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Good chapter. I liked it but I have to admit to a little trouble with the time-line jumping. I've never really been comfortable with stories like that but this one is easy enough to follow.
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As always, a good installment but I do wonder if the woman in the sari was someone whose name we would know. It was fun and amusing.
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Being you opened with the Oscars I figure there's a lot more. As always, I get too excited and comment before brain is full engaged!
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Just read first three chapters. They're all great, as usual, and tell a compelling story. I look forward top reading more and finding out what happens.
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How did I miss the start of this? Is' a great start but now I need to read 1 and 2 as well.
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These chapters are giving a good picture of why Dorian is as he is. I look forward to more.
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great story. The double chapter confused me for a moment because I couldn't believe I missed a chapter but all's well. I look forward to more.
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I'm hoping the two old friends can control the two young Russian hotheads. Looking forward to more.
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Glad to see we're getting Damian's story. I've been wondering about him. Look forward to more.
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I'm quite satisfied with the way you post your stories. There are times, like early morning, I want shorter length chapters. If I want more, I read a longer story and as a chronic re-reader, there's always got something to return to. I'm more curious about what grandpa has in mind. He's a crafty one!
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Good start. I'll be looking for more.
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Very well-done story. Both men worked hard and deserved to be drafted.
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Good start. Look forward to the rest. Oh, and Happy New Year.
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Beautiful story. This is the way all businesses should work.
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A wonderful holiday gift. Excellent story. Have a happy holiday and a great New Year and I will look forward to more stories in the future.
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Not only major events. Everyone also needs to know exactly where you ate, shopped and what you did at any time of the day or night!
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Good to have you and the story back. I'm not a big fan of big show-off proposals but I love romantic ones. Look forward to the rest.
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The chapter was great as always. Glad to see Pam is going to work on her issues. A good way to start the New Year. Loved Ripper Christmas. Too funny.
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I like everything about this chapter. Yes, Pam definitely went too far and has issues but I do feel sorry for her and what she's going through,. It's probably grief with a lot of guilt over not preventing her daughter's cancer. She needs to see a counselor if she hasn't already. I love Liebe but who wouldn't?
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Love it.
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One other thing did cross my mind, possibly because I'm a 64 year old female and I've been there.
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Great start. I can't wait to read more about Liebe and her dads. Kids and Christmas just go together. I don't remember Pam being that bossy but it's possible I simply don't remember. In any case, I look forward to more.
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I'll admit to being pissed off when I wrote that review. Many hours later, I have reread and reminded myself not to write reviews in a snit. Most of it I stand by but, really, I love your stories and will continue reading. It just felt like a practical joke to me and I HATE practical jokes. And, yes, Chipper's future is set but I would have liked to know who won. It's known that when the audience judges, anything can happen and Bliss was also madly talented.
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A great story but I think the ending was a cop-out, unless you have some surprise planned. Withholding the name of the winner is a cheap plot device. Rather than enhance the wait to find out the winner, to me it makes that announcement completely anticlimatic. You build up everyone and then don't deliver? It leaves a very bad taste in my mouth and tends to make me avoid authors who do that sort of thing. I've followed all your stories so far but...
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Those lyrics need music. A great chapter.
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