RobV

Yes! I can already tell I'm going to love everything about this. Your stories are the best.

Just finished TJ Klune's Wolfsong which was pretty amazing, about to start the sequel Ravensong. GA really got me into shifter stories.

Probably the best chapter yet. They're both so frustrating yet so endearing. I love it. Hopefully Donovan's epiphany will help them find their way back to each other.

Just caught up with this. I guess I'm in the minority but I really like the dark turn this story has taken with Nick going off the rails like that. I mean, this is a kid who was raised by his sister, watched his mother attempt suicide and was raped. Few come out of that unscathed and mentally well. Looking forward to the rest, I hope you'll be able to finish it.

Loving this so far! I think it's a great idea to dive deeper into Lance's history. He's so fascinating. Even though I want to read more about him and Diego, this is a great alternative.

Ha the kids are amazing. Love both of these guys and rooting for them to get their happily ever after.

LOL the moment he started thinking about Kels I was like "wait, what if that is actually Shane?" You did not let me down. Glad Donovan stood his ground and didn't get sucked back in. It's gonna take something much bigger for them to get back together. Another lovely chapter.

Love all the drama. I don't think Shane is beyond redemption. We just need to know why he's so insecure and carrying around all this internalized homophobia. Excellent chapter!

That was brilliant. Wow! Incredible storytelling. I sympathize with Sean, everything in his life is a mess. I'm glad everything's out in the open now. Diego and Lance growing closer is a beautiful thing. Love the video of their entrance

Another fantastic chapter! I love these characters so much. Hopefully they all survive this.

Well done Shane. You have more than made up for your past behavior, now it's time for Donovan to step up. Loving it!

Aww poor Diego. That's cute that he was trying to be protective. Of course it backfired spectacularly. He and Sean need to come clean with their partners though, it's full blown cheating at this point, especially Sean whose relationship seems more serious. Absolutely love that song and album by Marina, great choice for Lance!

I love this story so much, I get so excited when you post a new chapter. This might be my favorite one yet.

Really enjoyable chapter. They really do feel like a family. Glad they've decided to fight back against Margaret. The vandalism and death threat is a twist I didn't expect, hope Diego and his kids will be okay..

So we're only a quarter into the story? Wow, so much to look forward to. I don't have any suggestions, you're a fantastic writer. Just keep doing what you're doing!