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    A Sad Day

    I'm so sorry.... so sorry...
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    Chapter 12

    Vlad is creepy...she gives me the shivers too. Thanks for reading Puppilull
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    Chapter 12

    Dimitri has an agenda...one that might shock everyone...though the secrets seem to be all out now. Perhaps it has become about seeing this through and playing the cards under his sleeve without reasonable proof would have led to a more disturbing scene. Vlad is kind of cray cray...However, Talin's stronger side is coming out now, and Dimi might have a partner to help him out of this mess soon...
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    Chapter 12

    I hope I bring hope in the coming chapters now... A silver lining at the end is coming...
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    Chapter 12

    Raphael does need a smack, he's too much. Thanks for reading!
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    Chapter 11

    Hehehe.....the cliff hanger was intentional,lolz...
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    Chapter 11

    Reading this now, I think Raphael is one of those characters that sort of jumps out and goes like, notice me, I'm here, what do you think I'll do next...lolz. Thank you, has me thinking...mmmm...
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    Chapter 13

    I think Talin was in a bit of haze during this whole chapter, an explosion of the bad coming at him on all sides, he just focused on Raphael. Lucian's moment is coming soon, he has a role to play, I've been toying with him lately, and I think he'll play a vital role soon. Thank you for always letting me read your surprise, your outrage, and excitement Cannd. It's really something. Sui.
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    Chapter 13

    That's true, Talin did lose his mind there, and I'm so glad that came out for you. Dimitri is the calm in the storm. Thank you for this...
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    Chapter 14

    14 Revenge was a futile goal. One that ended in disappointment and more pain, Talin thought. He’d loved Gabriel as a husband should: as a lover, and as a friend. He’d thought he knew everything about Gabriel. Every single secret, his nature, his heart…Talin closed his eyes. He loved Raphael too, like he would his own brother, because Raphael was Gabriel’s twin. How could it be possible not to know everything about the people he’d loved all his life? How could it be possible? They’d hid
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    Chapter 5

    Chapter 5 The impact of the car hitting a tree was deafening and abrupt. Hideki was glad for the seatbelt, but it tightened to the point of pain. “Unlock your seatbelt,” Kazuma ordered from the front seat. Hideki’s fingers fumbled on the push button on the seatbelt. He couldn’t get it to work. Kazuma was suddenly in the back seat, sweeping his hands away. Kazuma snapped the seatbelt open. “We need to go into the trees,” Kazuma said. Hideki’s gaze returned to the driver who was slumped o
  12. Thanks Valkyrie
  13. There are days, and there are days: Today has been a hard one. I spend ninety percent of my time working, the other ten percent, is for doing those things that make me happy. A few months ago, I met this guy, and you know how you just click with someone at first meet....that sounds corny...but yes, it happens. There are those people you meet and you just get each other right off. He made it easy to bring down the ninety percent to fifty of work and just spending time out in the air, enjoying life. As karma would have it, this have-fun-with-life man has a girlfriend. Has been seeing her for months on end, before we ever met. That was hard to discover. There was a short phase of wishing that I had it in me to become the evil witch who would do all that was possible to break them up. Sadly, I don't have it in me, so I've been uber nice to this lady. Anyway, today I discover they're getting married, and I might have screamed and cried inside, while I wished them well. It's now back to the ninety percent of work, perhaps even ninety-five percent. Yeah, the day has been a grinder. Sharing today, because, well...this just needs sharing and a bottle of Merlot.
  14. Chapter 4 Dan studied the picture on the entertainment magazine on his lap. Jae looked handsome, his hair falling around him even as he smiled at the unknown woman in his arms. The stab of jealousy that swept through him was unexpected. He hadn’t felt jealous with Jae since their days on the first tour in the States. A lifetime ago, he thought. Placing the magazine on the seat beside him, Dan let a sigh escape. He’d always known loving Jae wasn’t going to be easy, but days like today….see
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    Chapter 13

