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comicfan

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  1. So James is now freed from hiding his true self from the world. Wonder what new problems are about to happen. Who shot James' father? Well you do keep things moving.
  2. Dream knew he was overdue for a visit. It was usually Death who showed up unannounced into his world but the time had come for him to return the favor. He looked over the richness of his dream world and sighed. “I’ll be back. I mean it isn’t like I am really leaving you anyway.” Dream prepared to take his walk when the puppy came romping across the plush grass and sat at his feet. He looked down at the little bundle of fur and reached down to pet him. “Go play boy. Your squirrels and to
  3. Isn't it the way though. We see the person who is most scared when something happens to us and prattle off something totally off topic. Glad you liked it Frosty.
  4. I thought it would work well. Simple joys.
  5. I always find if i leave enough to the imagination people paint a much better picture than if I have to spell it all out. You add the elements that make her a beauty.
  6. Lee is one of those people that once you met her you simply wanted her in your life.
  7. I'm glad you liked it Frosty. This is one I wasn't sure people would respond to. Nice to finally have someone's take on it.
  8. comicfan

    Rainy Day

    The rain was falling heavy as I sat curled up on my bed. It had been a while since I had taken time to just enjoy myself. The fact that rain was falling was my excuse to put all my chores off. Instead of taking the time to wash the kitchen floor, do the dishes, wash more laundry, or even start up a few different meals for the week I decided on me time instead. “The damn dishes will still be waiting for me after the book,” I said to no one. It was more of me explaining to mysel
  9. Hmm. According to the Chinese Zodiac I am Cock. According to the Zodiac I am a Centaur. According to the Quiz - You are a Bear! (your score: 23) Characters: Arcas, Skaris, Torin, Eneas, and Ladek in the Aspect of Crow trilogy; Darien in "The Wild's Call" Powers: Fighting ability—strength and speed—along with powers of strategic thinking You're #1! At least, you're happiest when in charge. You lead with courage, integrity, and compassion. People gravitate to your confidence and charisma, and they feel safe in your care. But be careful not to believe your own hype—stubborn pride is every Bear's downfall. Best matches: Wolverines, Horses, Wolves Watch out for: Foxes, Crows, Spiders which isn't bad either. However if I am going to pick an animal to be for a day I do like the idea of being a giraffe. Just something about their beauty and height.
  10. In Charlie's world nothing is every easy. However, things do work out eventually it seems.
  11. Glad it is all believable and enjoyable. Charlie's story has been a great pleasure to write. I will be sorry when his tale is told.
  12. Well glad you enjoyed it. I just felt people needed to see what Scott was thinking and feeling. I didn't want to get heavy handed or anything but let you see who two people see the same event and what each was thinking. Was sort of fun.
  13. Oh all of the stuff happening in the background with Barbara comes out eventually. Just wait and see.
  14. Barbara is a mover and a shaker. Just hang in there.
  15. I've been told I am good a cliff hangers. I just see it as how life happens. Enjoy
  16. Barbara seems to be many people's favorite character. Glad she is so popular.
  17. Thank you. I didn't want this to just be a cartoon or the characters to be cardboard cut outs. I hope you are enjoying them and that they live for you.
  18. Well Tina and Charlie might end up breaking up but she wouldn't just fade from his life. The buckle is really good.
  19. I had some problem at first going from what my editor uses and my program for writing. I have to go back and reformat a lot of it yet. Sorry it was distracting.
  20. Everyone seems to have the same idea. Poor Charlie.
  21. Wow. You are the first person not to like Charlie at the start. Glad for a different view on things. Tina isn't such a bad person but you will see that.
  22. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    What can I tell you Dark. I have a twisted little mind. I'll have to go back and see about working on the dialog. Thanks for commenting.
  23. KC, Glad you got something out of it. Enjoy and post them. Give me ideas of what it is like elsewhere. lol
  24. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Well just thought with the cats you might like it. Didn't expect you to cry. Glad you liked it though.
  25. comicfan

    Story

    You wove a very nice story here Frosty. A dream? I wonder. You brought it to life so we could all experience the touch of young love, the forbidden sneaking out, the hurt, the tenderness, and sudden ending. Trent was gone before the time they could express it all made it that much more heart rending. Nicely done even if it isn't the happy ending we all wish for.
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