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Ummmm, I'm not ready for this chapter to end, lol. I want the hunters to pay dearly for what they did and I want Luke to be the one to deal out their punishment!

OH, wow...Neph....what are you up to here? My mind is spinning in a million directions. Where'd Michael go? Is Uzzy ok? Is Pasha ok? What kind of damaged has been caused from the build up of power and then the gun shot? Did Michael get destroyed in the process or did Uzzy's plan backfire? Just as I thought things might be settling down you send me soaring off the cliff. Great Chapter and I'll be anxiously awaiting the next one!

I have to admit that I did not see this turn of events coming. Lee??? Really, Cobs???? He needs to have a little more respect for himself. He admits that he is tired of fallin, chasing or being with emotionally unavailable men that are so far in the closet that they are visiting that rainbow colored plumbing. Yet he gets with another one. What a statement he is sending to Pete. What a way to actually let someone know that you like them and want them to be more than a friend. Corbs, I hate to break it to you, but allowing your legs to be opened like a garage door with one push of your button or slipping your hot dog between the buns is not a very reassuring way of showing that person how you truly feel. Its kind of like being caught with the pool boy's ankles behind your ears by your partner and claiming that the pool boy was simply trying to help you find your lost contact lens. It simply won't work!

Yes, I am so glad to see Tanner back in the picture!!! Even if hi and Dyl are just going to be friends that is fine as long as him and Dyl can spend some time together. Still an amazing story!

I think that Corbs hit on a very true and important aspect when it comes to Pete. He admitted that he didn't really know Pete. He knew his routine and stuff like that but he didn't really know the inner Pete, his past- the things that make Pete who he is today. Maybe he would be wise to take the time to actually talk to Pete. Corb spends all his time getting to know the surface of people, or so it sounds like it, but fails to peel back the exterior and gets to know the inner workings of those he cares about in his life. Mike is like window shopping for Corb. He can see it, maybe try it on, but he can never actual buy it. I like Mike but it sucks being infatuated or wanting something that you cannot have and it only gets worse the more you try to obtain it. As much as I like Mike I think that Corb needs to set some boundaries with him and stick to them!!! It wouldn't be so bad if Corb was only out for a good time and didn't want someone special, but we heard from his own mouth that he wants someone that wants to be with him and doesn't have those barriers. Corb also does sound like the kind of guy that will be happy playing second fiddle and that is all he would ever be for Mike- until he finds a girl to marry.

The possibilities here. Will you go with Ace and Dylan meeting and things going from there or will you simply put them as friends only? I'm really enjoying the story. Love following the flow and the introduction of new characters. Everything flows together with such ease. Its amazing!

Wow, with family like Natalia, Pete and especially Uncle Juan who needs enemies? Sounds like we are in for quite a roller coaster ride with the up coming events. Eagerly looking forward to those chapters!

Oh wow. Its done I'm going to miss reading this story. Its an awesome story and extremely well written. Thank-you for sharing it with all of us! I guess I'll learn to accept that Dalen and Gavin are together and not Dalen and Bart, lol Have to give you a hard time about that but as they always said in the story "The Goddess directed their paths where they should go". I'm off to check out more of your stories!

I'm getting your slight hint about 'family' from my previous comment left regarding Gavin vrs Bart. I'll still hold out hope but I think I have my answer. Interested in seeing just how Dalen, Gavin and all of them are going to get out of Haven. I'm also waiting to see just what becomes of Dalen's mom. Will she be killed for her help? Will she flee with them or will they limit her powers even more?

Great chapter. Glad that justice is being handed out. It did surprise me that Pasha was the one wanting to dismantle their atoms and scatter them while it was Uziel that was the voice of reason. I would have figure Uziel would be the one to want to blast them while Pasha was the voice of compassion. Like all your stories I am going to be sorry to see this one end. I get so wrapped up in them that they are over before I know it.

I'm still thinking that Bart and Delan would make the perfect pair. I'm enjoying the seemingly effortless way this story is flowing together and taking shape. Its almost as if you are right there with the characters living the story as it unfolds. I have a feeling that Gavin and Delan will dual handedly turn the tide of this war. I don't believe that Gain and Delan would be good as soul bonded mates but more of an equal mage companion that can work well together. Am I bias towards them getting together? Hell yes I am . I'm all for team Delan and Bart!

I cannot believe that Delan did not ask nor make an attempt to seek out Paet or Carl. I noticed a passing hint that Delan was hoping that the Bard that was to come to the tent would be Carl but when it wasn't Dalen made no attempt to ask any questions regarding his whereabouts. His lack of inquiring I could look past in regards to Carl but not Paet.

LOL, I'm loving Dalen's Companion. I'm also somewhat concerned and curious if we have seen the last of Bart. I want to believe that is a no but another part says IF we see him again that he will not play the part to which I figured he would originally.

