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lilansui

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  1. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    Thanks Joann. I guess the nerves just come anyway, hehe. Glad it was good. Rin is my pet project, I love to hate him.
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 11

    Aww...I'm working hard, shuffling some projects in real life and writing. All is great though. I hear you on the updates. I've been drafting the next two chapters together so you get a two for one next post. I give it Thursday or Friday. I love your enthusiasm for this story. It really makes my day and I hope to make it as fun as possible to the end for you. Thanks Sacred.
  3. Ryo’s arm on Soubi’s shoulder tightened and Soubi winced as he stared at Rin Kouga. The man looked too good, too vital. Soubi sighed. Rin’s hair was dyed deep red, and cut in a Mohawk. The burgundy t-shirt and fitted grey pants showed off Rin’s strong physique. Rin’s eyes had always been his defining factor. Now they were shaded with black kohl, always looking the part of lead guitarist for Blazing Red. Rin wore the dark glasses hanging on the front of his t-shirt. “We’re indoors
  4. lilansui

    Prodigy

    What an array of characters! I find myself drawn in by Siggi's attitude, he's such a set of sides. And the nicknames he has for everyone, I laughed through some of the scenes. He reminds of a jaded old man who just doesn't want to see the beautiful side of situations. Or can't, either way, he's fascinating to me, wonder what that says about me. Hmm. Gunni, so proud of him to have made it as an Orchestra leader. I can't imagine how he's going to fit into Siggi's world. I feel like he should be wearing armor made of platinum or something.The characters in the orchestra are definitely going to introduce him to a new world. I read this through to eight, ran out of likes, so I'll come back to like chapter eight. Great story, can't wait to read some more of Siggi.
  5. Aww Yettie, why can't i have all three at the same time I think Valentine's day is a big thing if you're dating. If you're not, it's a great day to binge on chocolates without feeling guilty for the extra calories and wear red clothes for fun.
  6. lilansui

    Weekly Wrap Up!

    Trebs, all will go very well for you. Keep fighting...
  7. Oh wow, your grandson is so cute, makes me want to hug him. I love the way you love Jo Ann, such a big warm heart. I'm sure it wasn't an easy decision for your daughter. It's hard to give up the kind of support you offer so effortlessly, so, I'm pretty sure she'll do her best to make sure they visit you once in a while. It's okay to be sad, and happy at the same time. It just means you love her very much. Like Yettie says, 'hang in there, girl.' Cheers, Sui
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    Drama is the name of the game, thanks Sacred.
  9. lilansui

    Chapter 10

    I had a lot of fun writing Ryo's mom. she's scary. hehe
  10. lilansui

    Chapter 9

    I'll do my best taking care of Ryo and Soubi. They're really fun to write so, don't worry the chapters will come.I'm so glad you love reading my stories. You make my day and make the juggling so worth it. Happy February, John.
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 9

    Hmm...so suspicious Sacred. Well read on, don't fear the storm, it's exhilarating. As always, thank you.
  12. “Tell me something,” Ryo said, holding Soubi on the couch in the living room. He trailed fingers through Soubi’s hair, rubbed the silky dark strands against his fingers. Soubi shifted lazily over him, his eyes closed. The television was on playing an old English movie. Soubi was half dozing through it. “What?” Soubi asked. “Why did you grow your hair?” Ryo pulled the throw blanket higher over Soubi’s shoulders. “Wouldn’t it have been hard for you?” Soubi shook his head, t
  13. “That tickles.” Soubi laughed as he lay on the floor on top of a paper. Ryo knelt over him, tracing a pen along his armpit. He tried not to laugh but the darned pen tickled his skin, he giggled. “Don’t move,” Ryo admonished with a wide grin clearly not repentant for teasing him. Rock music pulsed on the radio. Yojiro Noda’s voice filled the workshop behind the Furiroda shop. Kaito had two young women assisting him at the front. Ryo had Soubi posing for a series of paintings.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    Thanks so much Lisa. I'm glad to see your review.
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 8

    Thanks Sacred.
  16. “I made dinner.” Ryo pulled out a seat at the kitchen table for him. “It’s yakitori, your favorite.” Soubi stared at the dishes laid out on the table: grilled skewered chicken and vegetables, rice and miso soup. He sat and smiled when Ryo helped him push in his chair. He touched the fine black lacquered plate set before him. Ryo sat across him, poured green tea into two cups, and slid one to him. Soubi picked one of the skewers from the tray, affording Ryo a smile, and bit into
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 15

    I loved him walking into the kitchen to find Taka and Lily. I miss writing for her these past few chapters, so glad you loved that. Thanks for another thoughtful review.
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    thank you. yay!!
  19. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Rin will show up soon, you might get your wish with Ryo and Soubi next chapter. I'm just working on it right now. Hopefully, it will turn out okay. great to have you back, around here.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 6

    I loved the ending, you know Ryo has a temper too. It shows up sometimes. He has to show it. Love your reaction.
  21. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    Made me smile writing it, I'm happy you had a good time reading this.
  22. lilansui

    Chapter 15

    Oh my dear Sacred, I've been wondering where you were. I did miss you. So glad to see your review. Sherry is gaining a hate club. hehe.
  23. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Ryo and Soubi are an interesting concept, not like what I've written before, I think i'd call them an experiment on my part.I'm testing myself with their wild, complex, maybe simple yet difficult drama. I'll take the 'most frustrating', it makes me smile. It's great to see your comment on this story, John. Thanks so much for the review.
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 15

    Hmm...great idea, dual homes in different continents. I dig that.I'm glad you're so loving the story, it makes my day. Don't worry, Lisa feels the same way about Sherry. You're in great company. Look forward to more. Thank you for the review
  25. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Thanks Layla! Ryo took things into his hands. Hopefully, they will both come to an agreement.
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