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As much as he hates it, Rhyder going home is he proper thing to do. He can say good-bye to what he's leaving in England and wrap up any old business he might have.
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An interesting and slightly strange story. Not too sure how I feel about it, but it did hold my interest. The boy's inability to bond with any people makes me think he might be a bit autistic. People with Aspergers often have trouble relating to people.
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Really enjoyed this chapter. It's good that Rhyder is being proactive about his future and going ahead with what he wants to do. It was a nice touch about his last name. I look forward to the rest.
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As Good As A Kick In The Ribs
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in As Good As A Kick In The Ribs
Glad Rhyder wasn't badly hurt. I also think he should keep his money handy in case he has to buy his own ticket back if his parents pull a fast one. -
Can we send a copy of this to all our legislators?
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Strange story. I'm not sure how I feel about it.
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Just discovered your stories and I'm glad I did. This was beautiful but so sad.
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I enjoyed this story. It rang very true of any single parent entering the dating game, regardless of sexuality. Wouldn't mind reading more about these people.
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I liked this prompt and I liked what I saw of the characters. It left me curious to know more, like an excerpt from a book might. I can easily see this expanded into something longer someday,
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With Rhyder turning 18, I hope he decides to stay at the ranch. Everything he seems to really love is there.
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Nice to see Rhyder maturing and coming into his own. It's about time someone said no to Jase and I think Rhyder mind end up with the boy he met at the end of the story and will choose to stay at the ranch.
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This pair is hot in more ways than one. Love this story and the whole series. I hope Kiorl is going to be the next to get a mate but I do wonder what the Devil will do if he does. In any case, I look forward to whatever you choose to write next.
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I love this story. Eons ago I wrote a short story as a high school assignment with a similar premise. God creates earth as a class experiment. in mine, however, he didn't like the results and tossed it away where it continued to exist. (It was in the seventies and I was into protest music, if that explains anything.) Love this story and love Ariel. I wonder if he passes?
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Several hints now about someone - other than Nassau - who is stronger than his father. I got the impression is was the Ifrit, whatever they are, but I'm not sure. Also, Kiorl going about sounds like a possible new story. I look forward to what Nassau has in mind for Atoki. I hope that, someday, Kiorl and Nassau both find what they need.
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Thank you for getting back to this story. While I hope Jase doesn't hurt Rhyder, I know there's always conflict in fiction so I expect to be shedding a few tears. This story could go in so many directions, it's going to be interesting to see which way it heads.
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As Sathriel is the ruler of Hell, his actions are really no surprise. The previous stories clued us in about him. I am glad Kiorl left him and hope he finds someone of his own who will love him. I am also curious if Vru finds out about what happened and, if so, what he does.
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Loved it. I liked Zu's tattoo and the whole wedding. One of my favorite stories.
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Presents and Responsibilities
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Presents and Responsibilities
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I looked up the mogume rings. They are gorgeous and perfect for Zander, I am eagerly looking forward to the proposal. I love this story. On another subject, will we be seeing more Cowboy Summer soon? It seemed far from finished at the end of the last chapter.
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"And now the trouble really begins." Really? Just when things are starting to look up? You are a cruel sadistic person. I guess it's why I love your stories so much.
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I look forward to V meeting Aris...I hope. That should be good.
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Zoltan is going to be missed but I can understand where he's coming from. Love that Zander is a slob at home and that they worked it out without a big fight. Shows maturity.
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Monday 2nd September 2013
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Monday 2nd September 2013
I love HEA endings. I am an absolute sucker for a good romantic story, and this was one. Thank you for the story and I look forward to the anthology.
