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Looks like Yuri is on his way back. Waiting to see if there are any lasting effects of the drugs he was given. I am also looking forward to what happened with his old clan. I'm guessing there was some sort of fight that our side won because Yuri's brother and mate are now somewhere with the doctor, Dav and the rest. I also think the two brothers and their mates should consider forming their own clan. With the father taken care of, there will probably be many, especially the younger set, looking for new leadership. I am wondering why the brother's mate attacked them. Did he do it under threat to his mate or was it the drugs? Looking forward to reading more and spending some time with the rest of the group when things are discussed.
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I knew James was going to be a little dick. Poor Sasha. I can see several things happening in the future and none of them good. In the meantime. Sasha needs to figure out who he is.
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A wonderful end. I love how the ending tied in with the beginning. I'm resisting the temptation to knit a baby blanket for little Andy. I look forward to the next story.
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A wonderful end. I love how the ending tied in with the beginning. I'm resisting the temptation to knit a baby blanket for little Andy. I look forward to the next story.
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Really interesting story. Love the characters and the way the love story evolves. Also, the planet is really intriguing and seems to call for more than one story. I'd love to read more about these people and the planet.
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Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown
avidreadr commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown
Thank for taking us on this journey. I both look forward to and dread the last chapter. It's been a wonderful ride. -
Love how their teammates supported them. Too often in these stories it isn't that way. I am enjoying this story. By the way, what's doing with MUSH! ? Will it be finished anytime soon?
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I read Button 18 before this and was tearing up; this story finished the process and I'm in tears. It was a beautiful story of friendship and what can survive even after death.
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Poor Andy and poor Brent. He could use some grief counsel to help him cope. You depicted the grief felt by those left ehind very well. I still remember the anger when my husband died.
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Just a few simple sentences, but it reveals a lifetime. Beautiful.
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Great ending to a great story. I didn't want it to end and hope there will be more. It seems to me you might be dropping hints about Zef. Updates on Christopher would be nice, too. Thank you for a great story.
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Looks like maybe we're getting a hint as to Tiger X? I think Benny really needs to talk to Yuri and explain some of what happened and why Benny acts the way he does. Yuri is confused about what's happening and that might help.
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One of my favorite things about Button is how he tackles problems. He takes his time, thinks them through and comes up with workable solutions. I've been wondering where Button would end up on the sexuality curve and it looks like it's starting. It's also interesting to see all his friends and others grow. Andy needs more freedom or he's going to end up rebelling or depressed. Kevin and Brent are starting to mature and I can see a time in the future when Button and Kevin could be friends, or more.
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Great chapter. I'm happy Christopher is staying with the pack. Parker and Colt make good parents. I am sad about only one chapter and epilog to go. It's been a terrific journey.
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It's good to see Yuri making progress with his health and his relationship with Benny. A beautiful chapter that helped to forget about Tiger X for the moment.
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"The Twelve Labors of Hercules"
avidreadr commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in "The Twelve Labors of Hercules"
I love the realistic feel of how this family gets along. The feelings Graham is having are common when children start turning into teens and gravitate more towards their friends. It was also so sweet when the children realized this and came up with Pop's day. I look forward to reading more. -
Derek is a complete ass and Shauna is a bitch. I hope Jed and Buzz complete the mating soon and that Colton did send in their mating info to the council. I also hope that Wylie stays with them.
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Dr. Barron's Problem - Prompt 323
avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in Dr. Barron's Problem - Prompt 323
As long as Dr. Barron has nothing to do with Travis as a student, I don't see a problem. Since Travis is going for a Masters, he is no longer an undergraduate. -
Enjoying the story but one thing caught my attention. At the end, you mention Erin and Cherrie are following The guys as they run through the parking lot, but Erin didn't go to the mall.
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I keep wishing Jed would claim Buzz and formalize the mating, especially before Derek comes back into the picture. There are so many ways everything could play out but I do see at least one big fight but I can't pin down between who. I do think that Buzz is going to have to stand up to his brother once and for all.
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Have to admit, I wondered why Tiger X would want Yuri, who has a living mate. Benny didn't know him so I'm wondering if he's a renegade. Gives me something to look forward to next week.
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Chasing Dreams Out West
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chasing Dreams Out West
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I hope Kevin has learned a lesson, but, given his mother's attitude in past chapters, I doubt it. It's also sad about Tessa; she needs some intensive therapy and should get it for her grandchildren's sake. I look forward to each new chapter in this story. Thank you.
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A great end to a great story. It's good to see the pack doing so well. There are still things I'd love to read more about, whenever you can get around to it. Isla and Yulva's first changes, how the camp does, a mate for Henry, etc. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
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Can't wait to find out who the other tiger is and what he wants. Benny needs an outlet for his emotions and a good fight will do it., but i worry about how it would affect Yuri.
