Kev

I only have one word ...Tears... I can't see to type as the tears are still there ...

Absolutely loving the story... Always wished I had gone to Glasgow Drama College. I was offered a scholarship by a friend in Am-Dram but my father wouldn't let me go... Never did go to any college because of him. Loving the story so far can't wait for more. Just realized I've been here before ... at least I'm moving on to Chapter two now.

Haven't been on here for some time and found this story.... loving every minute of it... I fit into the category of not understanding txt language as well and I still haven't worked out how to change the ring tone! Loving how the characters are developing especially how Greg is suddenly human!

Done took me a break for awhile ... back now and loving this new story ... I think I was married to sherry myself. Either that or my daughters are her!!! Loving Chet, my oldest son was just like him!!! 11/3/25... Second time around and still as good... like catching up with old friends. On holiday for a week, so catch up time.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter ... but here I am all alone this evening and in tears because of the song .. I absolutely love it! Thank you.

I wouldn't mind a general kissing me now and then, quite like the ides of a man in unifrom. Something tells me the two generals are going to be a real power source helping Eric push through all of the reforms he is thinking of. Still like the idea of marrying Mararovia.... Loving Eric and Peter....

I have the feeling that these generals are going to prove great assets, but for some reason it will be Eric leading the way with them.... Just think a wedding night where you have to pleasure 2,000,000 ! ! !

I love Eric ... can I carry their bags?

Can I carry their cases please ? ? ? I could really do with a holiday! I come from a home that had my ex-wife and two daughters and often friends of all of them sitting around chatting while my sons and I got lost in how they could understand exactly what and who they were all talking to or about. The worst times were when they said "What do you think Kev?" I would love to see this website ... Still loving Peter and Eric !

i have two requests ... Can I move over to Makarovia? or second can I go to the same college as the guys ... I love Peter and Eris ... The interview was amazing and I somehow feel anderson may well figure more when announcements have to be made as he did a fair interview. Absolutely loving it ! ! ! !

Hey I'm in england so have never heard of him ... I think I would know hwo you mean if you said Ellen or Leno. Hell I even watch Ellen the other morning. I do recognise Anderson's picture though. Still loving the story and I like how Eric seems to be shaping alot of the future of his new country.

There is only two people that I check on every day to see if they have a new chapter and you are the first... Absolutely loving the new story... Love the innocence of Peter and the love the flows through it all...

I am loving the developing love between Eric and Peter... especially how Eric is thinking on his feet. not only needing to appear on an interview, but analyzing the needs that the country will have once it all takes off. I think Prince Eric going to become loved byt he country. I know that they want to study, but maybe they would be better as ambassadors for Makarovia than students. They could always get their degree online.

I am so in love with Eric ... How I wish I had a knight in shining armour like him to defend me from roving hands ... No re-think that, it would be nice to have some roving hands occasionally. I think this month I'm training to become a monk ! ! ! ! Loving the new story ... Thanks

Loving the story. Peter and Eric have such a future and I can already see Eric being a leader in his new country with the ideas that he has. Must admit you have me thinking about the Queen and the King... Mother and son ... Could it be???? Even Eric wondered. Loved how they stood up for Peter when the Vice President attacked Eric and Peter verbally. I wonder did he realize what America could have lost has the royals been insulted by his actions. Closed mided people make me sick!

Loving it and falling for peter and Eric already... Peter just seems so vulnerable and I hope Eric gets the chance to give his mother and brother a swift kick!!! Hell surely they could see the guy was in agony and drowning, needing someone to spend time with him. Was mother so shallow that since she was good looking she just did not want to be seen with the spotty geek? I could gro to hate that bitch! Teach them right when they WOW America together and take the attention from mother and Olek. Lovig it!!!

Loving it ... Always amazed at the stories that you pen creates ... I wish that I had one like that.... Absolutely wonderful... Thankyou.

I think I could fall for Dragon... Why oh why are there never any like him around? I could even use a little of the Devon style of loving ! ! ! Please, I've been a good boy!

