BeautybutBroken

I first read this story years and years ago but recently, I found myself thinking about it. This led me back here to read it again. I love this story. It's one that sticks with you long after you read it

Great chapter! I was a bit surprised when Nate and Jeff did it. I thought when Mandy left the room, they were just gonna jack each other off or something like that. I figured the first time they did it would be special lol my mistake!

Invisible Can I disappear? Become someone else Stand in the lithosphere Just for an hour Maybe for a day It has to be possible These must be a way I wanna be above Away from the shadows Let me be free I won’t stand in the gallows Death is not a wish Or even a request It’s getting harder to breathe Knowing I can’t pass the test Humiliation Where’s my retaliation? I’m not anything But a creation Can I be on top? Have no one look down on me? Just a chance, just

Great poem! sad but true...

OMG! Best ending ever! you scared me there for a minute. i thought tibal was really gonna leave. I hate that the story is over though! you did a great job!

I can't believe Tibal has 2 little girls. OMG! it's just so cute seeing him as a dad to them. But now that Chad is back in the picture...hmmm...Wonder how and if Tibal and Chad are gonna put the pieces back together (Which i totally think they should!) Did Mia die??? I hope not. i mean even though she did get in between the boys, she did help them both out. she wouldn't deserve to die. I loved the chapter though. Great way to start part 3. I'll be waiting for the next.

no offence but i hate reading the ending of this chapter! I think it was so wrong of luke to do that. But it worked out ok i guess lol

Now i definatly see where luke and noah from the soap oprea come in at!!! i can't believe i didn't see it before. Noah tried to hide is feelings from luke in the soap too even though he really did like him. And Luke was opened about his feelings waiting for noah to finally admit to them. I knew something good would come out of watching those tv shows lol

OMG! i can't believe Chad did that. You surprised me there. Lol i wasn't for sure what would happen but i never thought that of all things would. Hmm i wonder what's gonna happen now. Tibal is gonna be miserable

Such a HUGE surprise about Eddie being in the wreck. It really scared me lol.

You're not too bad a reveiwing lol i'm glad you got somthing from them. As i grew up, i always thought that a poem had to rhyme. I know that it doesn't have to but it doesn't seem good enough to me if i don't make them rhyme.I will be writing more soon. Hope you stick around

I seriously thought Aaron was gonna rape Rory

Loved it. I must admit i did rate this story before i read it. But i had a good feeling about it. This poem was great.

Yay! this is the first story i've read that has my name in it It's pretty cool. Well maybe not my WHOLE first name. But close enough lol

Wow a jail break. I never thought of that lol. I wonder how this is gonna work out. Mia with the 2 guys. i think it's not gonna go very smooth but then again... i may be wrong.