CW Prince

I'ma thinkin that Dee isn't exactly completely human. I'm also wonderin how in the world Sys became prego? Did he come to Earth in this condition? Is this what prompted him to seek an escape from the lab? I know, I know...I can ask all the questions I want but won't get the answer until later on in the story, lol. I'm glad to see you back after your spell with your computer

Ok, well....that was unexpected. Things could get very interesting very quick. This is going to be torture waiting for the next chapter. Wonder how Zak's mom is going to explain this one. Could it be that even she didn't know as Danny and Zak are only half brothers???

You have me utterly baffled. I'm still thinking that Bridget has something more to do with this then her perceived innocent roll as a 'helper'. When I read the e-mail, sent to Jim by 'Anonymous', my first reaction was that Bridget had sent it. I just can't connect all the dots yet. I'm also wondering if Trevor's mom is really dead. There is a major key to be found where his mother's boat was last heard from but what that key might be, I cannot quite grasp. All that being said just means that you are doing a wonderful job at writing this is such a way that keeps the keys to the answer just out of reach.

I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to reading more. I'm not so sure I trust this Bridget person. Something just seems really off with her. She could be doing this for personal reasons regarding her late daughter but I still can't get past a sinking feeling I have in the pit of my stomach that it has much more to do with Trev's late mother than it does with her late daughter. I'm not totally on board with this whole belief that Trevor's father killed his wife. As you have mentioned, murder has no Statue of Limitations but Dirk had made mention that he will reveal, whatever his secret is, after 7 yrs is up. That leads me to believe that he didn't kill her. Maybe he knows something but I just don't think it has to do with him killing his wife.

Ford F-150 with a blond headed driver, Hmmmm. Wonder who that could be??? I have a hunch but will just keep quiet for now and see if my thoughts are correct.

Way to go Uz!!!! This was a great victory for Uz but I doubt it is the last we will see of Michael. Great to see a new chapter. I've been missing my Uz and Pasha fix

My heart is bleeding for Corbin. He seems to have reached the top of 'the hill' in his understanding of things between him and Pete. Are they the right conclusions? Probably not but there comes a time when everyone has to decide what they are going to do and do it. Corbin has been precariously balancing on a tightrope when it comes to Pete and every time it seems he is about to fall off Pete grabs him and steadies him. A confusing and frustrating place to be. I'm with Conner that I feel that there is something within Pete's past or his upbringing that is effecting his current state of mind with Corbin. I further believe that Corbin's adventures with the Freshie and the Soldier is effecting Pete's tentativeness towards Corbin. Maybe in Pete's eyes Corbin is a player and Pete fears being hurt. Maybe Pete is testing Corbin to see if he can be faithful in his feelings towards him. Whatever the reason(s) may be I still side with Conner that it is directly and emphatically tied to Pete's past. I don't believe that Hurricane Dakota was being devious or self centered when she spoke with Corbin on their walk to his house. She simply spoke of her dealings with Pete and was honest with Corbin. It was a heartfelt talk and one she felt he needed to hear and understand out of her concern and fear that he would go thru the same thing she had with Pete. I can see a real connection and bonding between these two. Maybe it is all tied to the fact that she has been in Corbin's shoes once before and wants to spare him the heartache and hurt that she went thru or maybe its just one friend giving another friend advise. Whatever it is I don't believe that she was intentionally trying to hurt or make Corbin stop his pursuit of Pete. Just trying to give him information so he can make a good decision and protect his heart. Glad to see a new chapter. As always, it was a great chapter full of frustrations and excitement.

Talk about feeling like you've jump off a plane without a parachute. Million things running thru my head as to what could have come up that would make Danny unable or unwilling to return to his partner and life he seemed to love.

An incredible story! Just wondering if it will be continued as there are still so many unanswered questions.

Sid, you are shredding my emotions. I don't know if I should laugh, cry, scream or pull my hair out. One hell of an emotionally packed chapter! I'm also enjoying the we are following in a present day role with the characters while at times given the flashbacks from the past. Its allowing me to understand and gather a picture of why they are reacting like they are and what has brought them to where they are now in their lives. Masterfully done, Sid!

Would Dale just shut it and let Cole confess that he really IS Bi!!!!!!! Every time Cole tries to tell Dale he gets cut off by one of Dale's tirades. Stuff a sock in it, Dale and listen up. I would have already pulled Dale aside, told him to keep his mouth shut until I was finished and then proceeded to spill it all. I think Dale and I would frustrate each other to no end, lol

You got my mind twisting and turning with thoughts of why Cole 'needs' and not 'wants' Dale to be his boyfriend. The 'want' part could be easy to answer if Cole isn't really gay...but....I have a feeling he may be more curious then we can see right now. I guess that answer will be revealed in the following chapters. I'll be sure to mark this as a 'follow' so I can keep up with it.

