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Saturday 1st June 2013 (Earlier)
avidreadr commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Saturday 1st June 2013 (Earlier)
I just finished reading the whole story, up to this point, for the first time and it's strong. There is enough blame to go around, as in real life. Bay overreacted, true, but he is young and struggling to cope with some big changes. The glimpses of his background do explain where his attitude came from and it was nice to see him learning to cope with it. His family and friends were really wrong to think he would become someone completely different because he was gay. I do question that anyone would believe those stereotypes today, but maybe some people do. I'm glad his relationship with Issac is back on track and I am curious about Bay's plans for his future. -
This chapter was wonderful and very true. Brings back memories of my late husband in surgery for cancer. All the emotions were there, the support from family, the long waits. Loved the ending. As to the delay in posting I always feel that, when you're giving us stories to read without charge, we don't really have a right to complain if life sometimes gets in the way. I get antsy for more, but feel it isn't right to push the author when there might be things going on that I don't know about. That said, I look forward to reading whatever you post next.
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If you have a maybe someday list, I would add these characters, or at least Dag. There is more than could be done with them. In the meantime I am eagerly awaiting more on Adverse Effects.
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Chapter 28 You Can't Do That To Me
avidreadr commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 28 You Can't Do That To Me
I could really learn to hate cliffhangers. A great chapter and I can't wait for the next, -
Excellent so far. Very interesting character. I suspect what is up with Dee; you gave us several hints. I really look forward to the next chapter and hope Sys is all right. Having had kids, one without drugs, I can really sympathize with the poor guy.
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Great story, which is not a surprise. The accident and all the emotions it aroused all rang true.
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Beautiful but so sad. I will look forward to Book II as I have hopes Noah and Luke get together. I have a son with Asperger's, a mild and highly functional form of autism, so I know how hard it can be for them to let new people into their lives. Luke will really be missing Noah, no matter what his family does.
