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  1. joann414

    Chapter 23

    OH no! I don't know if Ben's interference is going to be a good or bad thing. Is he an unknown player? Why is the Professor involved in The Game at all? Lots of things still a mystery.
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    Chapter 22

    "If I had know this was how the game ended I would have played it more enthusiastically." Made my heart hurt.
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    Chapter 21

    Wow, when you're so attracted that you want to keep each other out of harm's way, that's for real. I hope everything goes as planned.
  4. joann414

    Chapter 20

    So, they're connected like twins. They can read each other's thoughts and feel their pain.
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    Chapter 19

    Awwww, poor Shaun. Fallen for his patient and no going back. At least we know that he'll do everything in his power to help Daniel. Lily is onboard too so at least it's two against one against the Professor. Maybe Amber will fall in line. Here's hoping.
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    Chapter 18

    OMG! Don't tell me the damn professor has injected him! The light flirtation was cute and I know deep down Shaun loves it. At this point tho, romance would be quite rocky.
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    Chapter 17

    I am so glad Ben's compassion took over his hard military shell. Good for him! Now if only Lily and Shaun can help Daniel and Andrea will keep her mouth shut. Maybe since she recognized the drugs to begin with she'll listen to Lily and Shaun and not tell Professor anything else.
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    Chapter 16

    It scares me to even hope that he is safe at this point. Something tells me that Ben has no control over keeping him safe. He may know a little more than the others I feel though.
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    Chapter 15

    Memories are creeping in one by one. Hopefully something or someone will jog it to the point of remembering who he really is and what's going on. Ben seems to be torn at this point.
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    Chapter 14

    I have to get on the bandwagon with Annie here. Simon is certainly a piece of work. Why doesn't he tell her more if he knows it? I feel like he's keeping something from her.
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    Chapter 13

    Ben's anger is a little confusing but now I wonder if he was one of the ones at the clinic. the young one that looked angry as the two older doctors worked on Daniel. Fitting pieces together here is addicting. I'm also wondering if Andrea is going to be one of them or if she's a fan of Daniel's from the past. hmmm
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    Chapter 12

    Ben seems on the fence about what he is supposed to be doing and what the others are doing or thinking. I'm glad Shaun did not share the events of the night with them. Andrea was needed in this mix to stir things up more since Shaun and Lily are already suspicious. Great job by the way.
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    Chapter 11

    I officially hate the Professor. Daniel was so close to gathering some of memories and maybe piecing a few things together and he shoots him up with that shit again.
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    Chapter 10

    I can't decide if Simon is right about trying to persuade Annie to concentrate his thoughts and strength on the game instead of trying to find Adam. One may need to another, but when you have a close connection like Annie seems to have with Adam, I'm sure it would be hard to not concentrate on him and only him.
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    Chapter 9

    So glad Daniel has come to his sense enough not to take Ben's shit. At least he has the feeling of foreboding if he reveals his memories. And he remembers Annie!
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    Chapter 8

    Poor Annie. Obviously she's got a mental connection as well as physical feelings of friendship for Adam. It makes me wonder as the reader if their connection is a mind thing and if his mind is more or less erased, how can she find him?
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    Chapter 7

    I hope Shaun and Lily help Daniel. They seem genuinely concerned for him, but I know also they've been taking care of patients for awhile and follow protocol. Have to see I guess.
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    Chapter 6

    I like Lily. I'm very curious about the two babysitters for Daniel. They don't seem like bad people.
  19. joann414

    Chapter 3

    "He's going to have to be" is an understatement. What I've read so far tells me that their competitors will stop at almost nothing to be the victors and I'm so hooked on this story now that I can't stop reading.
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    Chapter 2

    Good grief. Pain all the way from the entrance into his body to his heart! You know your body would automatically go into tense mode at the first feeling of discomfort. Hopefully, his resistance is strong enough to hold on to a thread of what we know as our sanity. Riveting girl. Sheesh! I was leaned in toward my monitor like I could actually see what was happening.
  21. joann414

    Chapter 1

    Enthralled already. So much going on and I don't have a clue what.
  22. Not exactly existent, not exactly frowned upon, certainly not accepted. More or less blissful ignorance or redneck entertainment. The ignorance is humorous. Someone put a gay flag sticker on a rowdy redneck's truck and he thinks one of his nieces or nephews got it from somewhere and put it on there. Doesn't even know what it is. Of course a lot of men boast things like, "he better not touch me if he knows what's good for him." Then of course he doesn't know his kid brother is gay and lives in Alabama. So no, not anything to speak of.
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    Signs

    When you've got child support "pun intended", that's a little extra umph. LOL In support of his dad, Justin gave some good advice. If he'd stayed put, he would've wound up like some of the other gay citizens sad and miserable. At least he's taking his chances. Can't wait to see Roy join the plot.
  24. Sorry I'm late, but Happy Anniversary:)
  25. Welcome to GA and good luck with picking a story. So many choices and many great writers.
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