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This is one of the best stories I have seen from Australia on this site. There are some word / sentence issues but these are not really a problem to the story. There are interesting things that happen in Australia which affect the people and their life and the places that they live in.
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A good first chapter story wise but could do with some corrections e.g. gaps missing: livedwith mainNorth accountingfirm. It needs to be read carefully to pic out the other issues.
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A excelent story. The only thing I didn't get is why the parents got married in Wales.
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Reading this again and can't stop..
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Like any other stories on this site, it has gone too far without an expanation of the environment that exists, the people and their relationships.
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Interesting but very odd story. I didn't get alot of it, but given the idea that it was a story many centuries into the future is this a surprise? Not sure about the end, maybe I expected them to be thrown out into space, that the bots had worked out how to do this..
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An interesting if violent story, but one I could not resist reading until the end - not that was really the end anyway. .
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What a great story. Thank you.
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Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Tiggs commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Well, I was expecting something left wing political, not something about wolves. https://www.morningstaronline.co.uk -
This is getting a little more interesting considering the way rich bastards own properties in citys and try to make as much money as possible out of them and many citys are being taken over and poorer people thrown out. http://most-expensive.com/cities-real-estate
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This is much better than the first one - at least in makes sense and we get to "see" the person talking a bit more.
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It's sort of not progressing right. I had to read it twice to understand it, then it appears to be about very little; the guy talking appears to want to move out.
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I don't know why lots of writers say "Olympic sized pool" when talking about rich peoples houses. No way would this be suitable. Do you know how big an Olympic pool actually is?
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Another excellent story in this series. Interesting how the people in those days had apparently less fear of death and were less risk averse even when very rich. Why would a risk young man like Granger want to go to sea and risk being killed in any number of ways?
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I'm really into this story, just one thing that jars a little "“Me either,” Granger lied." shows the American use of either instead of neither. Otherwise very we researched and good character development.
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A excellent story. Fascinating to someone like me who would like to see Great Britain to return to the two navy standard (if only we could).
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A most excellent story. Great imagination and working out of Carthera types and how they could be or would be; both physically and psychologically. (I would have like the end of the fight tidied a little; we still don't know exactly what happened.)
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This has to be one of the best fight scenes I've read. I just kept reading faster and faster to get to the end.
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While this story follows a similar story line to many - boy meets boy - one parent goes mad, this one is very well written and has some good addition ideas and innovation. For once we see a competent social worker and nice nurses - its difficult to believe how bad some of these are in other stories on this ilk.
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Very interesting and original (well I've never read such a thing) ending. I would definitely be interested in what happens next.
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This is just a random forum post.
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Well I read it all - a bit strange really. Not sure I really understood all of it and there were obviously bits of explanations and who was who missing. Not a bad story for all that, although not very gay either. BTW "Pedal to the medal time." (I can't remember which chapter it is in) should be "Pedal to the metal time." ; the phrase means to push the accelerator pedal through the carpet so it touches the metal)