That's the secret with VUN the depth of the organization and their ability to think big and dleiver what is needed. It's interesting how Devon said Iilya was innocent. I guess he is just a tool left over after the Russian regime collapsed and someone using him now. If he has been activated could the code be used to deactivate him before the halloween fest? Still falling in love with the old ones Earless should be called Pete, because then we'd have Pete and Repeat.

Great Aunt Mabel Father Man how could it be said, Wandered the street and took Bertie to bed. Mother would now have her child. He'd done his duty, on the table went wild. Late at night and gas lights down, Father rummaged ‘neath mother’s gown. Made his way through all the skirts, Then bent her o’er and did the dirt. Nine months later Mabel's born Mother no longer felt forlorn She had a purpose you see, A little girl called Mabel. Me. Mother never again to marriage bed went, There was no love there to be spent Friends, Mother and Father were, Because Sweet Little Mabel she made them a pair. Now Bertie, he was a wealthy man … From bankruptcy he saved my Father Man. To stop father from going to prison He bought their house, there was no derision. For Bertie he was an adorable man Looked after mother, Mabel and Father Man Gave them a life in Society For everything they could now be. Now Uncle Bertie he owned a club Took Father there to drink in the snug But when they stayed over, there would be A sex craved orgy with men you see. For Father Man he loved a cock And sank to his knees and never did mock Those at the club who would plug his ass And pay for the joy as Bertie would laugh. No one knew what the family were And Mabel she grew so sweet and so fair When mother died, she rushed to her dad. Found him in bed being fucked, t’was so sad. “Mabel do not run away!” “Oh Father Man I knew before today, But mother has gone and we’re now alone. Bring Bertie down, so the family he’ll own.” As the years went by as they always do Mabel she married a man named Stu She never got pregnant nor had a kid Because of what her father did. The month after she married she found her Stu In bed with her Father, oh he knew what to do. Now Father man, he was so ashamed. Died of a broken heart, though t'was never named. Bertie he took to his sick bed When Father betrayed them. Oh, must it be said? Mabel was the nurse him by his side And wept like a baby when he died. When the will was read she got the lot. At what cost she asked nearly losing the plot. The sight of Stuart being fucked, such pain Stayed with her as she saw his spunk flying again and again. Years they passed by, there was one constant. The presence of Great Aunt Mabel, the spinster Aunt No one knew why she was alone Her life she kept secret, it was her own. Though to Stuart the marriage they had broken Annulled by law in private as a token He left in shame when father died Having broken her heart through deception and lies To us, Father and Mother were strait laced Stern and solemn no smile on their face. Behind the scene of this Victorian life we saw Mabel knew who fucked who and the pain that it bore.

I'm falling in love with Iustina and Repetate. So dangerous and yet so cute... Loving the Vampire Task force that's being pulled together, Cops with attitude that hits back ... How can you hate a character when they have hardly been in the story? I hate Iilya and Lucian. I think I'm turning Straight as the idea of Gabriella in her kick ass outfit and Vamp weapons is sort of a turn on ... Ok I loved the Hansel and Gretel film where they were witchhunters and she befriended a Troll. He was cute, but hell she was kick ass!!!

Exceptional ! ! ! Love the two old ones, bit like me I'm a Bugs Bunny adict Televised horror...Leaave it to Devon he'll come up with the plan. I think he has won the doctor and detective over.... Looking forward to the next installment of this fantastic story.

I missed my Devon ans was worried about him ... I love the fact that things are moving on even with the leader out of action. Mum I love ... I like the Doctor but worry about the inspector.... also what is it witht he Van Helsing wannabees?

There are two stories that keep me sane at the moment and each day I look for them ... When I don't see you I miss you !!! Just wish we coulde be there to support you. As usual Devon and I are going to run away ... I'm in love. i think that is why I love your writing, the characters have a strength and humanity that other writers fail to find. It would be good if this doctor could become a supporter and workj with Grorge, they were lookng for other people with medical training. Worried about Colin ... I know alot of the beliefs we had are wrong and the serum changes a lot as well, but don't their wounds heal faster than normal?????

Devon does it again ... I actually think his seeing live in battle and coping with the different situations makes him able to analyze the situations now and come up with the ways he would resiolve them. Dragon is quite a man and I feel the more contact with Devon the more human he becomes. Still woorried about Lucian though!