be interesting to see how they persuade him that even though he may have been a king that believed he was a GOD ... Sorry things have changed ... Ummm, SORRY you're just a man ! ! ! Oh a very very rich man, but still just a vampiric man. someone slap his wife she seems like a real bitch. Now i am worried about Stan and Mark. I mean if they are with Amasis what will the authorities think when no one knows where they are? They will likely arrest them both and who knows .....

don't know why, but I want a man like Mitch!!! Love that guy....

The map sounds simple, two towns ans a peak, but the peak has me interested. An old pyramid that had eroded with time would look like a "Peak" on the map. I agree with Wesley, "Curiouser and curiouser". Plus this museum guy Tad? He wants to take them two hours into the desert or wherever to a tomb of a man who was not a pharaoh... I wonder who that could be and what lies in store there. Will they find out more about Amasis in the writings of the tomb. Amir has me wondering ... Mother taught him but has little knowledge of the world. Also no mention of HOME and when Colin said home he amended it to "Where I live" Something is seriously out of sync there.

Not sure what's happening there ... I see it as normal text, though that has happened in the past to ... Can't remember how it was sorted though.

I lived in Scotland for five years and often wore a kilt as it was my am dram days ... 'In a comedy tonight' it was a very mini kilt that did not hide much !!! Oh to be young again. Then I moved to the north and bumped into a bunch of Sottish lads (15 out of 10 for looks) out on a stag night. My partner fainted so he could see if it was true... When they found out why he had fainter everyone of them ran off up the road with their kilts in the air!!! Stags everyone of them....

I love this family!!! Why can't my family have characters like Melissa? I first heard Phantom when I was a young lad ... So scary thinking about it as its over 31 years since I bought the tape when it was released with Michael Crawford and Sarah Brightman. Lived in the north then and couldn't drive so collected all of the records and then the tapes. Favourite one was always 'Joseph and his Amazing Technicolor Dreamcoat' but only because I was in it when I was in Am Dram.

I love Melissa ... I would say she's like me, but I hate to say it she has more balls doing that with the nun ... WOW!!!

i had to tear myself away from Mitch and Tony to get my daily dose of Colin and Devon.... Well worth it! It only gets better. I am loving the new Tony. This museum / government man Mr. Morsi worries me. Did the guys check for bugging devices when the settled in? I mean they are talking about Vampires and if the place is bugged???? I love how the language program is developing and becoming a saleable program, love Colin's ideas for it. Looking forward to my next daily dose of the serum, but now back to Christmas with Tony and Mitch.....

I was never close to my father as a child... Mum had cancer as she carried me, but chose to have me rather than the Radiotherapy that would have killed me. It was too late when I was born as it was advanced ... He never forgave me and he never accepted me. He beat the crap out of me and threw me on the street for being gay, but accepted my married brother when he came out. Never saw him for years and regret it now because when I did it was on his death bed. Really hope Mitch's dad comes back in his life.

I know that type of family ... been there dome that ... never had a Tony though to fight my corner for me... Cried like a baby ... Loving this story and falling for Tony !!!

Loving it ... Mum the Vamp! I love the love between her and Willie. I'm curious the guy in Egypt seemed backward in coming forward, almost unwilling to invite them over to the place as he knew there was danger there possibly. It will be interesting to see how this museum guy maps out. Having worked for the top high street tailors and done my share of measuring the inside leg I know what the guys will be experiencing... I was young and the things that went in the bespoke section was ....................... That's another story! I loved being a made to measure tailor though so pleased it made a come back here as it has died a death in the stores these days. Really looking forward to seeing how this develops... Oh and loving Tony and Mitch...I promised I'd go back and get up to speed. Love Mitch, but still trying to get a hold on Tony, he had me crying like a baby with one of the chapters.

Missing Colin and Devon and having to withdrawal problems, but loving Mitch and Tony ... Thank you...