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  1. intune
    I like: Walk off the Earth's cover of And Pomplamoose covering and And First Aid Kit covering and for instrumental covers I like and There's lots of good stuff out there
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    Chapter Four

    intune commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Chapter Four

    Poor Jordan He's still really broken up, I thought he was a little more healed than that. I love the way the story is going... and I really like Shawn so far It was nice of him to save Jordan, but it also seems like there was a bit more to it than that. Hopefully Jordan will come to his senses and realize that. Although.. like with Trent and Carl it seems like Shawn might have some work to do if he wants to win Jordan over
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    I think dreams have a weird way of reflecting the subconscious things you pick up during the day. Maybe you vaguely heard it on the radio and weren't really paying attention.. and then your brain stored it away for later. The human mind is amazing
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    Thanks I'm kind of excited to have you read it since I love your work so much, I'd love to hear what you have to say/ any advice. Lucca has sort of reached the point where he can't even be around Matt, he likes him too much just to be 'friends.'
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    Thanks for the compliment. I tried to make the ending kinda obvious... but still vague. Tough balance, lol. To me, it is Lucca falling in love with Sam's voice, definitely. Germ definitely has something to say in the next chapter, so keep a lookout for it
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    Chapter 10: Plans

    intune commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 10: Plans

    haha no kidding should be involved, I do feel good about that Thank you for 'liking' my story and for commenting. Poor Matt had to go and put a damper on the whole chapter lol.
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    Definitely more frequent than they have been. I'm aiming for once a month- or more if I have time to squeeze one out. You are really good at guessing, I hope I'm able to surprise you a little bit in the upcoming chapters Thanks for the review!!
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    Chapter 3

    intune commented on Labrador's story chapter in Chapter 3

    "She’s... she’s... I don’t know what she is, but this isn’t normal.” " What is she?? o_O so curious
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    Hehe I guess I do have a thing for complicated romances. But isn't that what high school loves are like? I'm glad to see some support for team Sam He's really gonna have to try hard to win Lucca over Germ is generally a pretty happy guy though it's hard to tell with the crap he's going through. You've made me think that I might need to do an add-on story for him once this series is over
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    I guess your question is already answered, but yes Sam and Lucca end up meeting. That was one of my favorite scenes so far to write. I think they were both more than a little surprised to see each other that morning
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    I think Addie always has the best intentions at heart- even if her motives are a little confusing at times. She's especially protective of Lucca, I think they have a special friendship Thanks for the review.
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    Hehe I guess since it's my story and I know what is going to happen I don't have any trouble figuring it out. All the characters will have to have awakening moments eventually. But hopefully as the story goes on it all makes sense I loveeee your reviews, they make me happy so thank you.
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    Yes, It's Germ He keeps showing up because honestly I love him too haha. Maybe that's why other people seem to like him. Glad to keep the mystery alive for as long as possible
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    You are so right on in your guesses. I'm very impressed. The chapter I'm working on now has more Jeremy so he'll be an important part of the whole story Thanks for the review!!
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    Chapter 2

    intune commented on Labrador's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I'm really curious to see where you're going to take this I'm not sure what Jo is yet... but it sounds supernatural and I'm dying to find out. Great start
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    Yay, I'm glad you decided to stick with the story Thanks for the review! I've only been to Philadelphia once, but it seemed like a neat place. I'm glad you liked the mention though. You might be on to something with Jeremy and Matt, but you'll have to wait to find out the real story there Lucca unfortunately has a lot of stuff to overcome in the story- it's only the beginning of his healing. I'm glad you connected to the characters, it's nice to hear.
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    Chapter 2: Moving On

    intune commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 2: Moving On

    Lucca will be back, not to worry He gets every other chapter I'm glad you could get into Sam's side of things too. Jeremy is a sweetheart, I have a soft spot for him too. He'll show up in the story quite a bit.
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    Wow, *blush*. Thanks you so much for your comment I'll try to live up to it in my next few chapters.
  19. intune
    Art There are so many things I like. I'm also a big Jenny Saville fan, and I like Lucian Freud (although who doesn't ). I really like impressionist work (Monet, Manet, Renoir, etc) , but I'm also a pretty big fan of abstract expressionism (mostly Rothko). More contemporary, I like: Felix Gonzalez-Torres Moyra Davey David Hilliard Sophie Calle There's a lot more but that's what I thought of right away
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    hehe Okay, i'll have to get to work..
  21. intune
    Thanks for the review I'm glad I've managed to capture your attention.
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    Thank you so much for the review I know I'm sort of a slow writer, but I'm glad you feel like the chapters are worth waiting for. The characters are a lot of fun, I've grown to like them all too- and they all have plenty of excitement ahead of them.
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    Thanks for taking the time to review It's always nice to know someone's enjoying the story. I honestly wish I had more free time to work on it, but my life is pretty busy and this story is like a fun hobby for me. I'm glad you can relate to the characters, I've tried to make them feel like real people. Matt's sort of a mystery for now... but rest assured he'll get his time to shine
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    I have to say, I absolutely love your reviews Lucca's been through a lot, but I think he's stronger because of it. Addie is pretty great, she's one of my favorite characters and she's based on qualities from my own friends. I think you're right about the closure thing. Although I'm sure it won't be pretty when it happens Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you liked the chapter! I'll get started on the new one soon.
  25. intune
    methodwriter85, I just saw Graffiti6 in concert.. they were amazing They were opening for Eric Hutchinson and they're about to start their own tour
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