I'm at a loss, Zune deserved Kev's reaction. This chapter was difficult, i find myself sympathizing with both camps. Kev gets very angry and how the whole group of friends shut Zune out is really sad. Even Carol's reaction, Zune is in a difficult place. As for Kev, he's so justified in his anger, hard to tell where this goes. Great job on that by the way, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
And Edward, what is going on with him, he has clearly managed to change his whole personality, are you sure Aliens didn't take him over or something? Jeez, the bracelet thing was cute, and I hate that I like that he's so good to Zune. You're confusing me, Sacred, I want the next chapter now....already. I might actually start rooting for an Edward and Zune. What would that be, Zunward? EdZune? lol. Great Writing, I love it!!