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    Chapter 1

    avidreadr commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I liked this story very much. The characters, the situation, the story flow were all excellent. There is so much potential here even for a book. I hope you put this on a "someday" list and come back to it.
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    Chapter 4

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4

    This chapter was wonderful and very true. Brings back memories of my late husband in surgery for cancer. All the emotions were there, the support from family, the long waits. Loved the ending. As to the delay in posting I always feel that, when you're giving us stories to read without charge, we don't really have a right to complain if life sometimes gets in the way. I get antsy for more, but feel it isn't right to push the author when there might be things going on that I don't know about. That said, I look forward to reading whatever you post next.
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    Chapter 1

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This could go many, many ways. It could be a physical health issue or it could be something more in the supernatural vein, which is the way I'm leaning. I'm really interesting in reading more.
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    Chapter 8

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Loved it. It was such a unique story in so many ways and I'm a sucker for a sci-fi erotic romance with HEA. Thank you for the story.
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    Brought Home

    avidreadr commented on Cia's story chapter in Brought Home

    If you have a maybe someday list, I would add these characters, or at least Dag. There is more than could be done with them. In the meantime I am eagerly awaiting more on Adverse Effects.
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    Chapter 7

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 7

    So glad that they're safe and that Sys is getting better. Sys going back home can go so many different ways, I'm not sure whether to be concerned or not. I guess we'll find out. Great story so far.
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    I could really learn to hate cliffhangers. A great chapter and I can't wait for the next,
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    Chapter 4

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I enjoyed this chapter. I'm a sucker for romance, so I'm willing to accept they fell in love quickly. I am wondering when the other shoe is going to fall. Murphy's Law, ya know.
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    Chapter 2

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Excellent so far. Very interesting character. I suspect what is up with Dee; you gave us several hints. I really look forward to the next chapter and hope Sys is all right. Having had kids, one without drugs, I can really sympathize with the poor guy.
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    A World Changing Gun

    avidreadr commented on Cia's story chapter in A World Changing Gun

    Great story, which is not a surprise. The accident and all the emotions it aroused all rang true.
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    Chapter 7

    avidreadr commented on SidLove's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Beautiful but so sad. I will look forward to Book II as I have hopes Noah and Luke get together. I have a son with Asperger's, a mild and highly functional form of autism, so I know how hard it can be for them to let new people into their lives. Luke will really be missing Noah, no matter what his family does.
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