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  1. Jwolf

    Tailgate

    Have I said how much I adore your reviews?? Love them! I totally understand the waiting business. I used to follow a web soap (go figure were I earned to write) and I would only read the day before it released so I wouldn't drive myself crazy... I'm glad you see the tension and the attraction between these two... I wnt spoil anything but there is a development in the next chapter that I think changes things... We'll see. As for lee, too good to be true, huh? The charm wears thin, I'll tell you, but don't underestimate a guy with a plan. I know corbs can be a "bitch" at times, but I think it would be a disservice to the story and character not to show his ambitious side. He's a force, but at what cost? That'll be a theme throughout. Until next week... Or next Tuesday... Whichever...
  2. Jwolf

    Somebody Status

    Haha. So glad you're I to this story! It'll be a fun ride, I hope. And Pete... Well Pete... He is a tall drink, isn't he? Will Corbin get him? We shall see...
  3. Hey! I see you're hopping down my list of works... I love it. I'd have to retread portions of this story to tell you for sure, but I'm not sure if Tyler's wife had a gun. I think he just went on a rampage. I could be wrong on the details, but you're totally right. A messed up tale all around.
  4. Wow. I'm so glad you enjoyed the ride! You've forced me to take a fresh look at the stories and connect with your reactions, which was great. I totally agree with your assessment. If you can bear a serial story, I'm writing one called the English Year that deals with certain themes. I'd love to see how you react to that work. Thanks again
  5. When did cooper ever do the smart thing...? Exactly. Lol.youre almost done!
  6. Hey! I'm so glad this story elicited such a strong response from you! That's the point isn't it? I'm just really humbled at how into the story you've got. And in all honesty, I might have cried a time or two writining this chapter it was even tough to retread while I follow your responses. On to the next.
  7. Your reviews are so fantastic, well thought,many well written, I feel bad zooming through my response during lunch. I agree with you on Britney... She may have taken her protective friend role to the extreme. You're right in that Kyle has been there from the start, and he and coop have a special bond, and I think I had the most fun with this story deciding how that bind would translate. Yes, I think throwing them together would have been too easy, so keep reading on to see... I hope I picked an honest, entertaining way to translate that one.
  8. Jwolf

    Tailgate

    Thanks for the review, Joann! I can understand how these two are frustrating! Lol... More of their tension to come. I think your spot on in that no one knows what the other wants or expects... I thinking that'll change relatively soon. More to come.
  9. Jwolf

    Tailgate

    Anticipating a lee smack down? I wonder why that is... Lol. I guess I have painted Corbin to be somewhat... Botchy. Expect it to be fun. As for the guys, that's how they were. Once they got over their initial apprehension of having a gay frat brother, they put their two cents in and really had fun with it. More soon and thanks for the review
  10. Jwolf

    Tailgate

    Hey Carrie! You do not need to troll the Internet to bide time to review! Your review was great by the way. I know these two can be frustrating, but such is life... Maybe next time theyll get their chance, maybe not.
  11. Jwolf

    Tailgate

    Chapter 7 Tailgate There is a longstanding tradition of tailgating at pretty much any school south of the Mason Dixon line with a football team worth its salt. At Old Dominion, that tradition was somewhat convoluted, simply because our football team sucked… badly. Every home game, the students of Old Dominion woke up no later than nine. The girls donned their latest sun dresses and derby hats while the guys buttoned up their khakis or seersucker
  12. Your Team Kyle shirt survived this long? Man, you really hoping against hope. You'll have to continue on to see what happens, I suppose. Until then...
  13. Have i mentioned that I enjoy tracking your reactions as you read this story? You're always so astute. With that sad, I've said time and time again that this whole thing is a journey. At this stage of the story, I think it's appropriate to have hope in Kyle and Coop... but know that Chase has always been a powerful force in Cooper's life... with that. On to the next, I hope...
  14. Another thought provoking review! Where we're you when. Was writing the story I like the drug analogy.. I couldn't have put it better
  15. Wow. You're forcing me to scan this story with fresh eyes... A year later. I love the strong response here. This was a tough story for me to write,and I'm glad you're sticking with it
  16. Jwolf

    Prologue

    Lol! Here we go... If you hated cooper before...
  17. Jwolf

    Chapter 20: Avery

    Shall I order you a team Kyle shirt? I think you need one. I look forward to seeing how you like the next couple of chapters...
  18. Jwolf

    Chapter 19: John Doe

    Hey! The sigma subplot was always supposed to be this shady through line for the story. One thing that even Kyle's biggest fans have noticed is how desperately he wants to be in. You're totally right about him idolizing his older brother, coupled with the fact that he's younger, smaller, and the gay one of a successful, political family. That's got to give a guy issues... I'll say that Kyle is one of those guys that does what it takes. He's the thinker while coop is more of the impulsive one. With those two, there's no easy answer. Anyway, enough of my second novel... Keep those wheels a-turning.
  19. Jwolf

    Chapter 18: Chase

    So this is definitely the emotional apex of the story. I totally agree that coop has a lot growing to do, morally and emotionally. I'll confess, it doesn't all happen in this story, but he does make strides. You'll see... I hope you're still enjoying the read.
  20. Jwolf

    Chapter 16: Bryan

    Keep reading, sir. There's a lot mir journey to come.
  21. Jwolf

    Chapter 14: Dalton

    Lol. Forced romance?. Romantic... I think. You're better than some of the folks who threatened to pull out hovels, knives, etc... I'm digging the passion though
  22. Jwolf

    Chapter 13: Riley

    Hey! I don't mean to manipulate your emotions... I've always alluded to the fact that Kyle might have secrets. The fun thing about this story is that there is no ne perfect person and no one wrong person. Morality, to me, is always fluid. And also..., you don't have to sit to resolve that cliffhanger...
  23. Happy birthday, sir!
  24. Jwolf

    Chapter 11: Ethan

    I guess I did write coop pretty frustrating, didn't I? I'd say it's a characteristic of my work... Lead characters that dont always do the right thing. Still, it sounds like youre investing in our little journey.. Am I right?
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