comicfan

Deer ran ever after meekly. AFTER

eras

Thank you Joann. I never know where any story idea will take me. However most of my stories seem to find an audience that enjoys them, for which I am grateful. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Thank you Billy. I enjoy being able to twist these topics into my own sort of tale. Glad you enjoyed it and that you commented.

urinate

Albany (ny. UsA)

Wendy is very excited, Sammy. WOWSE

Does it match your leather pants?

well that is the sort of cross town enemy everyone can enjoy. Interesting use of the anthology.

For someone who says they are so unlucky you seem to have found some wonderfully lucky things. The story is as uplifting and beautiful as the man who wrote it. May you both have many more years and rides on the merry go round KC.

really interesting gadgets in drawers. Gadge

psoriasis

Deer Park (ny. Usa)

Have you seen my jacket?

Who said I was handsome?

allies

austin (texas, usa)

I was sitting with my mother and grandmother and both were telling me that they loved me dearly but i was an idiot and had to stop pushing people away. Considering both women are dead and knew it in the dream made it all the more surreal. What is the one thing you wish would happen for one of your close friends?

Move over, Vinnny! I exclaimed. FLOWS

The outcasts of two nations that are normally at war have fallen for one another. Leaders, soldiers, and men who know how to fight, but still are ruled by their pride and desires. For as many dichotomies you have given these two men they are still so human and drawn to one another. Nice job.

You wrapped up so many loose threads in this story. It was dark and gritty, but you really showed was a man fighting for his his own soul. I am glad Noah survived. This really was well done.

well i was surprised to find they were fifteen and even more at how calmly their parents took it. The sounds of the bed giving them away had me laughing but wouldn't want to be that age again for anything. Nice job Mike.

This was a beautiful story. I have never read about an event like this. You brought the country to life and the close relationnship between the friends made me long to be there as a witness. Very well done.

Wow. What the hell? I am with Rosie. Your story was beautifully crafted. Having taught junior high I have met students that fit into all of the ones you introduced, alright crazy girl is the exception but her vain rule the school persona is easy enough to find. Being uncomfortable or disliking the characters is easy, but you just don't create the cardboard bad girl or superficial good boy. You flesh her out and let us see she truely is crazy, not just evil. Gib is shown, burnt, battered, and barely breathing, but you show he is a fighter who has a heart bigger than one would believe who does the right thing even when it might be better for him not to. I never have a problem with anyone not liking a story, but to attack a story so viciously is really uncalled for. The story might not have gone as they would have liked but life rarely works out as we would like it either. If they didn't like this one well move on, because there are other readers and authors who did.

Yettie, bite your tongue! Another one hundred chapters or so! Good grief. I always enjoy weavig a good tale. The short story is an under appreciated form. As for the story telling, well aren't we all children? Glad you enjoyed it.