NickolasJames8

Actually its not bad. I dl'd it a few weeks ago and tried it out. The only part I dont like is how it has certain info that has to be entered like a last name and a first name....some of my characters don't have those.

Happy Birthday Anthony. Thanks for always being such a cool friend and I hope you're gonna go have fun somewhere. Nick

lol....it's a computer virus

I've never heard of either one of those

I hope you like it

I tend to agree, but if i do one on him, I want to cover his history (his parents divorce and his friendship with Kyle Porter), but I think Phillip's point of view is important too right now, i have plans to do this, but they could change at any time. Ok, after reading the debate, I think I may have an idea......either one story with alternating POV's -or- Two stories running at the same time, dealing with the same situations but obviously one would be from Kyle K's POV and the other could be from Phillip's POV.....of course, I could always do it from a third person perspective, but then there'd be no reason to continue with the series Well, you'll know that we've come to that point if I write a story from the POV of Anita, the rude cashier who works for Renee Tisdale's mom at the funnel cake shop Or even a seventent or an eightent

It's going to....just like My Jump Off flowed into Staking My Claim, I left it wide open enough at the end to have a few options...I guess the question now is, who's point of view should it be from??? Phillips or Kyle K's??

Yikes!!!! Ok, I'll start serving my sentence right here

I guess I never thought of it that way. I mean, in that sense, it comes off as rather selfish on his part because even though he's heartbroken for his daughter, he pretty much only describes the pain he experienced and not that of Michelle, the one who was truly victimized.

I would think that they'd rather have their daughters be gay so that there wouldn't be a man to mistreat her....idk. Of course, it could be that he doesn't like the idea because a lot of guys have lesbiana fantasies

I like to keep you sharp

Would that be one of those Satanic stars??

I look at Bob as someone who thinks he's not homophobic, but when faced with accepting any gay, lesbian or transgedered person, not just his daughter, he'd have a problem with it. He strikes me as being against gay marriage. Oooh, so I just got a message from someone at another site who said she didn't think this story was tragic enough (that's what she was asking for). So here's a question: would this story be categorized as tragic? If so, why? If not, why?

Thanks...honestly, right up until I got ready to send it off to CJ, I wasn't even sweating the whole rape/no gay theme part. Then I got nervous and sweated CJ to read it to be sure it was okay for the anthology. I'm kinda glad it came across that way. Bob has a lot of flaws as a person, and I was trying to get that across. I mean, if he reacted that way to her being raped, I wonder what he would have done if she'd have told them she was gay Thanks Conner....I love your perspective on it. I did try to keep Michelle strong for her dad at the end of the story. That's where I wanted him to draw his strength Well considering that I was playing with the idea of having her come out to her parents, the reaction would have been good for either scene (for the story not as a reaction irl). I can actually see someone like Bob having a hard time accepting his daughter as a lesbian. Of course, that would have been up to me in the end, but as a character, he strikes me as a little bit homophobic.

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I might mean trilogy, but I'm not sure yet....it could be a fourlogy or a fivelogy

Thanks everyone. I'd be lying if I said I gave this story much thought before I wrote it. I wasn't sure what I was going to do for the anthology, but I said I was gonna contribute, so I had to write something. This is what came out. I knew it would be a risky thing not to have some kind of gay element in the story, and to be honest, I almost made Michelle a lesbian who was coming out. In the end, though, I didn't think it was a really original idea, so I decided to take a chance. Maybe it wasn't a really popular thing, and I'm sure a lot of people read it and thought WTF?? but I'm really proud of the end result of my twenty minutes of hard work