Wow. What an amazing review. Thanks so much, Louis! I'm humbled by your reaction and great encouraging words. I'm glad that THE moment did all of the build up justice. I know there are going to be differing opinions on the events that take place next, and I'm excited to see what you think! Let's schedule that talk about relationships, sir... I'm ready when you are! Thanks again!
Carrie! Thanks for the review and the awesome compliments. Yeah, this triangle continues to be filled with complicated feelings, and I'm glad I'm doing a good job of expressing those. I've always tried to write in a vivid way, and I'd be thrilled if anyone had a connection at Showtime! Let's turn this puppy into a TV Show!! JK! But that has always been my style of writing. I'm glad you dig it. Thanks again, I always appreciate your comments and thoughts.
Wow, what a great compliment! Thank so much! That's one of the perks of writing in first person- you definitely get to understand what the character is feeling. I'm glad I'm doing so successfully. More to come soon
Thanks for the review, Tim! I think Corbin basically laid it all out there, even if he didn't exactly say the words. This little triangle has a lot of story left, and I'm so glad you're invested (I'm assuming you're on the Team Mike side of things). More to come next week! I look forward to reading your thoughts.
The Mike and Corbin dynamic has always been interesting to me. I'm excited to see what everyone thinks as that particular relationship unfolds moving forward. Thanks so much for your review and your thoughts! Much appreciated.
Thanks for the review, Cole. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I really do look forward to hearing your thoughts as the tale continues. And congrats on being the newest Promising Author!
Hi G! Thanks so much for the review. This story is autobiographical. Everything actually did happen, and the characters involved did survive to retell it, so that's good, I guess! I'm glad you're enjoying the journey so far. More to come!
Hey folks! This is a pivotal chapter in our story, and I'm hoping it's one that everyone enjoys! Find the chapter here, and please feel free to let me know what you think!
That night, like most things involving Cadet Michael Taylor Loggerman, started off promising, and then quickly devolved into a heaping shitstorm that I could have very easily avoided.
Because I still felt guilty about lying to Pete about my plans for the evening, I called Hutch and Brian to come into my room to get dressed for the cocktail party so that I could get a little bit of clarity from them.
“First of all, don’t wear the denim shirt. It makes you look li
The reason I waited so long to comment on this review is because you predicted a couple of things correctly, and I didn't want to put up any spoilers too early on... but since I'm posting later on this evening, I thought I'd tell you that you're right... Corbin's lie does come back to bite him... but how? We'll see! Glad you like Mike! He's always been an interesting character for me to write...Thanks again for the review! Domdick is definitely something I'm going to steal!
I'm glad that Corbin doesn't have a violent streak, period. Can you imagine how many people he would have punched by now?!? I'm glad the Mike fans are making their way out of the shadows... your review kind of reminds me of the Malificent trailer. "If I come out...It's you who will be afraid." Thanks for the review! I can't wait to hear your thoughts next week
Good to see we have some mike fans in the house. His involvement to the story remains, hopefully, Interesting. I look for to seeing how you react to the next few chapters
Thanks for that major compliment, fox. I'm glad you enjoy my writing. Looks like you can relate in part to falling for straight guy. I won't be monetizing an time soon, so just keep reading! More to come
Thanks for the review! I don't want to give away too many hints for upcoming chapters, but you're right about a couple of your intuitions. Hope to you hear what you think next week!
I'm glad the frat stuff resonates with you. At his core, Corbin is really just doing what he thinks is right for him and his house. If you like Mike, you'll love the next chapter... can't wait to hear what you think!
Hey folks! The next chapter is up! I hope everyone had a great long week. As always, I look forward to hearing your thoughts and comments on this chapter. Find it here, and let me know what you think!
There was no denying that I had been through a lot in the last couple of days, and in dealing with all that I’d been through, there were several different roads I could have taken to help me cope.
I could have called one of my best friends, who’d talked me through different pivotal moments in my college years before. Amanda would have come over in a heartbeat and given me some much needed advice. She also would have editorialized her advice with commentary on just how cruel I’d
Thanks for the review mr coastguard. There's always some risk in starting a work in progress, but I'm glad you did. Seeing as to this story is based on actual events, I know exactly where it's all headed. Putting paper to pen takes some time, but I don't anticipate any more super long breaks. Thanks for reading! I look forward to your comments moving forward
Wow, Louis, that's quite the compliment! I'll chalk it up to you missing me... Absence makes the heart grow fonder, maybe? Still, thanks so much! I appreciate the overwhelming amount of support you all have given me.