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  1. comicfan
    Not so much the pause button. Just wanted you to see Charlie does have an interest in seeing Scott. He could have gotten out of it easily. Just realize that Scott and Charlie are having dinner next chapter.
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    Chapter 1

    comicfan commented on Prince Duchess's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Sounds like your city is one of a kind. Never been through or seen it. You made it clear that it isn't like DC or other cities. The music is yours, the dance styles too. I liked it. Sort of raw.
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    Glad you are enjoying it all.
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    Um, they aren't getting smaller. Averages out to about the same there, Frosty. But I had a lot to rearrange to get the evening right so hope you didn't mind.
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    Chapter 13 – Getting Through the Day Charlie’s whole day was off. After his meeting with Scott he couldn’t help but think about the fact that he was meeting the man for dinner and that made him nervous. Charlie was used to controlling when he did things, and how, but ever since the accident his routines had been thrown out the window. The class came in all smiles and they were happy to know their day was going to be interrupted. It wasn’t that they didn’t like Charlie a
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    Chapter 1

    comicfan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Well most of us bleed a bit into our writing. Some is just straight out from the pain we deal with Mark. Glad you read it and understand it. I wish you didn't have to though.
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    19 to 1?? My dream ratio. LAUSD is saying 32 to 1 next year BTW are Charlie's students english language learners? Well, a very emotional chapter, and like Cia I agree it's good Charlie came to the realization on his own. Truthfully, it's something many people in relationships should probably do before falling into a commitment just because it's convenient. Well Sara I based the class off of the ones some of my teacher's use to have. 20 to 22 kids at most. Next year they have been told they might have 36 in their rooms. I don't know where the kids are suppose to sit. Actually the class is just your normal American class. Mixed variety of students and all. Glad you are enjoying it.
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    Chapter 1

    comicfan commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1

    That was one twisted tale. I read your comment that it was for April Fools but lord that got wilder and wilder. lol. Enjoyed it greatly.
  9. comicfan
    I am glad you have stayed around and are still enjoying Charlie's story. The ride is about to get interesting. Thanks for the comments and encouragement.
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    Hey don't I get to be like the rest of them and say once a week. lol. Anyway I am glad you are enjoying my tale Frosty. It still has a ways to go but now things start to get serious. Get ready for the next part of the ride.
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    Well naturally this isn't the end. Nice spot to pause though. All cliff ending and all. But either you are continuing the story or you have a sequel ready to go. I mean you could pick it up from the three guys entering the warehouse. I mean Kahli, wasn't that the god of death? Well, until you give us more I guess I'll have to hound you. Nice story but not letting you off the hook.
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    Chapter 12 – Interference and Reading Signs The hopes that this would be a quick meeting, where he could simply agree to three meetings and go, were dashed as Charlie realized Scott was the one doing the hosting. He watched uncomfortably as Scott slid the coat off and put it across a few of his student’s desks. The tight sweater showed off just how good figure Scott Reeds could cut. “How am I? Hmmm. Well, I guess you would know, if you took the time to find me.” For a moment Charlie fel
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    Well Mark where to begin. The slave trade continues. We know it is a booming business here. And James is doing a good job running it Beth knows all, sees all, and helps with it all it appears. So she isn't going anywhere Dad is something to behold. We know he won't last but he set this up and boy what a set up. Adam,- young, sweet attractive, lonely and about to be someone's boy toy. We can see the writing on the wall. Till next time and more details. Yes, I'm hooked.
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    The Legacy

    comicfan commented on Mark92's story in Fiction

    Well slavery is not what I was expecting. Hmm. Female slavery on top of it. You know I have to read on now Mark.
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    Rick isn't really gone. I don't just have a character disappear, especially one from Charlie's family. Rick Jr. will be back before I am finished. Glad you are enjoying the story though Frosty. As for the next chapter, well it will be out as soon as the editor is done with it.
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    Chapter 11 – Crossroads Wednesday morning Charlie was up early. Having company, he decided he would make breakfast for Rick and himself. He padded out to the kitchen and whipped up some pancakes and sausage. He knocked on the bedroom door and opened it to find Rick spread out on the bed. Rick slept in far less than Charlie did, which was basically nothing at all. Well, don’t keep looking at your nephew. Either get your ass out of here, or wake his butt up. “Rick, breakfast is on t
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    Chapter 17

    comicfan commented on Agaith's story chapter in Chapter 17

    Stu, This has to be one of your longer chapters. You covered a lot of ground here. I am glad to see parents who support their children. Nice to see that a family can also be made of friends who truly care. While nothing new was introduced you did give us a good sense of how close these two have become. With the threat of war hanging over their heads, constant prep for battle, and little time to just relax this chapter was something of a relief. Glad to have it and yeah, just want the next one soon. Wayne
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    Thank you so much. I try to write what I would enjoy reading. Glad so many people are taking an interest. I'm just a few chapters ahead now but as my editor and beta finish up I post them. Thank you for not only reading my story but taking the time to comment on it.
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    I've done Helsing, Full Metal alchemist, DeathNote, Black Butler. I've enjoyed Anime takes on other franchises like Batman. Highlander, and Witchblade. Don't get me started on Yaoi. lol.
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    Yes I had been busy. Unfortunately, my first editor had to back out so I needed a new one. I kept writing till I found one and now as soon as they are edited they are posted. Glad you are enjoying it and getting the story so fast. And yes, Scott is the store owner.
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    I'm working hard on them Frosty. My editor is catching up and beta is begging me to slow down. lol.
  22. comicfan
    Barbara is a treasure. You meet people like her and you hold on tight. Glad you like his mother.
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    Chapter 10 – Making Sense The party had been on Charlie’s mind for two days now. When his mother had pushed to make sure he was going to be there, Charlie had figured that his mother wanted him to stop moping about Tina. Now, however, he couldn’t help but realize that the party had forced so many of his family members to show their true colors. He hadn’t been the least bit surprised that his mother and father took everything in stride. There seemed to be very little that would up
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    Chapter 9 – Birthday … Surprise? Charlie was thrown off by his encounter in the book store. He walked quickly around the corner and gathered his mother’s gifts for the girls. Without checking anything he put everything in the back of his car and drove off towards his parent’s home. The drive gave him time to think. Oh my God, he is married. I should have checked when he was in the hospital. I never noticed a ring. I nearly got a married man killed trying to save me. Charlie’s mind was runn
  25. comicfan
    Then get ready. My poor editor has been slogging through everything and has the next two chapters done. They will be up in a short while. I am glad you are enjoying it.
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