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I'll let you know what's next as soon as I write it. LOL
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I like that! Go Team Jimmy!
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A very good question. However, it's still too early to indoctrinate Sawyer into Jimmy's other world.
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If we go by what Eddie (the unfortunate young man Jimmy had to put down in an earlier chapter) said about the wolf that turned him, the assumption is that the culprit is male.
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The full moon crept over the forest’s edge, gradually washing Fergus and his pack in its silvery glow through a cloudless sky. At least sixty men and women of various sizes and ages stared back at him. Most packs numbered below twenty, so commanding one of this size, no matter how ragtag, was an honor most alphas never knew. Given their long lives, the moon limited their numbers, although this pack’s bloodlines were so weak a normal human lifespan was all they could count on. Except Fergus,
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Since Fergus's scent mixes with his pack members as part of bonding, he likely catches that much of their scent, but then needs time to recognize which specific wolf it is. All of this assumes he's paid enough attention to commit them all to memory.
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There is so much more to come. We're not even close to half way. Stay tuned!
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Thank you! I try to keep readers guessing and create enough interest to keep you coming back for more.
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Jimmy's past isn't an easy one...
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I wouldn't be surprised to find out Fergus suspected things for quite a while, but prefers to use Jimmy to handle the situation to prevent bad blood within his pack. Plausible deniability and all that jazz.
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In case there's any confusion: a rogue is a wolf that acts with selfish or destructive interests that could harm or endanger the pack or others, and a rabid is a human bitten by a wolf and under the full moon becomes trapped somewhere in mid-shift and becomes a monster. I like to think of them as the basis of werewolf horror mythology in this world.
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We'll see more of Fergus soon which should help explain his motivations a little better. Next chapter as a matter of fact.
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Jimmy has a lot of darkness in his past, and Fergus needs to dial down his narcissism and get his shit together
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Jimmy is a total product of his backstory. It drives just about everything he does and even influences how he reacts to Sawyer.
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Dirt spit out from under Jimmy’s tires as he came to a hard stop on the service road next to Fergus’s truck and police cruiser right where he said to meet. He didn’t want to offend his future alpha, but the interruption—and ruining his first real opportunity to court Sawyer had his hackles risen. He pressed his palm over the business card in his vest pocket, making sure it was still there, hoping to calm himself down. His wolf hadn’t stopped snarling and clawing at his spine since he’d walked aw
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Noblesse Oblige - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 16, 2020
Mann Ramblings commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
It just proves my point. The super-rich are scum by default. -
Noblesse Oblige - Word of the Day - Sun Aug 16, 2020
Mann Ramblings commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The filthy rich are always the despots, even when they wear a pretty face. You only become a billionaire by exploiting the workers and hanging on to outdated imperialist dogma and never giving me a bunch of money so I don't have to work. -
Thank you! ❤️
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I love reader theories. This would be so awesome! Although I think Jimmy's scent would attract a potential mate, human or not, and the inner beast is just a descriptive passage showing how Sawyer is picking up oin some of Jimmy's non-human characteristics. The eyesight... I needed a way to keep him from killing himself while running in the forest without light.
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Suffer? My characters?
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maintaining the tension without going overboard took a lot of effort
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It must be something serious for Jimmy to actually walk away.
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I'm looking forward to seeing how this progresses too. I have a few ideas that are still percolating
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Sawyer needed a decent highlight since his coming out to Mom. It was a big moment for him to talk to Jimmy, but I needed him to do it with a bit of awkwardness and inexperience. (What's he's done with men in the past was more partying and cruising than actually getting to know them.) He has to learn all over again.
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he certainly hasn't done much to get on people's good side...
