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That traumatizes me. I'll never let my grandson close to the lake again without a life jacket. Sheesh. Maybe I should just show him the PSA.

The council was more or less useless in my opinion. I think I'd brainwashed them completely if I'd been Abel Maybe since he realizes that they can't depend on them, he'll make use of his own resources. (which he seems to be doing now) Funny that his grandfather and his partner was so intent on getting through to him. That was funny, but I'm sure frustrating for those two. The sharks web is intriguing. Seems it's drawn Abel's attention in more ways than one. Great chapter.

It seems as if they are up against a force of many. Young Abel's powers can't even fix this. Anxiously waiting to see what happens with the council and of course, 'Abel's mysterious man'.

The title of this chapter sounded like a movie title. lol. It would've been x-rated tho with the shower scene between the cousins. Nothing like keeping it in the family. This ship has to overheat right regular with all the sex onboard. lol

It's like Abel's stronger powers missed generations and landed within him. Interesting. Sharks huh? That's an interesting addition to your story.

More family added into the mix. What a reunion! In more way than one, I'm sure. Nothing like a little kissin cuzzins to get the juices flowing. Can't wait to see the extent of the cousin's power and how Able handle's their presence, in more ways than one. I found it funny that they were so excited to get back to earth. We take so much for granted. One day, we may wish for the lush green grasses and peacefulness of a running stream in the woods. You're touching on a lot of deep subjects here if the reader takes time to think about them. It doesn't take away from the enjoyment of the story, but adds to it when you imagine yourself in the crew's situation. Working like hell just so they can visit for a week or two. better shut up now .

I always been fascinated with telekinesis. Looks like it's going to be a star in Able's crown. His ability is even more powerful than his family's power. Quite the group we have here. Family or not, there's a closeness that is going to be hard to penetrate by an outer circle. That's a plus in the your setting and time frame you've got your story taking place. Now I'm wondering how many men Able will actual partake of since he knows the truth about everything and on top of that, he can read their thoughts if he wants. This should be quite the tale as he goes about his adventure. Enjoyng this very much.

I love how the big beary man wins out in the end. Peter was a dipwad. Loved the story, girlie

Boy! Mirabelle showed up in the niche of time. So glad she turned Button's head. Kevin's mom is a piece of work and poor Kevin will be the one to suffer in the end. hopefully not. Sarah is a little shit at times. LOL. That's what siblings are for. I had five. I should know. I knew Button wouldn't have to do Sp.Ed. again. I just felt it. He's improved and grown into a delightful young mean.

So glad that Kevin talked with an adult even if it was on of Button's dads. It's good that he got advice from an older person. Poor kid is heartbroken over something he can't control. Button is mighty brave now days. Had to catch up before I went to you other chapters. Make sure I didn't miss anything. Thinking of what the surprise may be or who

My daughter and grandson were occupied with baseball playoff today so I gave my day to the hubby. great day! There's so many great father's here. Happy Father's Day to all of you.

HI Welcome, and I'm sure you'll have a great experience. Great stories and people.

Just wow. So glad to see that you are writing again. The storyline is definitely intriging, and I'm sure controversial to many. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Love it!

I was thinking how arrogant Fear was until he shifted and how painful it was. Then, I felt sorry for him. Taranis is the friend that everybody wants to be. EVen with everything that has evolved, he still claims Fear as his friend and Fear feels the same. Do I sense romance here? Loved this chapter

Good grief! Fear kill Taranis? I wonder what Grandpa thinks of that. What a twist and a cliffhanger!

The voice of life is what I'd call Zegan because he's always that the save Yaddry! Now I'm wondering what'll happen. BTW, love both song

Yaddie better be glad Zegen was around or he'd been in dire straits. Great chapter. Poor Prince

Ageing hasn't really bothered me as far as getting older. I'm just relishing being who I want to be and not worrying about what anyone says or thinks about me because it doesn't matter. I'm comfortable with who I am, pretty much know what and when I want to say something and if it matters or is going to hurt someone. But the most important thing is being old enough to know that I can learn from those younger and older than me. I guess you would call me "middle aged". Maybe I should cringe, but I don't. I'm still able to hold down a ten hour a day job and half day on Saturdays, go home and ride four wheelers to the back of the place and fish if I want. Dwelling on my mortality is my least favorite thing to do. I think of the day I'm living in and the ones around me that I love and are my family and friends. Even if the video was in humor, it's so true. My daughter is freaking because she is 30 and to me she's still a little girl. "jumps off soapbox"

Welcome Dom and Eyob. Hope you both enjoy all the craziness. Wonderful place and folks!

You are plain mean. You just want to give me a heart attack so you can feast on my brain.

Finally! Nothing like a little music and horseplay to get the ball rolling. So glad Justice decided to take a chance. Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens when they really kiss on stage.

Welcome and enjoy!!!

Happy Birthday Adam !!!!!!!

Awww sweetie. You deserve every wish. Hugs

Happy Birthday Cole!!! "downhill slide to the big 50" "couldn't resist"