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A.J.

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  1. :Vic2: Happy Birthday John! :Vic2:
  2. Happy belated birthday Benji! Hope you win big at keno today!
  3. :Vic2: Happy Birthday Wayne! :Vic2:
  4. Sam, you're a hottie! Who knew? I love the facial hair.
  5. I'm guessing someone who likes bacon. Is this a trick question?
  6. Have you ever tried cooking it in the oven? I can't cook bacon on the stove and microwaved bacon is awful. Plus, you can use parchment paper and there is far less mess.
  7. Am I the only one who read this and thought bacon sounded good right now? I'm worried if I shave with this product and a guy kisses me afterwords and smells bacon he might decide to bite me instead. Eek!
  8. ~ Happy Birthday Mikie ~
  9. ~ Happy Birthday Louis ~
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    Celethiel, Thanks for your review. My intent was to focus on how the two stopped being friends and how they were able to reignite that friendship. As for the story seeming unfinished, I would like to think that Danny and Mitch still spend time together even though Danny is married.
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    Ashi, Thanks for reading and reviewing the story. I've always been one to reject easy outcomes in stories where all the characters end up being gay, or everything works out perfectly. Mitch would have loved to spend his life with Danny, but in the end he had to settle for just friendship. They couldn't just run into each other and decide to be friends again. It took effort on both of their parts to make the friendship work again. Isn't that true of all friendships and relationships? Both have to want it to work.
  12. I buy books for my 5 year old niece from Scholastic Books (#17) and they still do those paper book order forms just like when I was young.
  13. I'll be there if I can manage to drive across LA before the meetup is over. Just kidding, I'll be there for sure!
  14. I've been surfing almost 20 years and I can't even remotely do something like that. Normally when I try an aerial maneuver I end up wiping out.
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    Rebelghost85, Thanks for reading the story and commenting. People do seem far more tolerant now than when I was first coming out. Unfortunately, there are still places around the globe where being openly gay is still not possible. I look forward to the day when people can be themselves without repercussions.
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    Joann, Thank you for reviewing the story and your comments. I've always thought it gets harder each day after a fight to make things right. The divide just seems to grow until it is almost impossible to close it. The essays give Danny and Mitch a chance to close that divide. I'm glad you liked the concept.
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    Louis, Thank you for your review, editing skills and kind comments. You are right, the story has a deeper meaning to me and I tried to include memories from my childhood in it. Bethany, in the story, represents a real girl my age who lost her older brother in a car crash. When I wrote both essays, my goal was to make them mean something special to the main characters in the story, but also have a universal appeal to others. I thought Bethany might hear Mitch's essay and think about her brother. I wanted to write something that would stir my emotions if i read it. I am happy to know that others have read it and had similar reactions.
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    John, Awww thanks. That means a lot for you to say such nice things about it. =) I appreciate you reading and reviewing the story. As I mentioned to another reviewer, I toyed with several ideas regarding how to explain why Max was more than just a metaphor for Mitch. This was the version I favored even though the switch from first to third person is clunky.
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    Conner, Thank you for your review and comments. We often read coming out stories from the POV of the person coming out. I wanted to write one from the POV of the best friend who can't deal with it. Danny represents all of those kids who want to be friends with someone who is gay, but are afraid of what others might think. There is usually a way back. Danny was luckily able to find his.
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    Andy, Thank you for the review and your comments. The story means a lot to me as well and I'm glad to know that it has stirred the emotions in someone other than myself. I can't wait to start working on another story, but I'm still brainstorming ideas here.
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    Mann, Thank you for your review and comments. I will agree that the switch from first person to third person in the epilogue is clunky, but I didn't want to explain the significance of Max until the very end. I wanted people to accept that Mitch took Danny back without knowing the full story of why the essay unnerved him. I toyed with the idea of a flashback at the end. Danny giving his teddy bear to Mitch in the hospital, but I didn't feel it was as powerful as Mitch passing on Max to Drew.
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    Mitch and I had been friends since preschool. Our parents quickly became friends as well and it wasn’t long before Mitch’s family moved from an apartment into a house just a few blocks away from ours. Mitch and I spent most of our youth together and we were lucky enough to be in the same class all the way through elementary school. Once we were in middle school things changed. We were allowed to choose the classes we wanted to take, and although we were close, we didn’t share the exact same
  23. Mitch and I have been best friends since preschool. Growing up is never easy though. I remember the day it happened like it was yesterday, the day I had lost my way.
  24. I would like to second the comments made by both Podga and MikeL. I just love Vic and he welcomed me to GA chat with open arms. When I don't run into him in chat, I find myself wishing he was there. :Vic2: Three Cheers for Vic! :Vic2:
  25. I like songs about relationships, whether it be about friendships, falling in love or breaking up, that are gender-neutral so that they could apply to any pairing of two people. This isn't to say I can't or don't enjoy songs that use pronouns or clearly talk about females, but I wouldn't send that song to a guy and say this is how I feel about you. I'm curious what songs others like that fall into this category. I'll start us out with a few I can think of off the top of my head: Just a Kiss by Lady A I Won't Give Up by Jason Mraz I'm Yours by Jason Mraz Sweetest Perfection by Depeche Mode What Hurts the Most by Rascal Flatts Somebody to Love by Queen
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