Thanks for the overall review, Andy. I don’t intentionally rush to get to the “good” parts, it’s almost my writing style and it is something I’ve been trying very hard to work on. I write at a very fast pace, when I try to slow down sometimes I just stall. I know it can be a problem, but I am working on it. It is partially my personality coming out in my writing, too. I’m on fast-forward 24/7 and have a very hard time slowing down. As far as making it an Andy Sized story…jeez, I don’t know if I have that much word limit in my computer memory (JK)
Hind sight…meh, would it have changed much of the story to venture deeper into back stories and explanations? Maybe, but like I said, I’m still learning as I go.
Thanks again for reading. I hope I didn’t lose you as a reader, I have several more stories in the making (and I’m trying to slow down to an Old-Man Andy pace )