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Thanks again for writing this story. I hope you are successful in finding your modern day Zack.

Been away for a while and just saw this was up. Thanks for the update; I always enjoy catching up with Zack and Weedge. I'll be interested to see where it goes from here. Have you found this kind of relationship in your real life?

Another good chapter. Once every 5-6 weeks with occasional milking seems right. It’ll be interesting to see them interacting with another M/s couple.

So will Weedge ever get to take the cage off or have a real orgasm again? I suppose time will tell. Thanks for a new chapter so quickly!

An interesting twist. Of course orgasm control is a natural part of an M/s relationship. Thank you for continuing to give us a window into Zack and Weedge’s life.

Interesting twist. We’ll have to see how it goes.

Hoping to get the next chapter soon. This story inspired me to be more active in seeking out what I want. This past Sunday I gave both keys to my cage to my dom knowing I wouldn't see him again until this Friday. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I like how real it got - the interaction between Weedge and Zac feels very natural. Dealing with long term chastity is a journey… dang I need to find a key holder…

At first, yes, but after a while, it gets easier. The longest I've ever gone is 35 days but I had welts, so I won't be trying that again. Typically 10-14 days at a time now.

I'm loving this story. As someone who has been playing with chastity for a bit now, I can attest to how much it helps put one in a submissive headspace.

Just got to this point in the story.... will there be an update?

This has been a wild ride; thank you for sharing it with us. I'll miss Eric, Andy, Adam and Rob, but I know they're living their best lives.

Reading science fiction stories always requires that I suspend my disbelief with respect to the technology required for FTL travel. If humans can do that (wormholes, warp drive, higher dimensions, etc.), then certainly they can place a biological (and therefore not picked up by a scan) tracker in Essell that uses quantum entanglement to somehow give searchers a direction to go.

One thing I've been wondering about since the beginning: by some quirk of cosmic transcendence, the spirit or essence of members of a long hidden race from across the galaxy became manifest in Shay, a sick boy from Earth, and also Mira and Ella, who we presume (but don't know for sure) are natives of Lucerne. Okay, I'm fine with that. The fact that the "measurement" of that essence is what caused the researchers to invite Shay to Lucerne to begin with is a reasonable place for this story to begin. And I'm fine with Mira and Ella likewise. When Shay awakes, and is captured, then escapes, confronts the Sharpelings and manages to knock one out with the aqumi, I'm fine with that too. And I'm fine with Shay's power transforming a Sharpeling back to human form. My question is what are the chances that that particular Sharpeling happened to have once been Mira (or whatever his human name had been)? Are we supposed to assume it was just divine providence? Or did Shay's power summon Mira's essence from beyond the Veil to inhabit that Sharpeling body? Anyway, the fact that I can think so deeply about this means I'm fully invested. What is the Lucid Truth of the Hidden Sunlight from beyond the Veil of Shadows? I can't wait to find out. Great chapter!

And now the curtain has risen on the final act. I can’t wait to see how it works out!