lilansui
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I love Simon Baker, watch the mentalist all the time. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Promise Sacred...to update soon that is. Cheers.
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Thanks ninecila! I was glad for her too. I'll pass along the message
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Hiro's days are numb.. **clears throat** not going to continue, plot spoilers, Ryo's family plays a large role into why he acts the way he does. Family issues really do mold people into what they are. I'm hoping to show that with Ryo. As always, thanks for your review, Lisa. Hope you're having a good holiday?
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I was a bit unsure of that scene, but I'm glad it worked out. The trio in the house is exciting to write for. I like writing for the three of them. Glad that feel is coming out. Thanks for the comment Layla. Look forward to more.
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Sacred, so a flower for every time you make my day. You're going to have a full garden soon. Hehe. Glad you loved it.
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Thanks Conner!! Truthfully was a bit nervous about that.
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Thank you Terry for reading and loving the story. Makes my day. Look forward to the next couple of chapters.
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Sacred, glad you loved it, we'll see about Shane and how he and Alexi react to each other. Thanks for reading as always.
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Hi Conner, always love your insight. Thanks for reading.
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Joshua lay staring at the ceiling, his feet on the side of the head board. Beside him, Alexi’s head was buried in a silver sheet, his skin golden in the daylight. The bed was a mess of covers; pillows were strewn on the floor. He turned to his side and ran a hand over Alexi’s back, caressing the soft skin. “Water,” Alexi said, shifting slightly. “I need water then I’ll let you do anything.” Joshua chuckled. “Are you battering wild sexual favors for water?” “I’ve already dished those out. I do
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A soft touch on Alexi’s shoulder woke him up. He lifted his head pulling off a piece of music paper stuck to his cheek. He’d been lying over the closed of the piano in the studio. “Let’s go home,” Lily said dressed in pajama bottoms and a t-shirt, her feet in flip flops. She reached for the music sheets he’d been lying on. “It’s almost midnight.” He jumped to his feet and grabbed the sheets out of her hands. “Stop, get Andy. I finished it.” “What?” Lily frowned at him. “Can’t you do the recor
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“Stay still, Soubi. The shot has to be right.” Soubi closed his eyes and breathed out trying to keep still in the awkward position. His head was braced against another model’s stomach, his body curved back over the same model’s shoulder, with his legs braced against the wall. Every part of his body was painted gold. His hair filled with sparkling glitter blew under his head, hitting against the strong muscled model holding him around his waist. His right hand lay flat on a chiseled fla
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Yay! I'm glad Conner.
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Rin is a tool I'm glad you love the story, thanks for the review.
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I love your reaction to Rin. Start an enterprise with your Furiroda, hehe, make them do the work, just kidding Thanks for the awesome review, Lisa.
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I love that you love Ryo! I'll make sure to update soon. Chapter 13 of EBAC is with editor. It should be up soon.
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Like ice must melt under the heat, Soubi melted against Rin’s assault. This was an assault, Ryo thought, because Rin knew, he knew that Soubi couldn’t fight him. Ryo sat at the kitchen table frozen. How many times had he watched this happen? Five years ago, Rin auditioned for his band, Blazing Red. He promised Soubi nothing would change. But, a year later as the band gained popularity, Ryo sat in this same chair watching Soubi cry because Rin was cheating on him with the band’
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Writing Tip Writing Tip: The Writer's Yellow Brick Road
lilansui commented on Trebs's blog entry in Writing World
Great tips, at a very good time for me too, doing some serious editing and you just helped me. -
I aim to please... Working hard Jo. Thanks for your thoughts
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I knew a Rin once. He was a tool too. Lol. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks Lisa.