    13 Talin drove to Raphael’s too fast. The fear that had crippled him before now raged inside him. It fanned a deep raging fire, one that wanted truth, if nothing else. Gabriel was dead. He couldn’t change that. However, he mourned the loss of his sweet Gabriel who’d done so much for him. If he was to die, then he wanted the truth for why he’d had to watch Gabriel bleed out to death. Talin gripped the steering wheel tight. He stared at his hands wondering how far Vlad’s poison had gone.
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    Chapter 4

    Chapter 4 Friday morning, Hideki sat at the dining table waiting. He sipped his coffee, swiftly sorting through his email. He answered queries, marked business opportunities, and discarded unnecessary information. All through that, his gaze constantly returned to the door…waiting. “Who are you looking for?” Haru asked. “Hmm…” Hideki glanced at Haru. “Eat your breakfast, Haru. Aoki won’t be pleased if you leave a full plate.” Haru picked up his fork and ate a piece of his omelet. Hideki
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    Chapter 12

    12 Talin met Raphael’s gaze, wanting to rip him in two. If he’d done anything…anything at all to lead to Gabriel’s death, he was going to kill him. “What did you do?” Talin demanded. “Not here,” Raphael said his gaze pleading. Talin, aware Vlad was watching them with a triumphant gaze, swallowed back his rage and settled in his seat, but not without a warning glance at Raphael. He was going to find out what Raphael had done. Raphael sighed and looked to Vlad. “That’s cheap, Vlad.” “You
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    Chapter 3

    Chapter 3 Fire ignited deep inside him. Hideki could barely think past the feel of Kazuma’s lips against his. He opened his mouth to protest, but Kazuma slid his tongue in, dragging him through burning sensation. He sucked on Kazuma’s tongue, needing more, wanting more…how could the man taste so good? Kazuma tugged him closer, wrapping his arm around Hideki’s waist, pulling Hideki’s naked chest against his. Strong fingers sank into Hideki’s hair, holding him still as the kiss continued unt
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    A Haunted Love

    Thank you for reading! Haru makes my heart ache coz i know how he feels...Hyde on the other hand is someone who is going to be fun to write...I hope to keep your interest to the end. Cheers.
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    Chapter 11

    Quite the fast thinking I tell you...thank you for reading...answers next chapter...
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    Chapter 10

    7letcher, thank you for reading A Healing Heart. I'm glad it holds your interest..I will keep updating it for sure, 'til the end. I hope you find my other stories as interesting. Cheers. Sui
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    Chapter 10

    Raphael is a character who helps unravel a lot of mysteries. He's really someone I created to help give the answers...lolz, so saying too much about him might unravel my nice little web. But, he does play a large role in the next few chapters. As for dinner with Vlad, well, she certainly doesn't disappoint on drama....I think she lives for such moments. Playing with people like little toys, regardless of who they are. All I know is don't eat the chocolate cake if she offers it.
  23. I sort of muddle along when it comes to writing, but I have a story that has so many people waiting for it, that I thought it is better to share what my thoughts are. The frustration of waiting to read the next chapter....I understand this very well. So... For A Healing Heart - > Read it Here I've set it up that a chapter goes up every week. On Fridays or Saturdays. Catch up with the new chapter. - Talin and Dimitri find themselves in a difficult situation at dinner with Vlad. A Haunted Love - > Read it Here This is a new story. I'll post the new chapter on Tuesdays. Catch up with the new chapter - Hideki and Kazuma get used to each other....and a sizzling kiss. I suddenly realize I've started a trend of naming my stories with "A..." what a peculiar trend. Hmm... To all of you who read me...you're my special people, Thank You! Sui.
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    Chapter 11

    11 Talin spent his afternoon in the back office at the Talon. He sent out restocking orders to suppliers, checked the sales from the previous night, and prepared bank deposit slips. The math gave him a reprieve, momentarily returning him to his normal life. Pulling out the top drawer of his desk to get new bank slips, he paused when he saw Detective James’s card. Taking it out, Talin wondered what the detective would say if he knew the truth about Dimitri. Would the detective arrest Dimitr
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    Chapter 11

    Thank you very much, Kellen. I'm glad you enjoyed this story.
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