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Ryo's family estate...Hmm...I think I'll slip that in earlier chapters during editing to allow it to flow better. The size of the estate wouldn't allow it to be in Tokyo, no space. Thanks for that comment made me think. This is why I love you, Lisa!!. We'll have to see Ryo's reaction to his mom and his new situation. You're right on the stand up to her, but our Ryo still needs to face a few realities. You're thinking ahead of me, with Kaito and Sakura, just for that I think I'll actually do it just like that. Hahaha. You and Jo Ann are hilarious, I can just imagine Sei on a broom like Harry Potter, and then it's starts burning. Wonder what would happen to her designer clothes and the stick up her butt. Thanks for a good laugh.
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Ryo's mom, she'll make sense soon. hehehe.
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Yep, I'm just dishing out hard scenes and responsibilities for Ryo and Soubi, but that's life right. Always glad to see your thoughts, JoAnn
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I'm touched, thanks Sacred. It was hard having Tohaku die, but somehow it just ended up that way. Anyway, as always thanks so much for the review.
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Hi Lisa, yes, this was a sad chapter. Ryo would be considered the eldest son after the death of his brother, so he'd end up having to help plan the funeral. Means he has to be at home for almost two weeks. A bit more involved right...hehe thanks for the review Lisa.
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The sea of white chrysanthemums surrounding Tohaku Asada’s picture was sobering. Guests filed in, Ryo greeted them, his jaw set as hard as his starched black collar. The black tie around his neck was choking him. He adjusted it and returned a bow from the Minister of Finance. “Ryo,” a familiar voice said, and he glanced up in surprise. Soubi stood before him handsome in a black suit and black tie. His hair held tight in a ponytail. Beside him, Kaito was similarly dressed although
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I'm so excited to find this story, I've missed it. Of course Meghan knows who wrote it, she has to know, my head is starting to spin already. I want to know about that note Autumn. Like Lisa, I agree that Dylan's mom is really awesome. Do put up the next chapter soon, can't wait to find out what Meghan has to say. Great chapter!!
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It was a sad chapter to write, hoping Soubi finds the strength needed too. Thank you for your review.
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“What did you read?” Soubi asked on a soft gasp. Ryo trailed kisses on his chest, licking at his nipples gently, and then continued down to his stomach. “Your story with the two lovers who end up in different continents,” Ryo said, dusting kisses on Soubi’s flat stomach. “Anyone I know?” Soubi sunk his fingers into Ryo’s coal black hair. “It was just a story.” “I doubt that. It felt personal. Your words were sad, wistful.” Ryo licked his navel and blew softly on the wet
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Catnip is so hard to give up though, John,...can you tell, I had a kitten last year. Very addicted to that stuff. Hopefully Alexi can beat the habit without too much pain. As for Joshua, judging from the kind of family Alexi comes from, winning them over might be challenging, but he's a smart guy. I think Adrian could be capable of doing anything at this point. You're right about that, although it would also mean he'd have to give up all ties to Alexi. I guess we'll find out soon enough if Alexi matters at all to him in that sense. I love sharing this story with you, talking about it is even better. Thank you for the opportunity. As always, Sui.
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So much anticipation for this meeting, I'm actually under a bit of pressure, hehehe, but don't worry, I can take it. I'm busy writing away, it's coming easier than the previous two chapters. Thanks for reading Sacred.
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Thank you Sacred. I try to include as many of those moments as I can, because in the end that's what relationships are about, the small weird things. Truth is I once had a boyfriend who'd hold my handbag hostage when we were arguing. I thought that was funny. As for Ryo's brother, he's getting a lot of time soon, he'll play a much larger role than you expected, so look forward to more. Love that you loved the chapter. As always, Thanks Sacred.
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Ryo's brother is a tad selfish, I'll say for him that he probably doesn't realize he's being selfish yet. As for Soubi's writing, hopefully Ryo will convince him to do more than hide it away in the back of the closet. Thanks Jo Ann.
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A friend told me that about the texting, I couldn't resist. It's Kotaru, you're doing fine. I'm actually writing Ch. 17 right now, hoping it comes out soon. It's kind of exciting that we're at this moment now, which is awesome. Thanks for reading Lisa.
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I hear yah, Jo Ann. I'll post more chapters soon. Thanks for reading.
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Soubi's writing...more to come on that on the next chapter. It definitely wasn't Ryo, so he might want to know more about that...Soubi surprised me too with not getting mad, but there was already drama going on, I guess that's how he wanted it. The next two chapters are crucial to their love and a few decisions, we'll have to see Ryo's brother role in all that. Thanks Lisa.
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Eccentric, hmmm, probably, definitely not like Joshua's family. I'll work on the Dazzle
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I like that 'catnip' reference with Rin. Ryo's brother however is a defining factor in this story, so watch out for more. As for Catnip, a new dose is up already, check it out. Thanks for the review John, always a pleasure.
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Alexi woke up at eight Monday morning. He took a long shower fighting anxiety jitters under the hot water. Butterflies fluttered in his stomach at the thought of starting the summer program in the afternoon. He’d faced large audiences in stadiums but the idea of standing before a few students, teaching, -he closed his eyes. It will be fine. Back in his bedroom, he pulled on a light blue t-shirt and shorts, running a negligent hand through his damp hair. Joshua filled his thoughts on his way
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“No way,” Ryo said with a set jaw. “You’re not taking Rin’s job. In fact, you should stop modeling. What else would you like to do?” “Stop being a bastard.” Soubi stuffed socks and underwear into a small bag. “You told Rin I run my career. Why the hell are we fighting about it?” “He’s offering you a job. I know how big Blazing Red is, Soubi. If you accepted their job offer, you’d get enormous exposure.” Ryo cursed under his breath and kicked at the box he was filling with shoe
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Soubi is always forgetting to look after himself, at least he has Ryo to watch out for him. As for Rin, he might surprise you, hehe. Thanks for the review, Lisa.
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Sadly that situation with the market in Shimokitazawa is really happening right now. They're building a new Tokyo Station at that market, its a bitter sweet situation for everyone. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, knowing that fuels my muse to keep writing, so thank you for your thoughts, Jo Ann. as always.
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Hi Renee, I think Cia might have something going with her comment. You say writing has always been an escape, a way to cope. It could be what you want to cope with or escape is the reason for the muse disappearing. You might be so worried about it and not dealing, because you're not dealing, it's affecting the writing without you realizing it. I think it would be great to step away from the writing and focus your attention on why you need the escape. Once you know the problem. even though there is no solution at hand, at least knowing what the issue is might jump start the muse. Otherwise tight tight,
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Haha, Rin just wants to let everyone know not to forget him. As for ranting hag mother, wonder what you'd say if I told you she's modeled after some one I know. Love your reviews Joann, thanks.
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I really had a lot of fun writing that scene, kept laughing to myself. I kept getting funny looks from the housemates in the living room. hehe.
