Kev

I fel guilty as I never wrote anything last time... This chapter is stunning ... How Devon face the Dragon is simply amazing. Devon, whethr he wants to beleive it or not has similar power to the DRagon. He is able to pursuade people and talk them through issues. I love him! ! ! Tell me the web address, I want to watch what happens to Vlad... I can't help but wonder if I would be brave enough to do it. You don't have to be brave to become a vampire as it happens when they aftack you, but would I be as brave as the Dragon to take hte serum and accept a new future????

I'm beginning to like the new guys ... A touch or darkness, humanity and a desire to move forward all mixed toether and you have the Dragon and Gaius. I can understand how Devon doesn't regret what he did or regret being a Vampire. He has always had his human side and touches the hmanity of everyone that he talks to. Really loving this story!

I am beginning to like Dragons. Mind my flat is full of dragon statues as I love them! I hope he'll grow on me as well. Lucian and that other one I can never remember how to spell are going to be problems, especially if he has his band of followers! These two Old Ones I love ... they may have been created to kill anc conquer, but no one changed their innocence and that childlike trait that they have. So glad they are not the badies. Really hoping that Dragon joins VUN International. I think that he is a good man underneath it all.

Ditto! ! ! Mind I will still look every day.... I absolutely love this chapter. The strength of it lay in the Dragon's confusion and for once not in VUN ! No leader should place complete faith in hismen and not make sure they are doing what he wnts then to do. The Dragon seems to be a good man that had to do what he did for his people. I LOVE DEVON ! ! ! I wish I made sense like him. He has such a large heart that I think it would keep on beating no matter what happened to him. With his beleive in the Old Ones and how they have been tools and used it will be interesting to see how this develops. I think to show that it works they should give it first to Lucian as he punishment ...

I never liked Iilya and that empty slab always made me worry. You know I can almost understand why he would fear losing what he has. Everyone fears cahnge and if he has lived with for so long then fear is his weakness as well as a tool that he can use. At the moment, though I reserve the right to change my opinion, I kind of like this Nicolae. Also a little curious about the antivenom... This just keeps getting better...

I never wrote a comment last time as it left me not knowing what to think ... Christian just didn't seem RIGHT ... Today makes more sense and they have faced the problem head on like they always do. IIlya still leaves me cold for some reason and the five slabs also make me worry what else is going to happen. Gaius is obviously old and is worried about his family, but what about the other 4? ? ?

Just think mother is going to be so pleased ... Devon counselling the real Dracula!!! What mother wouldn't want the same for their children???

I feel sorry for Christian. He had to become a vampire to give his people chance to survive and to overcome the real forces of evil that were invading and using his people. His own brother had been taken captive and was being used ... “Families were being torn apart, children used in ways to satisfy men’s desires for both sadistic and sexual gratification! My brother was used for that! They were slaves!” What man wouldn't rip the heart of anyone that attacked and posed a deathly threat to his family ... I have four kids from when I was married and though they do not agree with my life now, they would all be there for the others if they could. I feel sorry for Christian and the decisions that he had to make to save his people. The thing is he did it and he saved them! Now he has to forgive himself and learn to live again.... Not everyone gets a second chance.

I love Eva and her reaction ... Could I feel safe knowing that I was in a house full of vampires? Even if I thought they were my friends, I don't think i could stay in the house like she did. So please Alin took the 'medicine' but now i am worried about 'Dracula'. If Christian is then what is his game ... If he is not what the hell is happening and does the real one exist?????

Poor Stan, so used to be Cinderella left at home that he just assumed he would be again... Makes me wonder what type of past this man has and why he is like he is. Love the fact that they have gone out to party and before they even begin the Europe division of VUN in it's raw state hunts them out. Really looking to finding out who this Christian is.

I am loving Stan and Devon and the conviction that they both have. Dracula is used to scare people, but we forget that many are inspired by him and how he gave himself for his people. Love the recent film that shows how he became a vampire for his people and overcame the Turks, event then though I think there is more to it and Stan seems to know the history. I worry though as speaking out like that to Eva has now made him the target if they are looking for someone to target for kidnapping. Will be interesting to see what happens next.

Loving the way it is developing... Fallen in love with Mitch and how he is supporting the VUN team. I could never get into reading Bram Stoker version, so Stan has me beat. Though I fell in love with the children's book series Darren Shan ... Still in love with Devon and not looking forward to him getting kidnapped by Dracula ... Please don't do that to us!!!!

I absolutely an enjoying my day ... Found a favourite story updated this morning and now this one here and starting on a new adventure. Would love to have a vacation like Devon and Colin, though I think if I got in the hammock I'd never get out! It sounds so idyllic and peaceful. So the hunt for Dracula begins ... What can I say, really looking to find out what happens next.

