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This is one of the best stories I have seen from Australia on this site. There are some word / sentence issues but these are not really a problem to the story. There are interesting things that happen in Australia which affect the people and their life and the places that they live in.

A good first chapter story wise but could do with some corrections e.g. gaps missing: livedwith mainNorth accountingfirm. It needs to be read carefully to pic out the other issues.

A excelent story. The only thing I didn't get is why the parents got married in Wales.

Reading this again and can't stop..

Like any other stories on this site, it has gone too far without an expanation of the environment that exists, the people and their relationships.

Interesting but very odd story. I didn't get alot of it, but given the idea that it was a story many centuries into the future is this a surprise? Not sure about the end, maybe I expected them to be thrown out into space, that the bots had worked out how to do this..

An interesting if violent story, but one I could not resist reading until the end - not that was really the end anyway. .

What a great story. Thank you.

Well, I was expecting something left wing political, not something about wolves. https://www.morningstaronline.co.uk

This is getting a little more interesting considering the way rich bastards own properties in citys and try to make as much money as possible out of them and many citys are being taken over and poorer people thrown out. http://most-expensive.com/cities-real-estate

This is much better than the first one - at least in makes sense and we get to "see" the person talking a bit more.

It's sort of not progressing right. I had to read it twice to understand it, then it appears to be about very little; the guy talking appears to want to move out.

I don't know why lots of writers say "Olympic sized pool" when talking about rich peoples houses. No way would this be suitable. Do you know how big an Olympic pool actually is?

Another excellent story in this series. Interesting how the people in those days had apparently less fear of death and were less risk averse even when very rich. Why would a risk young man like Granger want to go to sea and risk being killed in any number of ways?

I'm really into this story, just one thing that jars a little "“Me either,” Granger lied." shows the American use of either instead of neither. Otherwise very we researched and good character development.