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Well it didn't take me long to mash up my car. I was at Exxon getting gas for the very first time since I got it, and lo and behold, I ran over a curb and bent the rim. Now my tire has a big bubble in it and the rim is ruined. I just got off the phone with my dad and he's PISSED. Anyway, I guess I have to spend whatever its gonna be to take it to First Team (the place I got it) and get it fixed. The guy at Goodyear told me I'd have to have the rim replaced, and offered to do it for 250, including the tire, but I didn't think I should just get one price. So anyway, that's my crappy Monday morning so far. I was supposed to work today, but I called in because I'm kinda scared to drive on that tire. Oh yeah, and my nose won't stop bleeding this morning for some reason

Well I know one of the mods there really well, and Andrew, the site owner, is a really nice guy. You should have no trouble getting the story taken down. If you do, I'll be happy to talk to either one of them for you.

I think the begining gives the ending a ray of hope it wouldn't have had otherwise. I loved this story from the start to the very last letter. Thanks Wrathofmagneto

I think you're right on your point about him maybe being gay. Either that, or he had feelings for him in some way that was more than friendship. Either way, though, it was a day late and a dollar short.

I agree with what you said exactly. Great story Razor

This was a beautiful story, Bard. i don't even know where to start or how to do it justice, so I'll just say that it's been a long time since I've read anything this touching.

I have to agree with CJ. They came off as so heroic, and that couldn't have been easy to do. I loved it and was so relieved that Charles used the dagger to cut them free instead of carrying out the murders.

Ha ha!! I loved it Graeme.

Beautiful story, Altimexis. I thought it was funny how David didn't even remember Jeremy at first, and when he finally did, he had to backpeddle because of the way he remembered him. So sweet

I know I'm all over the place with my opinions, but I know one thing: I have a real problem with any country executing people in the year 2007. I mean, we might have the lowest execution rate, but we're still doing it. We're talking about human beings having their lives ended. I don't think our lawmakers have really stopped to think about how huge of an issue this really is.

Thanks for this story, Luc. As always, you wrote a beautiful tale. This time it's love seemingy lost but found all over again. Thank God for the rain storm. Hopefully Kevin and Matthew are going to be able to continue to heal and Kevin's forgiveness makes them a stronger couple.

*sighs* So romantic, Ieshwar. I wonder what's in store for Nathan and David, knowing they live in different countires. Who's going to move, or will one of them move at all? Maybe they'll just have a Summer fling and move on. I hope not though

Yaalc, this story was so sweet. I loved how the angel was basically a screw up and had the same earthly flaws as the rest of us. Maybe a few more The beginning was hard to read, but the way you summed it all up was magical. Thanks

Well at least one of the people who wrote me to say they were done with the story wrote me back to say they stuck with it, which makes me feel better.

In all honesty, I think people who kill others because they were driving drunk should be eligible for the death penalty. I mean, if we're going to have it, then we should use it to punish all who kill in the most irresponsible and selfish manners. Just my opinion, though.

Wow, thanks Kevin. I can't even begin to tell you what reading that means to me. BTW, when the h*ll are you going to get moving on your story again?? :pickaxe:

Thanks for the feedback, Ieshwar When I sat down to write this story, it was supposed to be a Valentines Day thing, but for some reason i decided not to do that. Anyway, the feedback on this story has been pretty slow, so I just assumed that not too many people liked it. I guess if I had bothered to post something here, I might have gotten more comments back :pickaxe: :pickaxe: I'm really glad you saw things between Daryl and Tommy the way you did, because that's how I intended people to see it. I wanted Daryl to come off as self absorbed but sweet. It's not that he doesn't care about Tommy, it's that he wants his boyfriend to take the bold steps he did because he thinks it would be romantic. He never stops to think about the long range consequences. The most important point I was trying to drive home, though, is that Daryl doesn't have the perfect life at home. Just because he's out to his parents doesn't mean everything is sunny between them. But just because things aren't perfect doesn't mean they have to be screwed up, either. He's just a normal, everyday guy with normal everyday problems, and he's not perfect.

Wow...I don't even know what to say. I'm really honored that you all liked the story, and i can't tell you how much all this feedback means to me. Thank you all so much, and I promise to keep working hard to write stories you'll want to read. I'm trying to get away from sex in my stories. I mean in some stories, like Staking My Claim and My Jump Off, there's always going to be slutty, hot sex but I write stuff like that because it's fun. I wrote stories like TIAB because I want to do my best as a writer to give you guys good stories. I hope I was able to do that this time around. Thanks again for all the support.

I think Raymond and Mary are too stubborn and maybe a little ignorant to let themselves believe that second hand smoke made Raymond Jr. sick. In spite of all of the counseling, I think they still live in their own world. It's one where they might face a few truths, but other things can be swept under the rug because it's too painful for them to face or deal with.

I think it's kinda funny how once they started to face their problems, the sun started to come out for them. It kinda makes me wonder what would have been different for them if they'd have dealt with things differently way back when the affair happened. It wouldn't have changed anything for Raymond Jr., but what about Richard and Robert?

Yes Actually, the Moores live right across the street from Owen and Chris in The Log Way, and just around the corner from Leo and Ben Exactly!!

Thanks guys.