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As good as the first time I read it. I see many possibilities for the future and I so hope you continue this.
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Great chapter. Trust Shell to go into labor! And I look forward to more with Wylie.
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There was a connection and now we have to wait to find out how much, if any, of it remains.
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Tony Gets Back to Nature - Prompt 310
avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in Tony Gets Back to Nature - Prompt 310
Good story. Lots of fun. I wouldn't mind spending more time with these characters and finding out their story. -
A wonderful chapter. Button tries so hard and is such a beautiful person. I'm not surprised Sarah ended up with them and I see all five of them becoming even more of a family unit.
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Great chapter. So far, I really like Alpha Poundstone and his pack. They seem to be a good addition to these stories. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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What a roller coaster chapter. Happy that Buzz came to Jed and is giving them a chance but then Shelly being grabbed. We can also look forward to hearing from Buzz's pack eventually Lots of good stuff to wait for.
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I hope Buzz is taking off and that he makes it. The way he was meekly accepting his fate bothered me a lot. It's about time he took his fate in his own hands.
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I agree with both previous comments. I love Yuri and am curious what the future will bring. I am curious about Bashta and Cavel. Was their presence at the meeting explained earlier and I forgot or is it coming?
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Nice to see Nassau finally calmed down. Now we just have to wait and find out what he did.
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Nasty trick. Aimee's death was a surprise, but not a real shock. At least the adoption can go through. I also think they might end up with a daughter at some point in the future.
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The more this story goes on, the more I love Yuri. I think Bennie is doing as well as he can but I hope he realizes that Yuri will probably never be wholly the same. Bennie thinks at one point that Yuri was serious and dominating before. Well. he still is, to some point but those moments are now punctuated with the child-like perspective due to his head injury. I like seeing Ellis again and I hope his venom can help.
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I don't remember much of this from the original so I either forgot it (possible) or it's new. In any case, it is a great chapter and really helps to flesh out some of the other characters, especially Deoren and Aliza. One of my favorite stories and I look forward to more.
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Love the story. It's very interesting to read how Button is coming along and I was enjoying the chapter until I came to the line about the next chapter. I could have done without knowing that info, but I do look forward to more.
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Like it so far. Buzz needs to learn how to stand up to his brother or he's never going to be happy. I see a fight or two coming, naturally, but unsure between who and who.
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The previous poster is right about both dads being legal parents. Craig should look into designating Graham as guardian in a will.
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So sweet and I'm glad Graham's dad came around. His mother is denying herself and will regret it if she doesn't change her attitude. If Button does have fetal alcohol syndrome, I hope it is a mild case. It can cause some very serious problems for a baby.
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It seems Yuri did some healing on his own but he is obviously far from normal. It remains to be seen how much more he can be cured with medical help. Benny and Yuri are so beautiful together. Look forward to more. There is still the issue of someone watching Yuri.
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I always liked Jed so I'm happy he's getting his own story. I look forward to reading the rest as it unfolds.
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Change of Direction - Prompt 306
avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in Change of Direction - Prompt 306
I really liked this prompt. It left me with a very uplifted feeling. -
There were plenty of clues but not too many. I'm a sucker for a sweet romance with an HEA ending. Thank you for the story.
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This chapter contains my favorite two words of the story. "Stupid coat." I'm not sure why, but ever since I first read this, those two words never fail to bring a smile and chuckle to me. Maybe because it's so typical; Colton orders, Parker ignores and does what he wants and Colton gets frustrated.
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I'm thinking we all might suspect the same thing. Frank deserves to be happy after everything that happened to him and i think Chris is going to be the one but I hope he does it before Christmas.
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Very good beginning. The characters and locations are well defined. We cam all relate to the boss or teacher from hell. This was a very solid start to a story that can go in almost any direction from here. I look forward to reading more.
