You have no idea the battle I had to add in everything in this chapter. I changed it so many times...lol...endless house debates later, I opted to finish it like I did, and start the editing process. I'll make sure to flesh out Tohaku's subplot and also see if the ending won't include a steamy scene or two . When it's done, I'll definitely put it up on the e-book section. I'm glad you weren't lost in translation, that is so important for me to know, thank you. I kept having nightmares when I included something cultural and stuff.
As you can tell with this comment,I love reviews, and responding to them, thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. Very much appreciated.
Sui.