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  1. xleroc

    Chapter 8

    You could always pay Dabeagle a fiver to download the entire story from his website. That was a no brainer for me
  2. xleroc

    Chapter 36

    I feel like we're getting close to a big change in Zach's life.
  3. xleroc

    Chapter 35

    It’s been nearly 20 years since this story began. I know it’s semi-autobiographical and so therefore hard to write, but I am heartened by the move towards a conclusion. I was 28 and in the closet when the first chapter was posted on Nifty. I’ve now been married for 12 years and have been an adoptive parent for 5. I echo some of the comments about Zach’s mom. Teachers are mandatory reporters. Hopefully some good will come out of his paper.
  4. Although I read this story years ago, a recent note by the author compelled me to leave this review, so here goes. Content on GA, like most human endeavors, follows a Pareto distribution: only 20% of it is worth reading at all, only 20% of that is any good any only 20% of that is truly art. Hidden Sunlight falls into that last category. This book isn’t a great story by GA standards - it’s a great story by any standards. It ought to be published and read widely. From the first chapter until the nail-biting conclusion, the adventures of Shay and those he meets on Aspira draw you
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    Fireworks Suite

    Awww. Are we going to get some romance in time for Christmas? I’m recalling another story a couple of years ago
  6. xleroc

    Cold Hell

    Colony 12 was from the original story, but you said in the last chapter that there are only 3 colonies in this story?
  7. xleroc


    OK, when I saw this in the story feed, my first reaction was: "Finally, the promised sequel!" So I went and re-read Planet Redemption. Then I opened this story waiting to find out what happened to Ruiz and Danni... only to see that it's a re-write. Fair enough. I will suspend my disappointment and try to erase my memory to enjoy this new telling. Go Danni!
  8. I had a similar reaction to Simon. I didn't like it at all. I just got angry as I watched the film. I kept waiting for something redeeming, something more than the "life sucks, then you die" vibe that permeated it... that plus the idea that you can have anal sex with a virgin with no lube without screams took me out of my suspension of disbelief.
  9. xleroc

    Chapter 62

    I can't help wondering if access to the sensor logs won't lead to a revelation of the other Demishou...
  10. Happy Birthday!

    1. xleroc


      Thank you!

  11. xleroc

    Chapter 2

    The plot thickens. We've gotten some of the backstory; there's a nice tension building. Keep it coming!
  12. xleroc

    Chapter 1

    A good start to the story. Nice worldbuilding. Looking forward to seeing what's next.
  13. xleroc

    Golden Child

    What a ride! I must admit, though, I'm finding it hard to believe it can all be wrapped up in one chapter. I can't wait to see how it ends.
  14. xleroc

    Chapter 28

    2 chapters in less than one year! Seriously, Comsie, you've outdone yourself! I remember reading the first 6ish chapters on Nifty about 15 years ago... it's got to be a tough story to write.
  15. Happy Birthday!

    1. xleroc


      Thank you!

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