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  1. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Poor Hoover. I am glad to see he got the final word in. Horrible little tale, but just perfect for Halloween. Nice job!
  2. It won't be easy to read and comment from my phone but I shall begin reading tonight!
  3. “Why does Aunt Karen have to have the damn family get together all the way out in the middle of nowhere? I mean aren’t the Prosperos worth a damn hotel dining room?” It was the sixth time he had asked me that question in last half hour. “Bud, if I knew don’t you think I would have told you by now. You know you could have driven yourself or stayed home!” “Don’t get all pissy, Sis. I mean you know as well as I do that every time one of these family events happen everyone seems to have a run of
  4. Joanne had just finished reading the old science fiction story for school. Now she sat silently waiting for the clock to strike five before standing and moving as quietly as possible to her bedroom door. Dinner would be served to the family shortly and she was afraid to get there too early or even worse too late. She moved quickly down the hallway and then looked at the wooden staircase and shuttered. Click, click, click. The sound of her shoes on the wooden steps were hurried, but like the clo
  5. comicfan

    Amber Prince

    Thank you Bill. Yes, nothing is as bad as being only in love with yourself. You miss so much else that is happening and the chances to make your life better. Your kind review is greatly appreciated.
  6. comicfan

    Amber Prince

    Thank you for the kind words KC. Your suggestions as you can see were taken to heart and made this story so much better for it. I don't know if I would have survived living at that time but I do so enjoy being a story teller.
  7. comicfan

    Amber Prince

    Thank you for the comment Asamvav. Meeke was an addition toward the end of my tale, but you are the first to express a desire for more of him. I might try to expand this sort of story next time. Glad you enjoyed it.
  8. comicfan

    Prompt #166

    See what happens when you are all drugged up! You have weird alien dreams. Great little tale.
  9. Life, no matter how much you might want it, can not be managed. Things sneak up and happen. Dad has his capsulscopy next Wednesday. It is making him crazy and guess who the target is? I have no internet until I can afford mifi. It might take a week or so but I will be back. In the meantime I am getting things done as I can. My greatest thanks to KC for picking up the slack I had to leave with with one of my authors by filling in and doing the beta reading. My thanks know no bounds. Also a great big thank you to KC for his work on my Anthology. That extends to Sharon who offered to edit for me. Unfortunately I couldn't do much with it once I lost the internet. A copy had been sent to Renee who did another beta and to Cia by her for an edit. My thanks to all of these wonderful people. Wayne PS - to those whose addresses I have expect post cards, lots of them. I'm bored since I don't have an internet to play on but I'm also writing jonas and the special anthology. Oh well.
  10. Happy Birthday, whether you decide to celebrate or not.
  11. When your whole life is ruled by a phrophecy things get messy. When you are a prince and your kingdom is in turmoil all you can do is what is fortold.
  12. comicfan

    Amber Prince

    And it will come to pass that son shall be born to the royal family One who can unite all the kingdoms and shine above all others Who shall have a special friend who will betray him Yet the one who should be his enemy shall save him and they will become stronger Though a betrayal of his heart should doom him, instead it shall free them all Till that time comes he shall be frozen in amber by his former friend’s magic And he will be freed by mistake by his enemy turned lover. -Macia I kno
  13. Are they flying monkeys?
  14. Joann - That was perhaps the sweetest thing I've heard in a while. I know you made her day and the smile on the kids' faces had to make you feel better. Sometimes it is the littlest things you can do that will make someone else feel wonderful. Glad to know there are people like you still around.
  15. Very good Xtro. All yours.
  16. Would fair before or after you slaughtered the sheep?
  17. People are learning really nicely. LEARN
  18. Yonkers (NY, USA)
  19. Often Freddy farts, everyone runs. BABAR
  20. If you are lucky I have maybe three drinks a year. I am not a beer drinker. Drinks of choice are usually mixed drinks. Fuzzy Navel - Peach Schnapps, vodka, and orange juice Mimosa - Orange juice and champange Rum and Coke Mudslide - Kahlua, Chocolate syrup around the inside of the glass, and a scoop of vanilla ice cream, Bailey's Irish Cream, and vodka I prefer blush wines or fruit wines used for dessert wines such a peaches.
  21. I shouldn't have said it, but the word slipped out of my mouth as easy as air. It wasn't exactly the kind of word any well-behaved student would use, which sort of explained why I had just used it. And it certainly isn't the most elegant way to start off a story, but it honestly represents what I was feeling. Besides, I could have said something a lot stronger.
  22. comicfan

    Prompt 151

    Well you took that prompt and ran with it. Yes that is so much darker than the original was. First there is the pain of losing your partner. A pain that has to hurt so much, but to have it compounded by knowing that because you got him back, you lost him and then one of your children. That has to rip your heart and soul apart. Good story though Cyn. Dark as hell though.
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