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Loving it so far. I have some idea who the family is; it will be fun to see how close I am. It's nice to see Frank come out of his shell. I would love to see the chess set when it's finished.
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Perfect proposal and perfect ending. I like that Kei has recovered, but still some difficulties as in real life. The story ends with the feeling that this is one couple that will make the long haul, maybe since they've already discovered how to fight the hard times without damaging their relationship. I'll miss reading new chapters about Alex and Kei but look forward to whatever you write next. Thank you for such a wonderfully moving story.
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Enjoying this story like I do all your stories. I wonder what Mak's problem is? Look forward to more and I think I'll join the discussion.
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I love that, after their rocky start, Ellis wants to help Benny. After being surrounded by other finding their mates, Benny deserves his own HEA. One of my favorite parts of sequels is visiting with characters from previous stories. Can't wait for next Wed.
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Shot and sweet but it all comes across very clearly. The loneliness of both men, the park, it all is there. It's almost poetry in prose form.
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I like Frank and I like the set-up. There are many directions it can go and I'm eager to see which way you choose. You've given us enough background except there was one thing. The story says he had only Peter to count on, but I see no mention of who Peter is. Will we find out later or did I miss it (totally possible as I read too fast sometimes)?
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Such a great upbeat chapter. The last few chapters have been so positive, I find myself almost afraid to read the next few. I keep hoping that, aside from Kei's long recovery, things will stay good for them.
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Seth needs to learn that he's the son of an alpha but not necessarily an alpha himself. Love this story.
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I read this story on the other site tons of times and yet I'm reading it again. Love this story. I think one of the things I like best is that despite Parker being the non-dominant partner, he is no weakling. He doesn't take garbage from anyone and will defend himself and those he loves.
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It's great that Kei is doing better.I think Alex yelling was one of the breakthroughs they needed. Being a caretaker is a harder job than many people realize. Everyone asks about the patient, but too often they don't ask the caretaker. I know firsthand from when my husband passed from cancer. In those whole story, Alex's emotions and thoughts were right on target. It's one of the things I love most about this story.
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Such a sweet, romantic story. I loved it.
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This is such happy chapter; it's about time these boys had some good things happen. Part of me, though, is still holding back and waiting for things to go to hell again. I so hope it doesn't, though. Love this story and these people.
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Epilogue - Christmas Lights
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Epilogue - Christmas Lights
Beautiful story and a beautiful ending, especially as it's a cold slightly snowy night in NY. Thank you. -
Fireside Confrontation
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Fireside Confrontation
Nic is a complete wus to give in to Alexia like he did. Alexia should be reported to the powers that be for her prejudicial attitudes. I can't wait until she gets her comeuppance, which I hope is coming. -
Part II - Where is The Heart? Chapter 11
avidreadr commented on Graeme's story chapter in Part II - Where is The Heart? Chapter 11
Love the story and the twists and turns. However, I really love Shane. Look forward to seeing more of him. -
Poor Luke. Maybe he shouldn't have outed Jeremy, but it was partly Jeremy's fault. He's the one that chose the place to break up with Luke. He should have waited till after school. I hope they stay separated; Luke deserves more than being a sex buddy. Not sure if Jameson is out or has other issues; too early to tell. I look forward to more.
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I was wondering when they'd see each other in their fur and if they'd get the chance. I hope Levi's infatuation doesn't cause too much of a problem. Paddy and Troy might have to come out as a couple if he does.
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Part I - Who is The Heart? Chapter 3
avidreadr commented on Graeme's story chapter in Part I - Who is The Heart? Chapter 3
I wonder when it's going to dawn on everyone that the Heart of the Tree is probably not female. -
Another chapter where I ended up in tears. This story just rips into me. Don't know what's planned, but I hope Kei is at least on the path, however long it is, to healing. These two boys deserve HEA.
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Another good start. I look forward to where this story is headed.
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I like the way the story starts. I already want Luke to dump Jeremy. He deserves someone who doesn't make him feel like a dirty secret.
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Beautiful, but I almost couldn't finish it because I was crying so hard. Thank you.
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Epilogue - Get Your Cowboy On, All Year Round
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Epilogue - Get Your Cowboy On, All Year Round
What a great story, and the ending was perfect. Rhyder made his journey and came out at the end as the man he is supposed to be. His ending things with Bryce and having a new man in his life is what people go through as they get older. Loved this and am so happy you shared it with us. Thank you. -
I think Eli will be good for Noah. It does seem he's interested in more than just a hook-up. At least the chemistry is there. I do look forward to Wednesdays.
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A Place No Longer Home
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in A Place No Longer Home
The visit started rough but at least he made peace with his parents. I hope there's more to come. I'm not sure if R's love for Shura is going to come between he and B at some point but that's not really an issue unless you choose to make it one.
