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It's fun watching Nate and Bodie interact together,each attracted to the other....but not quite sure if the other would return the feeling. Unfortunately, most gay people have to agonize over their crushes, hoping against all hope the maybe something will be said or done to remove all doubt from the uber heady situation. Will he like me;kiss me or want to kick my ass? Straight people have to deal with the nervousness issue but usually don't feel like their physical well being could be in jeopardy. The big pay off comes when the two involved realize that they are safe with each other...and can explore their attractions. It's great to have supportive adults around on both sides for the boys...this is an exciting and nerve wracking time for them both.........Loved the chapter, Gary..GREAT JOB...... Mike

I can't think of anything nicer than watching my lover sleeping or more beautiful than seeing him awaken and the slepy smile that begins in his eyes and quickly spreads over his face......Beautiful image Gary....I loved it!!!!!! Young Nate is a truly lucky young man to have M & K in his corner; I think his entire family, including Dad are awesome as well. I'll give his parents credit for admitting to mistakes and short comings and doing what's necessary to recify the problem.....Hope it works out for all.........More, please.....Mike

I'm glad that I decided to wait to read this chapter until after work today......As usual, it's always a pleasure to catch up with CJ y su familia.......Bueno trabajo.Carlos; muchas gracias.... Mike....(Lito when I was younger)

I'm mesmerized .....so much info to digest......can't wait for more......:)Mike

“You did good, Deuce. You did real good.” So did you Gary........fine chapter, happy tears and smiles throughout.......Finallly glad Big Mike weighs in..............................:)Mike

Lots of information....like Noel, I'll have to digest it for a while.....can't wait for more.......:)Mike

At least the fucker is dead......keep it together Stefan....you can do it.....:)Mike

Woke up early, couldn't sleep.....DAMN Logged on to GA, found your newest chapter..........YAY Gonna be a great day........... Thanks, Carlos Mike

CM, as usual, I am putty in your hands...finely crafted ending that fits perfectly with the rest of this emotional and dramatic story.... Throughout it all, we firmly know and pray that Wyatt and Brian's love will win.....And win it did.......thanks for the ride.....Exquisite Mike

I feel hopeless after reading....which makes me feel even worse knowing that poor Stefan actually endured this shit and how he suffered.......Hate the storyline, love your writing it tho'....you'ev captured the raw black hole in which Stefan lives......... Mike

Excellent beginning Parker........I've had my own personal issues with abuse, so I definitely relate.....Hoping that Stefan can and does survive his Hell............ Mike

I love a mystery......you've hooked me.......I'm in !!!! Mike

I purposely left Autumn at the bottom of my "get caught up reading list" so that I could relax and enjoy the usually positive interactions between of all the assemled cast. AND....it was a good decision on my part; visiting with everyone is almost like going home (but way more nicer). I won't comment on plot direction or other issues within each character's sub story...but I will comment of just how well you have woven everything together so it meshes into ONE fine piece of work.....the thread count on this story is so high....that's why I like to snuggle up and read in complete luxury!!!!! Great job, Carlos.......and Thanks............... Mike

Gary, Man this was raw.....finally dad is LISTENING to son...maybe now some sort of healing can occur. I admire young Nate's strength in his dealing with Mark, that was true courage. I oftimes think, Why do straight people feel that gays have a choice in their sexuality,and thereby can be "fixed"? I didn't choose anything nor did everyone else...that seems so simple to me. Excellent chapter even though it was difficult to read through tears.............. Mike

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I CAN'T BREATHE..........AARGH Mike

The plot thickens..........I can't wait.......... Mike

Carlos, Thanks for brightening my day....it's always a pleasure to catch up with the crew and their combined or single adventures.....Just had oral sugery and on some really good meds so forgive me if my thoughts aren't expressed clearly....but I feel better after having read this chapter...lot happening....love it all!!!!!!! Mike

Gary, First of all I want to apopogize for not commenting sooner as I have just recently have major oral surgery and have been thankfully quite medicated. I did however have the pleasure of reading Jackpot beforehand and it was a beautiful thought to help me through the ordeal. I completely agree with others by stating that this chapter was not a sex scene, although it was sensual as hell.....this my friend was a love scene, pure and simple and you excelled in writing it as usual It is a pleasure to read your work and I eagerly await the next chapter.....Deepest thanks Mike

I think I know where all the hope in LOTS has gone......It thrives in ETP......Great character development, as usual...........Loved it Mike

I can't believe it....you have completely removed all hope from Bryan and Wyatt. Horrifically masterful in execution....I absolutely hate this story, but love your writing. I often visualize a story as I'm reading....it helps me to connect with the characters....but LOTS really has caused night and daymares as I replay it in my mind. You have created these characters so vividly and the actions by all are gut wrenching. As much as I am bothered by the storyline, I will give up props for the excellent manner in which you have shared with the reader. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter ...I REALLY AM :)Mike

I fully understand the conversation between Eddie and Bryan being a grandfather to an autistic child. Many times it is difficult or impossible to completely grasp what she is trying to convey. However, her heart is pure and the innocence cannot be disregarded. I am hoping that Bryan knows this as well and will replay in his mind trying to fit the puzzle together As others have already stated, GREAT chapter even though we only can imagine what fresh hell MD is invoking onto Wyatt ;)Mike

Gary, Always a pleasure to get another chapter from you. I really like the fact that you have humanized Candy' by showing her acceptanace of attempting to manipulate Michael. Her admitted guilty feelings make her a more rounded character...I think that is important that she be somewhat likeable......Maybe you could show some "less than admirable quailties" in Michael and/or Kendall. Nobody can be as perfect as they seem to be..........Just sayin'..............Loving this story Mike

CM, I guess I should say thanks for such powerful writing, but I am so upset just now....I feel hopeless....Mike

Carlos You have created a group of people that I would be honored to know and be friends with. Each is different and special in their own unique way; they compliment their differences with each other. I really enjoyed the flow of this chapter. As usual, great job and many thanks for your efforts. ;)Mike