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Definitely a happy and satisfying ending! I think my only criticism is that both Cole and Dale are too perfect. Both very smart guys, both very good looking, both very athletic... although Dale had to transform a bit for the last two. It makes sense for the story, but I think it was a bit too much, especially cause they're high school aged. I was hoping one of them would at least display some kind of major character flaw before the end, but no. Still, nothing wrong with a great feel good story! Especially one where a cure for AIDS exists.
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Gosh I just "wasted" nearly a whole day at work reading this story. I love everything about it! Can't wait to read more!
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Wow, I never expected Julie to be one of the bad guys. Makes me want to go back to the beginning and see if I missed anything. Nice twist! This is getting really exciting. Also congratulations for reaching one million words!
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Nice chapter, if a bit uneventful. And would the FBI really be that incompetent that they wouldn't look up the name Bruja? This was probably the last of the sightseeing, so I expect an awesome ride to the finish, even if the chapters are every other week. Enjoy your travels!
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Awesome first chapter!! I had a stupid grin on my face from start to finish. More please!
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Lovely chapter, much better pace! Glad Shane got to reunite with his friends and family before his untimely demise (because knowing you, we can soon add double digits to the body count). Did notice this error:
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Please no hiatus now! I'm so ready for the story's epic conclusion! I think your subconscious desire to get to a million words might have hurt the story a bit. I probably commented on this before, but Trevor's been in Australia for 80 chapters now, and I don't think I can take any more of his travel logs. I always pay much more attention when any of the other characters are in the picture, because then it means the story is actually moving. But the slow pace of Circumnavigation is also one of its charms, and it makes the action more exciting, when it does happen. So I can't wait for Bridget to make her final move. Don't be discouraged and keep writing! We all love the story and you.
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Damn, I thought since the chapter was so long it would take some time to get through it, but you write so gorgeously. Again the end of the chapter came way too soon. This is probably my favorite chapter so far, so full of action, romance, drama and revelations. And a cliffhanger as well. Probably the best story I've ever read on GA, can't wait for more.
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Just started this one and didn't stop until I was done catching up! Absolutely love it so far! Evil cliffhanger too... glad a new chapter is coming soon
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This story keeps getting more and more awesome. It's one of those stories that is so well written and plotted that you can imagine it as a TV series or movie. I've become very engrossed and am always excited when a new chapter is posted. Keep up the great work!
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Circumnavigation (99+28) Operation Mincemeat
RobV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Another great chapter. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds. So weird that we're close to the end, it seems like it could still go on for dozens of chapters. Minor pet peeve: the country's name is Colombia, not Columbia -
Thanks! Somehow it's easier for me to write stories in English than in my native Dutch.
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Indeed, all of us are under pressure, some more than others. Fortunately Tiziano has not needed his plan B, he's still doing very well with his own music. Thanks for reading!
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He is indeed handsome! But it's his voice and music that amaze me more, especially the way both have evolved from the beginning of his career up until now. Unfortunately the language barrier turns off a lot of people, it's tough to even get them to listen! Thanks for the compliments, glad you enjoyed it.
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It's easy to pass quick judgment, but I don't believe there are many people who are purely evil or who have truly bad intentions. While I am less forgiving of infidelity than I am of suicide, I think understanding why people do what they do is more important and more interesting than simply saying it is wrong. Thanks for your review!
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review!
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Closeted celebrities and their reasons for staying closeted, the lives they lead, it's always been very fascinating to me. People tend to call them selfish, or not caring about LGBT rights, when it's really not that simple. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Thanks! I do have some ideas for stories, hope I can find the motivation to turn them into something tangible.
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Yeah, both Ricky Martin and Tiziano Ferro (the singer this story is based on) came out in 2010. Obviously Ricky is more known, especially on a global scale, so his coming-out made more of an impact. Glad you liked it!
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Circumnavigation (99+26) Final Maneuvers
RobV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
I'm so tired of Trevor and Shane. Not much chemistry or depth, they bore me to tears! It's safe to say that I now love Bridget and Billy way more than any of the other characters, and I want them to be victorious in the end. -
Wow, what a way to start a story. You did a great job roping me in. Absolutely love the setting and the characters. Looking forward to reading more!
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I shifted uncomfortably in my chair, eyeing the reporter as she leafed through her stack of papers, no doubt the result of many hours of labor, investigating my career and my life. Interviews made me nervous, even well-planned, predictable and superficial ones like these. My publicist had informed this reporter of the topics that would be strictly off limits, but when you have monsters in your closet, doing an interview is impossible without sometimes bending the truth. I'd always preferred not
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A few defining moments and choices in the life of a successful pop star.
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Wait was that "ghosts" tag always there? Cause this story just took a very unexpected turn for me! And I quite like it. Keep it up!
