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  1. joann414

    Prologue

    How did I miss this? Great start!!!
  2. Poor Thaddeus and I have to say, "Chad is a loser and a dipshit." Two wrongs never make a right and he has wronged Thaddeus in one of the worst ways possible. I'm looking forward to see how you handle their relationship from this point forward. You've certainly laid some interesting groundwork. Good job
  3. LOL. I can't really decide who won that one. The Prude suffered physically while the other is just mad as hell. Great and entertaining chapter.
  4. Happy cousins You're so vibrant with some of your sexual descriptions and afterwards that it makes me laugh. Human sexuality is indeed misread as a bad things at times. If they read this, nothing would seem bad. It's so well written and the sexual release in this story would probably fill the spaceship. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Our guys are ready though.
  5. Pretty nice to be able to project sexual thoughts and actions through your mind waves. Poor Dennis didn't have a chance. Abel lll knew what he was dreaming and took full advantage of the situation. The Guardian is going to be a lot to ponder after all they've learned and still do not know. Can't wait to find out more about what is going on there. Poor cousins. They're still not quite there, but of course they have not problems entertaining themselves. Family relations coming soon, I think. Dennis definitely seems interested and Abel lll wouldn't be against it, I'm sure.
  6. Can't wait to see what happened with Dennis and Kade. It's always great when family can admit their failures and both parties move forward. That's how it's supposed to be with family though. For some reason I feel that The Guardian is observing our gang a little more than we know. jmo. Going to read more.
  7. Not only do you leave me hungry for more of your story, but you just leave me plain hungry. Pineapple upside down cake and cinnabuns in the same chapter. Shame on you, two of my favorites. The cousins leave no one out of their sexual antics do they:P I'm sure everyone feels welcome when they meet them. LOL I can't wait to see what all is going to happen on this trip. Dennis's decision to leave his family for Abel had to be hard but he's obviously found his mate. Great job Daddy.
  8. I just 'liked' you post so that will give you a point. As Cia said, activity on the site is the key. Put yourself and your work out there. It's a little daunting at first, but it's fun once you get into it.
  9. Happy Birthday Foopy. Hope you have many, many, more.
  10. joann414

    Chapter 1

    The ending of this story always puts a smile on my face. When he puts his mate on his back and moves to protect the both of them. Survival and love has always been two of nature's main elements. Thank you.
  11. joann414

    Chapter 1

    I love this story so much. From childhood to marriage and all the stitches in between:) So much enjoyment in your story BillW. Thank you:)
  12. joann414

    Chapter 1

    REvenge is so sweet
  13. joann414

    Chapter 1

    Some people are like animals. They sniff out their prey AND lovers, then pounce. I agree with Cia about the fight. Very exciting. You have quite the imagination. Thanks for a great story!
  14. joann414

    Chapter 1

    You've totally got me loving shifter stories. This one is not exception. It has a little bit of everything. Of course the element of sex is great, but the whole story was entertaining. Bet the cowboy wishes he could stay Great job.
  15. joann414

    Emergence

    I know there was a lot of imagery depicting cruelty and abuse but you kept weaving it together to create a happy ending. I loved as much this time as I did the other few times I read it. Great job Val:)
  16. 'tears' and more 'tears'. Although I don't know what prompted this, I can feel your emotions running throughout the story. Beautifully sad. Great job Addy!
  17. joann414

    Into the Fire

    Awwww, time marches on and some of us are lucky enough to make amends and have what was meant to be. Lovely story Cole. I love the place and time. Great story!
  18. joann414

    Chapter 1

    Very insightful and lots of food for thought. The thought of these things happening is not unheard of and you did a great job presenting it. Thanks, Bill.
  19. joann414

    Chapter 1

    To me there's no happy medium for the victims of abuse. They either fight for survival or give up. Those that try to live normally and act like all is well continue the pattern. This is well written and very heartbreaking. Although it's one of the most prevalent crimes of today, no one knows how much of it actually goes on and will never know because of the victim's guilt. Great job Wayne!
  20. joann414

    Story

    What a beautiful and feel good story. Memories are great, but to actually having the physical evidence of times gone by is wonderful. Love it.
  21. joann414

    Poem One

    Dare I say, empathy encompasses thine own person. The definition of your feelings of your inner and outer self amaze me. Great job Sam!
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