To love what it seems you cannot have. Can you really put a cap on that love and turn down the fire so quickly to just a friendship? Corb's has a long and steep hill to climb to get to that point. Mike's a good distraction, for now, but how long will that last. I've said he's made great strides forward but I'm not so sure that he can really satisfy deep down what it is that Corbin really wants, needs and craves. Who knows, maybe Corbin will end up with Lee and both Pete and Mike will put out to pasture, as romantic interests, and be nothing more then just friends. Your going to torture me with you slow onion-peal type revelations regarding Pete and his past, lol.

wOw, what I wouldn't do to have a Cadet march in front of my house, singing my name and then throw his shirt in my direction. At first I didn't care all that much for Mike. I was rather indifferent towards him. Now I'm really starting to like him. He's made some great strides forward. Although I still have this little quiet voice that keeps whispering that maybe, just maybe Mike is doing this in an attempt to make Pete jealous. As a way of helping Corbs'ter get what he wants since Mike knows he can not give Corb what he wants and desires. Pete- come out of the closet with the rainbow colored plumbing and man up! I'm loosing faith in Pete and falling further towards cheering Corbs on to go for Mike. There must be one hell of a something in Pete' past for him to be so stubborn. Poor Corbs ;(

I laughed so hard at your description of Zack's driving. Reminded me so much of me riding with my best friend. Ninety or nothing was his motto while I sat white knuckled and near the hyperventilation stage in the passenger seat. lol. Rut Rho- Mom and dad already know about CJ and Danny. Do they know about Mattie and Spin? Could turn rather interesting.

Glad to see Michael getting some of his own medicine. He needed to be fed a little humble pie. Great chapter! Can't wait to see what else you have in store for Pasha and Uriel. I'm also hoping that Gabe get fed some of that humble pie as well, lol I also have to say that Carrie's review cracked me up. Especially the first part liking the need for a 'love bunny' to an Almond Joy or Mounds. Two thumbs up on that one, Carrie

I am guessing, as I have never read Mercedes, that this war has something to do with an artifact. A very powerful one at that or maybe it is a hearthstone. Just an educated guess on my part. I also have a suspicion that Bart is going to be playing a large part in this story. I know Delan has been paired up with an older more trained Mage but I still believe that Bart will be a cornerstone or key in this war. After all it was mentioned that Bart's abilities are there if he wanted to force them out. He just hasn't because of the risks involved. This is becoming a very interesting read. One I'm sure to continue following.

I'll leave it at this; Great chapter! I can't really say much more a I just don't know what to say in regards to Corb and Pete. I do, somewhat, like Mike. Don't really like his flirting with girls while out with Corb but I do understand it. Maybe it would be better for Corb to just work on Mike and see if he can get him to commit to him a little more.

As always, great chapter. Some pretty real, raw and true emotions packed within this chapter.

And this is why I nominated you for Queen of the Cliffhangers, lol. Seems that little Pasha is more then meets the eye. Quite an interesting twist, Nephy. I'm with SC, on this one. Is it time for a new chapter yet?

As good as the first! I'm loving how this story is unfolding and the way the new characters are fitting into it all. I'm anxious to hear what Dylan's issues are and to find out if he finds that special someone as well. Great job!!

Not nice, Sid. Leaving us hanging like that with only the thoughts and conflicting turmoil that the end of the chapter brought. "And he let the water take him".....that phrase is going to haunt my mind until you post the next chapter. I cannot allow myself to believe that Riley would give up like that or that he will exit the story in this fashion. Emotionally packed and great suspense (with that cliffhanger) within this chapter. I can already tell that this is going to be a story that will keep me on edge and holding my breath until the next chapter. Hurry up as I don't want to look like a smurf and turn blue from the lack of oxygen, lol.

I'm still relatively new to the site and learning about so many authors has been a wonderful experience. I've run across so many talented writers and fallen in love with so many stories on this site. I wish I could nominate so many more but decided to reserve and narrow it down to just a select few. Best Hosted Story- The Experiment and Adverse Effect by Cia; Purpose by Andrew_Q_Gordon (It is currently marked Premium but when it was originally posted it was open for all to read) Best GA Stories- The Life of Him by SidLove; An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA by Riley Jericho; Maverick Cattle Company by Reddirtwriter Best Antagonist/Villain (From any 2012 GA story)- Bridget from Circumnavigation by C James Best Protagonist/Hero (From any 2012 GA story)- Mira from Hidden Sunlight Best GA Stories by a New Author- Dust and Ash by Tucker McCallahan The King (or, if female, Queen) of Cliffhangers The King- Tucker McCallahan and for the Queen it would be Nephylim

I really don't even know what to say. You have me flabbergasted, frustrated and speechless. Part of me wants to believe that Pete is trying to reach out to Corb the best and only way he knows how but that side is at war with the self preservation side of me. I understand what Cord is trying to do and I cannot fault him on it. I guess I shouldn't be surprised that he is taking it to the extreme as that seems to be his style. Either extreme left or extreme right but rarely if ever close to the middle. These two need a Therapist....stat!