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Well that is a huge cliffhanger, with no idea of what is going to happen Brandon in that is there going to be some miraculous case of luck as we have seen result from the previous cliffhangers or is it really the greatest sacrifice he could make even after pulling Chase from the grip of death and what is going to Helen is there going to be more luck for Instinct or is it the end of the line for her. Looking forward to tomorrow morning.

I have to say I always love finding a new story which I have done with this and i have to say i think it will be interesting to see how Zach deals with this discovery of knowledge without betraying Ryan's trust. Looking forward to the next update and beyond.

Well to say that this is good would be a huge understatement, it is awesome reading and doesn't just rush to the point, cannot wait 'til the next chapter.

I eagerly await the next instalment of this story, I absolutely love any thing to do with Harry Potter and this sounds interesting so far.

I have really enjoyed reading this story and would be over the moon if more chapters were published and I would recommend this story to any prolific reader.

Well where to star this story has been oh so very well written so far it would be a real shame to let it sit there and provide such a short burst of entertainment/enjoyment, hope you can get back to it soon.

I really have enjoyed reading the story and would drop what I was doing to read another instalment of the story, keep up the good work.