Someone can come and rescue me as long as I end up where Devon is .... I waiting ... no honestly I here, just come and get me I'll go willingly!!!! I love Devon, but who could fail to love Colin when he does something as romantic as that ... Come on, I.m packed and waiting!!! Absolutely loving this series ... Please do we have to wait a whole day for the new one to begin???

I love weddings ... always cry ... but I'm guessing there is going to be a little more excitement than they are expecting, but who? You did mention the people who created the old Ones ... Maybe they eventually got turned as well ... It would be a nice twist for them to find one of the villages that were used with the Elixir and find that it is still in the water! Really looking forward to see how this develops... George is right though they do noeed to have the ability close up to study an Old one.

It just gets better ... I love Devon and how he sticks up for what he believes and feels. Glad the bastard shot himself though. I can see them learning a lot from Gizmo even though they left him behind, Devon now has knowledge that the others should explore... Get him to share everything about Gizmo so that they can analyse the facts and start getting a better picture. Shows how popular Devon is when everyone was there to get him ... Knew Amasis would end up be VUN General in command of Strategic planning. Now I wonder what will happen next?

I hate crying like a baby... Especially when the supposed bad guy dies ... I love Gizmo. It's sad when you think that Devon was most likely the only person that had ever shown kindness to him or any sort of respect. Possibly the first that never showed fear and hate and accepted him for what he was. Likewise I think he accepted Devon as he slept by his side. When you look at the characters in this story the whole idea of exactly who is the monster sort of changes as the humans were the monsters. Rafa and Fredrick were monsters of the first degree, yet Gizmo proved himself to be a hero and placed himself in the line of danger to protect Devon and his friends. I think Gizmo also wanted revenge for the years of torment that they had put him through... sad really as I think he finally knew he would be free after thousands of years as a slave to the monster that created him and monsters that used him. He finally had a chance to be truly free... Absolutely spellbinding ! ! !

Yes, but do not forget Amasis... Amir told Devon and Colin that he is a military leader with thousands of years experience and good at forming strategies of attack ... Maybe it will be Amasis that rides in on his white charger will the troops following behind.

Rafa is one sadistic son of a bitch ! ! ! Fredrick, I am not quite sure about. The old one, it made me more sorry for him that anything else. The four mercenary's that were changed though I felt no sorrow from them at all. Maybe they were all doing their jobs, but they chose to be in that group ! ! ! I just worry about Devon. If he has been gone a few days then the team are there already and getting ready to act Rafa just does not know what hell feels like when it is unleashed ... Mamma will ride hell and high water to safe her boy and so will papa Willie. I'm hurting for Colin at the moment as he needs to think straight and with Devon gone he he will be clawing the walls to get to him. Others are arriving...I wonder who they are? also they wanted venom, why the hell not draw it from the ones that used to be theri men and then they could compare it to the blood from Devon ... Oh am I being thick??? Hi ho Silver away ... ... Colin is coming and all hell will hit the fan when he does! ! !

I feel guilty ... I confess that I spent the afternoon in a guilty pleasure watching the new Beauty and the Beast in DVD and now that Devon has been tranqed I feel guilty that I wasn't here before ! ! ! ... How the hell did they get into Wentworth or are they still at the hotel? I hate cliffhangers... We need the A Team to save my men ... Ok the VUN team will do, just save them Devon has already been through hell ! !

I love Mitch ... I am so fickle, your men make me fall in love with them so easily! Mitch is special though as he is so accepting and that is a rare trait in today's world. In this he is the same as Devon. Sasha still made me smile and I love the family together at Christmas. Where was Alik though? i know how Mitch felt when he sat the the tree in his own world.... I comes in handy sometimes to just retreat to a world that only you know and talk to those that you have loved. Looking forward to see what happens next and how Mitch gets involved ... Love the link with Cinderfella !!! Still missing Eric and Seth.

Never did like the idea that Tad was connected to a General... Could it be he's heard the name Amasis and wants the Egyptian treasure? Don't think that's it as he is still wanting to know where they are... someone is wanting to contact them and take control .... BUT who? Be prepared for some Christmas firework by the looks of it. Whatever it is they wanted to be seen and they seem to be getting noticed. Loving the way this is developing.

Time to fly the nest ... Wentworth is big enough for them all though so is this the sign of things to come? once they are out will they leave the VUN Taskforce and start lives of their own separate from VUN and it influences? Or will the Russian capture them and then the new adventure in Russia begins??? Can't wait to find out what happens next ... Loving it ... Love Devon, but falling for Amasis.

Perfect ... I find myself looking almost daily for your updates... Looking forward to more ... Personally, though I enjoy the sex scene if it is needed for the story, I tend to skim read those parts as the story is the important part to me ... Loving this one!!!

Absolutely loving this.... Glad the baddies got it good! Though still wonder if they are connected to Tad and his brother. Me thinks Colin needs helicopters to the desert to get out so that it is done and no one can stop them... Absolutely wonderful chapter ... finally breathing at last This should be published!!!