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  1. avidreadr
    I'll miss new Neko stories; they're really addictive. You mentioned a sequel once so I'll keep on the lookout. In the meantime I'll have to be content with my chronic re-reading,
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    This was wonderful. As a one-shot, it's great but I could easily see maybe just a series of vignettes as time goes along. It would be interesting to see their relationship grow and both of them find satisfying relationships.
  3. avidreadr
    A wonderful feel-good story. I think Penelope is a good addition to the family.
  4. avidreadr
    Aww. So sweet. P.S. Kayden is right about feather dusters. They just redistribute the dust, not get rid of it.
  5. avidreadr
    Love Kayden. He has turned into such a lovable daredevil, everyone's hair will be gray from worrying about him!
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    Fall From Grace

    avidreadr commented on Bill W's story chapter in Fall From Grace

    A tragic end to a vitally important man. I hope the new movie does some good towards rehabilitating his reputation.
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    Promise Stars

    avidreadr commented on Aditus's story chapter in Promise Stars

    I enjoyed the story but I don't know whether to be annoyed (for not being told) or intrigued (by the chance to use my own imagination) as to the outcome of the mating.
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    Chapter 3

    avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I am not at all surprised by Nathan's actions; I didn't like the bastard from the start. I hope he stays gone. Clem deserves to be loved the way he wants.
  9. avidreadr
    These shorts are excellent but the title of this one, Dagger of Ignorance,did worry me a bit.
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    Chapter 1

    avidreadr commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Sad and happy all at the same time. It has a very real feel to it. Would love to read more.
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    Chapter 1

    avidreadr commented on MJTay3's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Excellent start. I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story.
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    Chapter 2

    avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I don't think Clem and Nathan are going to make it for the long haul, although that is partly based on not liking Nathan. Clem deserves someone who can treat him better, the way he wants to be treated.
  13. avidreadr
    Great scene. He got what he deserved. Just hope some of his info on Haskins can be used.
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    Chapter 26

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 26

    Loved it. Sasha was a wonderful character and I'm a sucker for HEA. But the scene at the end with Suki, is that sequel I'm smelling?
  15. avidreadr
    So funny. You've got to love Kayden.
  16. avidreadr
    Loved it. Ingenious use of the phrase "blue sweater".
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    Chapter 24

    avidreadr commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Great story and great chapter. . I have faith Devyn will pull through, but there's always a chance he won't. I eagerly await tomorrow's post.
  18. avidreadr
    Great story. Loved all the characters and great action. I'd like to assume they win but, damn, why not a brief sentence saying they did, Unless, of course, you're planning a sequel? Thank you for a great ride.
  19. avidreadr
    I am impressed with how much Kieran has matured, thanks to Robin's influence. He was certainly acting more mature and more brotherly than the bitch when he talked to her. I can understand why he is impatient about their own home but he shouldn't be made to feel uncomfortable in his own home. Rebecca has a long ways to go and needs to realize that Kieran is and will be her brother-in-law twice over and will always be in her life. Personally, I think she's jealous of how close he is to Shas and Robin.
  20. avidreadr
    Liked it. Maybe you can revisit them in another prompt? I'd love to read more about them,
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    Chapter 1 - Home

    avidreadr commented on kuragari129's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Home

    Very good beginning. The characters and story are well written and keep you reading and wanting ,more. Look forward to the next chapter.
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    Chapter 23

    avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Lacey is way out of line and needs to have her own kid. Sasha is not a child and it's going to take a few more confrontations before she get it. For all he's gone through, Sasha has a good head on his shoulders. Seeing a therapist might not hurt and may help him in dealing with Lacey.
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    Tear It Up

    avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Tear It Up

    Great chapter. Loved seeing Shastan finally tell off that bitch. That marriage is doomed unless she gets over her irrational hate for Kieran. She obviously feels threatened by him but it's time it ended. Her one good point is that she makes a great antagonist (villain seemed too strong as all she does is yell), Look forward to more.
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    Chapter 2

    avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I feel sorry for Hani. In their rush to create a soldier, they've all forgotten that he's very young emotionally and psychologically.
  25. avidreadr
    The race was exciting and well written. The story is wonderful and, as to Kieran and Sparrow, awww. I can't wait to read more.
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