That was unexpected about Thomas. When Thomas first mentioned that he wanted to show something to Kyle and Jacob I thought, weird as it is, that he was going to walk over to the bathroom stall and show them the "William Loves Joacob" that was scrawled on the wall. Yes, I am aware that it says William but it could have been that Thomas real first name was William 'Thomas'. This does put a new twist to the story. Also what is up with Thomas offering a blow job or a kiss to keep them quiet? Is his father forcing Thomas into some sick twisted sex life as in selling his son into sexual favors for money so he can have it for his alocohol? I know that sounds whorishly grotesque but it happens more then anyone would like to face. Its one of the saddest things I have ever had to deal with or face when I've worked with troubled kids. It will rip your heart right out of your chest!

I have a few movies that I think might have been given to Sarah but only one of them seems to like a beacon shining forth; "Prayers for Bobby". If you haven't seen it then I suggest that you do as it is an awesome movie. What an emotional roller coaster Jacob is on at the moment. I'm not an activist of violence but I also cannot exactly condemn Jacob for his actions. I know the saying that "sticks and stone may broke my bones but whips and chains excite me..."wait that's not right, its "sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never hurt me". Oh how wrong that statement can be especially when you are emotionally and mentally vulnerable. Glad that Jacob has his father, brother and most importantly Kyle. I just hope Kyle can and hopefully Jacob will let him, help him thru all of this pain and hurt.

The age old question of how much is too much when it comes to protecting and looking after a younger sibling. Protect but not smother. Love but not hinder. No one can determine that except those involved and sometimes even then it is blurred by the moments desires and clouded by impulse. Kudos to Jacob for seeing (feeling) the situation for what it was and not being swept away by generosity and niceness. I know it is wrong but when Kimchi (I forgot his name, sorry) and Josh moved in on Matthew and Nick the only thought going thru my head was a very sick and demented one: "Come 'er little boy. I got some candy for you." *Shakes head* See what you are doing to me, lol. Makin my mind all twisted and perverse, lmao. Nah, I just have a wild and sometime twisted sense of humor. I'll need to think on the subject of the Theme Park as I am still straddling the fence on that one. (Just hope I don't slip and fall...that could prove disastrous) Part of me wants to believe that these new friends heard Jacob loud and clear and took it too heart. Another part of me believes that these guys are used to getting what they want regardless. This latter part is what worries me. It is also the part of me that makes me wonder if them inviting 'Jacob's gang' is only for the chance to get Matt, Nick, Kyle and/or Jacob alone to see if they can get them to do things. After all they did almost get Nick and Matt to do sexual stuff with them until Jacob put the breaks on and stopped them. I think Jacob needs to sit his brother and Nick down and have a serious talk with them about what nearly happened and make sure they fully understand what they almost got into with their new friends (and I use that terms loosely here as I am not sure Jacob or Kyle really look at them that way anymore). Great story so far. A few parts that have been a big stretch for me but that is all part writing a story is to make those things that may not be real seem real. You've done a good at that so far. Looking forward to the remaining chapters. PS: If there is a Tar and Feathering coming up for Sarah? If so can I join in on that fun? I'd love to give this female that bore Jacob and Matt a piece of my mind. I did not use the term 'Mom' as that is an earned title given to one that loves, accepts and protects her children and Sarah has lost the right to be called a mom in my book. I'll give her a second chance if I see her motives are true and that she earns back that right.

I'm trying, really trying but these new friends are making my skin crawl. Its like that feeling you get that you can't explain, grasp or even ignore. Something shady is about to happen or attempted and one or more of the boys will never be the same. Sometimes it pays to listen when your gut tells you something is wrong and not just pass that feeling off as gas . I'm hoping against hope that Jacob's feelings are wrong but think I am going to have to face some sad music soon. Just a sick twisted little side thought. Would be pretty wicked if Kyle's mom and Jacob's dad wind up together by the end of this story, lol. Just saying....would be an interesting twist

Its sad to think that Sarah left to maybe stay with a friend, parents or other family as she is hurting the boys even further. Maybe her and Kyle's mom needs to have a little talk- heart to heart otherwise Jacob and his brother could end up with the same hurt and devastation in their lives as Kyle had to endure in his life. As for the nudist camp and the boys staying there I can honestly say that I think they are up to something a little more then just being friendly. Not saying that they don't want to be friends but from different things said I have a feeling they have ulterior motives as well. I may be wrong as boys will be boys and when they see a cute guy they are going to look but the way some of those looks and stares went I don't believe their invite was all innocent.

