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NickolasJames8

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  1. Get Well Soon Vance.
  2. lol @ everyone in CJ's herd trying to find a name...I think it should be called The Lurkers, named after CJ's favorite activity
  3. Happy Birthday Kevin.
  4. I think if I had to do something like that I'd make sure that I sperated the third person part by adding one of these * * * Then I'd put the font in italics so that the reader would know from the start that it was no longer coming from the point of view of the first person character. I think it can be done, and done well if you approach it right.
  5. Thanks for letting us know, Viv. Please let him know (if you talk to him again) that I'm thinking of him.
  6. You'll have to read Staking My Claim and see for yourself Thanks for reading the story, Benji. I hope you enjoyed it and were patient enough with the terrible writing. It was my second chapter story, so I was still pretty sucky Not that I'm much better now, but I try BTW, I fixed the link to the story in my last post on this topic
  7. Aye I've never had aspirations of becoming a Luchador and winning championships, gaining fame and earning money in wrestling rings across North America.
  8. Actually, he was convicted of stealing a car on his birthday, then joy riding it around. Then, just when you think he's rehabilitated, he goes off and steals a jeep. Also, he says he got a job on a construction site, but it sounded more like he was working in a chop shop to me. Quinn, on the other hand, was great. He stood up to his so called friend Brad when he caled him a fudge packer and was a pretty good big brother for Brianna. Also, he reached out to Taylor and Trina Ashpock, even when they tried to push him away. And he gets extra points in my book for introducing his mom to Murphy and getting them both laid.
  9. That's easy..... Luke. Not only is he a car thief, but he was deceitful and boring at the same time. He should suffer the consequences
  10. Time to start eating more soy
  11. I'm in the US and really I've never thought about what it would be like to live in any other nation. I guess I wouldn't mind living in the Netherlands or Denmark or Greece, but that would be it.
  12. Tea..I tried coffee and wanted to puke, so I went back to Redbull. Country music or Opera??
  13. NickolasJames8

    Sometimes

    I think I try too hard to do things I don't know how to do. I recently decided that I hate reading high school stories and was ready to try something new for myself. I wanted to write something adult oriented, but not tragic or anything with a moral lesson. I just wanted it to involve two adult males living their lives who happened to meet. I guess my problem is that I don't have anything to reference. Most of my fiction stories come from my imagination, one where I tell myself the story and then work on it later on. I've honestly never stopped to consider what a casual meeting between two adults who hook up later on entails. So in other words, I'm stuck. I've been reading Jake's Hand by Rec and while I love the story, I have to say that I'm really jealous of him for being able to write something so perfectly in tune with what I want to be able to write. Two guys who meet and forge a relationship. I get the same feeling of envy when I read something by Jack Scribe, because I can't seem to capture that certain something his stories have. Maybe I never will, but I definitely plan on trying. To that end, I'm currently working on a story just like that. No one's seen it yet, and unless I like the end result of the first chapter, no one ever will. It can't just be some trashy story that anyone can find on Nifty, but it can't bore people either. My other project, Journey Back to The Yellow House is on the back burner for now, too. I have to get myself better organized and figure out where I want that story to go and how it'll end. I still plan on writing a sequel to Staking My Claim, and of course What's The Difference will continue, but after that, you'll probably see a major change in the genre of my stories.
  14. Yikes!!!! :o When I said last March, I meant March 2006, not 2007...sorry about that.
  15. Happy Birthday Francois, singer of my new favorite song.
  16. Whoo Hoo!!! Great work Bob Today I'm celebrating the fact that my grandpa, who's 54 and had a massive heart attack last March, ran 5 miles side by side with me about two hours ago and then, about an extra 2 and a half, a lot of which he was showing off by jogging backwards when I started to get tired.
  17. What I ended up doing was this...... First Name Justin's Last Name Brother This really helps out, especially since no one in the story was assigned a last name except for one teacher toward the end of the story. But then he wasn't given a first name because he was called Mr. Kessler by the kids. Anyway, thank again for telling us about this program
  18. Congratulations Bard
  19. Yes The person below me is going shopping for clothes today
  20. No.....The person below me just realized that they've been a member of Gay Authors for exactly two years
  21. Hillary, Hitler......is there a difference??? I kid, I kid
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