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Raphael's past is a bit tragic, it felt right to explore what that would be like to follow his grief with Gabe. So..voila, I hope you love it as much as Dimitri and Talin. Thanks Puppi!

Yes, a small glimpse from time to time of Talin and Dimitri Raphael is definitely a man on a learning curve... Thanks for reading!

Two Raphael stood with his hands folded behind him in his father’s office. The room was stifling, even though it was spacious, with floor-length windows bringing in light, none of which penetrated his black mood. His father watched him with keen eyes, twirling a pen. “You will follow your twin brother's path if you continue this line of thought,” Baek Yun frowned. “I allowed Gabe to choose his life, but he ended up dead. Do you want me to lose both of you?” Raphael swallowed

Life… the most precious gift… the most fragile… One “I brought you a care package.” Hyun Lee smiled at his little sister’s words. She always brought a care package every Saturday and never missed a day. “Your place is a mess,” Mina complained on the phone. Hyun sat back in his seat, studying the code running on his screen. He was close, so close. “Mina, if I cleaned up, you would be bored on Saturdays when you come over.” “Vegging out on your couch wa

Hyun Lee's sister is kidnapped by a shadowy organization, that then blackmails him to hack into mysterious bank accounts around the world. To save his sister, Hyun seeks out the Yun Family for help. Raphael Yun is a man plagued by a past he can't forget and a father who won't let him make his own choices. When he meets Hyun Lee, a man who'll do anything to save his little sister, everything changes.

Thank you so much for reading this story. Cheeks flaming...I'm now going back to each chapter updating this thing because I also realize that Dimitri would be Sedlackov and Sedlackova as I've named him throughout. So, thank you so much for catching that...I'll edit this as I go...you're awesome.

Thank you Zenith, I'm glad you loved reading this story. Cheers, Sui.

Thank you Jeff!

Thanks for pushing me through it... I know you loved this one. Thanks Jim!

Jae's trying to reach out to Justine is an attempt to understand Dan. I don't think I would do it, I'd refuse to even think about her existence, but Jae jumps right in and wants to know more about Dan. In a way, we can call that love...lolz musings of the author here... Jinho is going to be very bad soon, very bad indeed, but you know what happens to bad people....

I read your comment I'm like "YES!" that's right. Jae and Dan's relationship is not so simple I think. I mean sure they love each other, but they're so busy looking out for each other sometimes I feel like they're not stopping to really talk about what matters. Then again...relationships are messy like that...why can't they talk...argghhh...lolz. Thank you for an inspiring comment.

So, you're in love with these two I think because for me, it was such a hard chapter to write. Their chemistry while so clear, there is so much unsaid...glad the love came out though. I think it's like in a love song...I love you but you're hurting me...you know...lolz...Jae and Dan,

Jae and Dan...fear of the unknown...you know..it's the fear to lose something you really care about that keeps us from telling the truth, I think. Poor Jae though..

At first I wanted to put Jae in the hospital, but thought that would be too much. I couldn't do it...so I put Junghee in the hospital...lolz. I like how you're fixated on the wife factor...Poor Dan. Jaesun is always lurking in the shadows...like a bad dream...wooo...lolz.

Jokrong...I saw this comment and thought, I need to write more, faster, quicker...I'm hard at work.

Poor Jae...lolz..reading this now, I'm wondering if there shouldn't have been a bigger explosion at this news to Jae..but oh well, how it is worked out I think.

It's the big secrets that get kept away from relationships...out of fear e.t.c...somehow they always come out in the end.

Jae's love life is so tied into his music, going back and seeing this comment, I'm having a whole new inspiration for the final chapters. You know, when people have something good going on, you're always thinking how long is this going to last...it's scary when you think it's going to end soon. So that is part of Jae's problem I think..though Dan at this point should have been more communicative.

Thank you Onim, I work at the LOVE part...lolz..

Thank you Sacred...Dim and Talin are still on my thoughts...glad you loved them.

Thanks Aditus. The most interesting part, I read this comment and a few days ago, I was sitting thinking about Raphael. I'll see what can come off another brainstorm. Raphael was an intriguing character to write with this story, I do wonder how he'd turn out on his own..Thanks for reading, and I must have done a good job on the suspense... Thank you!

Thank you Cole, for reading this story and enjoying it. Truly!

I think I scared people a lot with this one... Thank you for reading, Suvitar

A dozen rose bushes stat!! Thanks LadyDe for reading. Dim and Talin are hot for sure.

This story was both a struggle and fun to write...mostly because once again the genre was different from my usual fluff... been exploring danger lately. Lucian's character was interesting to explore, he's both a villain and a good guy, but in such a grey manner, he's hard to hate sometimes. I had Dimitri wait because I felt it was time for him to just stop and face it, whatever comes. Running then might have meant living in the shadows again, so whatever the police wanted, he'd do it at that point, to save Talin, have a life with him...so it was more of him telling the police, yeah this was happening, I played this hand in it...and well...all I can give you is information on what I've done and who with. I've thought about the gun and the shooting, but since it's self defense, they'd have killed me first kind of defense, it would work with the investigator in charge. As for Raphael, he's naturally allergic to police...comes from his family business. I've been toying with the idea of exploring Raphael's love life...I'll see what comes out of it. For him, better to leave than even have some see him close to an investigation. The ending felt already made when I was writing this. These two have always gravitated toward each other, so it was just a matter of removing obstacles on the outside so they could move in already...I think that was the best part of this story. Cannd, I'm always glad for your indepth comments, I love them, thank you for taking your time to read this story of mine. Cheers, Sui.