If I could plant my foot somewhere unmentionable on Jacob's mom I would gladly do it. Defective indeed What a horrid and emotionally cold thing to say about your own sons. I don't think I will ever understand how a parent can say those things to their own child(ren). I won't get on a soap box regarding this cause then no one else will have room to leave a comment. No child should ever hear those kind of hedious things coming from an adults mouth esp. not a mother's mouth! Just an FYI and not trying to be critical as I know and understand the strain and time it takes to write a story but when you are describing Bill's pride a joy car you mention that it is a 'manual' transmission. When they reach the mall you mention that the dad puts the car in 'park'. That kind of confused me as only an automatic has 'park'. Again, I am not trying to be critical just thought I'd point that out. Don't hate me lol

Brother to Brother. Brother to Friend. Hmmm, wonder who it will be that finally ends up together??? Kyle is a mystery to me. I wonder if he really is gay or if he is just so starved for attention and affection that he goes with what he is given at the time??? His mother seems to treat him like he is quite a bit younger then he really is which seems to put quite a strain on Kyle. Wonder how that will effect his emotional and mental growth as well.

I'm pondering about the bachelor party. Kyle left with Riley and obviously they had sex in a Riley's hotel room....leads me to believe that Gabe and Kyle never went thru with the wedding. I know. Kyle used Gabe's last name when he created the name he used to publish his book. I, however, believe that was more out of guilt for what he did with Riley the night before his wedding date. The only thing that I cannot place tho is when you mention that Kyle clocked time in Gabe's office. That remains a mystery to me. That could be the hinge in which my whole theory could be sprung wide open. Either way tho in time it still found Kyle and Gabe apart which made room now for Riley to move back in and the two to be together. Great chapter, Sid.

Go, Uzziel!!!! Its about time Gabriel got a little taste if his own medicine. Hope things are not too progressed for U to stop them and get to Pasha.

I'll reserve my comments about what you did to Mira for now, but can you feel me staring you down? I am hoping that Mira's ability to heal quickly will take effect and keep him from dying. I was beyond pissed off when they, Kon, Carlos and Shay, just left Mira there and took off. Okay, maybe I can understand Shay being in shock and not thinking but the others....just not acceptable! Maybe the energy that Shay created after Mira was stabbed had an effect on Mira and in some way helped heal him or kept him from dying. I can honestly say that while I just started reading this recently I am glad that I have not had to endure all these 'cliffhangers' that you seem to be so well versed in using. I am however reaching a point where I will soon be caught up and waiting with the others for additional chapters. So my reprieve from your 'cliffhangers' is short lived. Soon I shall endure the torture of having to await the next chapter. Guess I better make sure that I have plenty of Starbucks handy at that point, lol.

Rut Rho, Shaggy....Are you going to give Shay and Mira a break? LOL One disaster to another. If you get me to sit any further on the edge of my seat then I am going to fall off . I also keep fearing that every time that Mira defends and protects Shay that he will get mortally wounded. That is a rather disturbing thought. If you couldn't gather by my previous comments along with this one...I am thoroughly enjoying the story. Thank-you and keep up the great work!

I said it once and I'll say it again; You shouldn't have waited so long to post your stories. This is a fantastic story and I'm loving how it is unfolding. At times fast and others slow. It is frustrating to us, the reader, but also what keeps us coming back and wanting more. As far as the sex question you posed at the end of this chapter; i know I am a bit late as other chapters have been written but I'll address it none-the-less. At times when writing a story the story takes on a life of its own and takes the writer to places he/she never thought of going. If it is something that you feel will benefit, enhance or just where the story needs to divert to for a spell, then go for it. I agree with you that the plot of the story should not become muddled, distract from or confused by a scene. Sometimes eluding to, briefly introducing or even dropping little 'daydream' type thoughts that are going around a characters head can be as effective as an outright full on description of the act itself. That is my thoughts on the matter. I will leave it to you as to what direction and course you choose to take. Either way, you will not loose me as a reader. The story is far too exciting and interesting for that to happen

For someone who has written for a while but never put anything on here until this story; you are doing quite well! Maybe you should have posted before now. Interesting start to what I am hoping will continue to be a story that captivates my attention. I hope tho that further into the story we learn a bit more about what happened while Shay was 'being repaired'. Are these creatures genetic mutations? I doubt they are aliens from another planet because the one Shay accosted seems to have turned back or just turned into a boy. Looking forward to finding out more about Shay, what happened and what these Alien/Mutations are.