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    Prompt 342

    joann414 commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 342

    You! did great. What a feel good story
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    Story

    joann414 commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Story

    Powerful and sadly beautiful Nephy. I was moved in so many ways by this story and the elements of pain and deceit you wove into the children's past. The cruel lies spewing from the Grandmother's lips enhanced the elements of the story to the point of making my heart ache for not only Luke. but all of them. Abuse is abuse and there's no excuse for it. I know from experience. Never accept it as right or your fault. It's not. You covered a raw and painful subject with this beautiful story. Thank you:)
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    Hi and welcome and you are in a world of wonderful writing here. Just take a pick and start reading. Great authors and wonderful stories to choose from.
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    Happy Birthday James. I have to tell you this. when I first came on the site, I was intrigued by your title, Cat bastard, so Happy Birthday you CAt Bastard you. LOL. I love it!
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    Happy Birthday you youngster you!!! Hope you had a wonderful day hun.
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    Part Three

    joann414 commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Part Three

    OH no! You stopped there? And as my grandson says. "it was gettin real good." lol. Love the feelings between the guys although the fact of one being gay is a secret. I think there's more than meets the eye here, or should I say mind? How often do you update?
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    Part 2

    joann414 commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Part 2

    Hmmm, so both are psychics, but on different levels. He must have great restraint to be able to tuck him back into his boxers and still act normal. Loving this so far.
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    Part 1

    joann414 commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Part 1

    This is a great beginning, but dang the script is small. Very curious tho.
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    Loved the food descriptions. Felt right at home. It was funny that he was monitoring the young cousins as they scarfed up their food thinking they couldn't believe such food that far from earth. LOL. I'm still intrigued by The Guardian. The engagement dinner was nice and so thoughtful of the young cousins to send the cake and even more thoughtful that even tho the surprise was let out of the bag, it was still kept secret. Lovely chapter.
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    Dang, that was almost a shotgun wedding without the force of the parent. Is either man pregnant? I enjoyed the chapter also. Dennis has had a pretty trying development while growing up. I also found myself feeling sorry for the brother. I get the feeling we are going to hear more from him. Why do the two young cousins make me smile. It's like you know whether alone or with other people, they are having fun.
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    HI Rob. Welcome
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    Home again

    joann414 commented on Aditus's story chapter in Home again

    What Cole said. I have to know what's going on. I'm nosey like that.
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    Prompt 340

    joann414 commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 340

    I want to hear the coming out to his parents so you've got to continue this:P You know I'm a sap for romance and this was so friggin sweet.
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    He's one of the few actors I've actually met. I was in Madison WI with my dad as a youngster. He had a school he had to attend for his company. James Garner was staying in the same hotel and actually ate with us one morning. I was twelve and he seemed so handsome to me. WE were there a week and he was there three days I know because I saw him eat with others and be just as nice. Good memories. Also, I loved his acting. I saw him in a movie with Sally Field called Murphy's Romance and both of them were do darn cute. I also loved his role in the notebook. He'll be remembered fondly by many.
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    Happy Birthday Kiltie! Have a wonderful day
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    Happy Birthday! Hope lots and fun and s.. in store Have a wonderful day!!!
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    I'll be honest. I'm an addict and not afraid to say it. Fried shrimp and calamari rock!
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    Curious about the older brother. Something is amiss there. Finally real lovemaking for Abel and dreaming of a lifetime with Dennis:) BTW, did you just leave a cliffhanger? I think you did. Great chapter.
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    This was a wonderful read. Loved how you tied everything together although I caught on pretty early in the story Still, it was very funny and sexy with a hint of sadness.
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    I have to agree with Timothy about Kieran's cousin keeping Robin from him. After all, Kieran is quite the jerk. Enjoying your story very much Sasha
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    So, that's how they wound up living in the same house. I have the feeling that going after the shoes is going to be interesting. Great chapter!
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    What a conceited brat. Considerate when needed but still conceited. Love his taste in dogs tho. I'm curious as to why he's living with his cousin or vice versa. Maybe a huge house that was their grandparents or something. Glad I found a good story this morning. Great beginning, but not surprised considering who wrote it.
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    Ok, I'm going to have a beer with DAng Bear. My brain is fried from all of this technology stuff. I'll leave it to the men Where's the beer Dang Bear?
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    super sexy chapter.
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    Beginnings

    joann414 commented on bradleyjcarson's story chapter in Beginnings

    Hey! To be honest, I was a little overwhelmed with all the personal descriptions, but as I read on, I liked it. If I can get to the end of the chapter, I like it. LOL. Seriously, I can't wait to read more. You're a good writer and definitely have your thoughts in place. Going to read more
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