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This chapter kinda gave me chill. EVen tho there was a little lightheartedness, there was still some evil things below the surface brewing.
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I'm so glad that Kayden told Damien about Roman's threat. I have a feeling that the King may step in at this point. Kudos for such a great chapter!
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I hope the kit remembers Roman's statement to him when he attacked him about messing up his plans. Poor kit had to suffer once more. So sad, but I have faith in Damien. He'll get to the bottom of this.
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So much to contemplate here. I guess you have to lie when your boss tells you too, but surely someone will slip up and tell the truth. I can understand both Kayden and Damien at this moment, but I'm hoping the 'other brother' will find out about Roman's ill doings.
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My heart is hurting in such a sweet way.
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That was quite a walk, a very enlightening one for many. Kayden and Damien are beginning to remind me of the strong man and his 'damsel in distress'. LOL. I love these two characters and how you work your plot around the surroundings and people in passing. Just enough dialogue without expecting the reader to remember that particular character.
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Damien certainly proved his feelings for Kayden in this chapter. I'm anxious to see where all of this is going to lead in their relationship. Roman obviously has a problem with Kayden and I hope he doesn't catch Kayden alone to prove this.
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Lovely and touching chapter. The past comes back to haunt many affecting us in ways unknown to those around us. I'm glad Kayden opened up to Damien. Your slow progression in this part of their relationships coincides perfectly with Kayden's personality at the beginning. I loved this chapter!
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I'm nervous for the little kit, but I feel sure Damien feels lots of protectiveness toward him. The slight sexual content slid right into the chapter without taking over the tone of your writing. Well done. I noticed that some reviewers didn't even mention their reaction to each other.
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It amazes me how you mesh such different characters into a beautiful tale. I've read some stories similar to this that seemed stilted and over written if you know what I mean. In trying to sustain a viable plot, the writers missed the awkwardness of their characters and actions. Just saying. 'shuts up now'. Enjoying your story immensely.
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Awww, Kayden has found a spot in Damien's heart already. I hope Damien is prepared to protect his kit from Roman. Great chapter.
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Smiling. Damien is going to be a good master.
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It's amazing what a simple touch can convey. I think the joke is on the brothers. I'm amazed how attention grabbing your writing is. Thanks fo sharing.
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Enthralled! What an engaging story with such a unique set of characters. I feel for Kayden, but Damien is yet to meet him, so I'm hoping for the best. I feel like I'm reading a seasoned novel writer. I don't have to go back and read sentences again, try to remember where a character entered the story and where he fits in, etc. I love your work.
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So glad they featured this story. It looks like a wonderul and interesting read.
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Happy Birthday Sweetie. Hope you have a wonderful day.
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Happy Birthday Bee :wizard:
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May he rest in peace. Loss of a great talent and person:)
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Happy Birthday!!!!! Hope you Have a Great DAy! Sorry if I'm late. Hugs
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Wow! What an awesome post. Just a little note. He died on my Wedding Anniversary. May he Rest in Peace
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Simply beautiful!
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Now, that's what I call quirks
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Cutest thing I've seen in awhile
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I love to sleep outside in the winter, drunk or sober:P I wear jeans until my hubby throws them out because of all the holes and frays. I love to kiss my dogs ears.
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Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you. Happy birthday dear Yetti (Rob). Happy Birthday to you!!!!!!!! Hope you have a great one
