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“Logan…” He was waking up. I would bet his head was pounding. “Jimmy, shhh. It’s all over. We’re on our way, okay? “Wha…what happened? You’re bleeding, Logan! What the hell happened? You didn’t kill him, did you?” I thought his panic would never cease and allow a single word in edgewise. “Jimmy! It’s fine. I just knocked his old ass out. Trust me; he’ll kill himself with a bottle before I do!” I wished I could believe it myself, but Jimmy didn’t need to know that. “Look, bro, we’re on t
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The sound of the door slamming was ominous to say the least. Why did that asshole feel the need to go booze it up all day, and take it out on me when his cash runs out? He could have bought his only child a pair of shoes, but instead he had me sitting there, shaking like a leaf and wondering if I’d be recognizable after the beating. To think I still call him ‘Dad’. I really should keep a bat under the bed. I doubt I could do much damage with the just the bare hangers in the closet. Hell, I
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Starting as a one shot school assignment to describe a main character that is an unlikely likable dude. Will build on it, since I like the guy ;)
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Dammit, I actually friggin cried. (That's a feat...) Great chapter Nephy
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Active College Football Player Comes Out as Bisexual
Houdinii replied to methodwriter85's topic in The Lounge
That is too cool! Would be even better if he made it pro, and the fact he was dating a dude was simply a footnote or an afterthought... -
Wait, it was Henry that died? Are you sure about that?? Thanks for the review, Lisa!
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I went too long in between chapters and had to build it all back up again I had no other choice
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Thanks Robin!
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Watching Henry take Jack with him off the cliff with Tony flying right behind seemed to short circuit my brain somehow. My mind screamed at me to move, but my feet would not budge. I was aware that Jeff was shaking me and I could see his mouth moving but I had no idea what he was saying. The words were like pure mush inside my head, so Jeff gave up and took off down the cliff. I on the other hand finally got a move on, first checking on Casey, who seemed unaware of what just happened. Seein
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No, there are still 3 more chapters in the works, but they are stalled at the moment until I am able to dig myself out from underneath all this university homework Good news, though, the semester is a few weeks from being through!
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Ah, your getting a little ahead of me as far as the financing goes. Marks money will be explained, but funding help is one of the reasons to be working with the church. Thanks for all your reviews, Scotty!
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Wow, I didn't even mean for that to happen that way, lol! Thanks Conner
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Thanks Paul!!
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Thanks, Daithi, for all your reviews today! I like it better when I get them in a single day that way I can hear from the point of view of someone that is reading straight through. The straight boys were still back at camp when all of this went down, tossing a football around I think.
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How am I expected to be able to sleep after what I just witnessed? Jack is now sneaking off in the middle of the night to God knows where. For all I know he is trying to escape right now. I can’t say I’d hate that idea, though. It would be good riddance. My first instinct when I saw him was to go out and follow him, but that little voice in the back of my head stopped me. That really would be a stupid move. I could end up dead in the middle of the woods. I then decided that the best cour
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The House with the Rose Coloured Memories
Houdinii commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in The House with the Rose Coloured Memories
Nice read so far! The cliff hanger was a bit on the bogus side Can't wait to read on -
I typically never read the fantasy stories but I accidentally landed on tHis one and I'm glad I did! Great story so far. I can't w wait for more!
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I knew it was going to be a long night by the fourth time Jeff woke up breathing his frustration into my ears ensuring that I couldn’t get a wink of sleep myself. He was worse than a child waiting for Christmas. I can understand where he is coming from. He hasn’t seen his brother since, well whenever he got locked up, and now he gets to see him in just a few short hours. I’d be a mess too if I was put in the same situation. The thing is, I’m not. And I’m tired. I’m trying to be understanding
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With sleep came dreams… lots of evil and twisted dreams. The gleam in Jack’s eyes when he issued his warning is etched permanently in my mind and my subconscious had it on repeat as I slumbered. All night long I could see his face as he tracked each and every one of us down and gutted us with a machete, taunting us with jeers and insults. I doubt that Jack is that violent, but you never know. This is still prison even if it seems more like a summer camp. One things for sure, I’m keeping an
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Chapter Six: Teenage Angst
Houdinii commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Six: Teenage Angst
Great story so far! I'm def. hooked and your character development is right on Can't wait to read more
