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    Melvyn Ford

    I loved this! It reminded me so much of my grandfather, and the 1939 Packard in my garage that was his first car when he came to America in 1946. Thank you.
  2. Oh where, oh where has our cliff dwelling goat gone to? This is not our goat (well, ok, he is my goat). According to my neighbors 5 year old, his name is Goaty Goaty McGoat Goat. His actual name, of course, is Dickhead (aka, that little goat brat ate my car keys), but we didn't want to try to explain that to Nickie...
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    Chapter 1

    You sick, twisted, wonderful, hilarious man.....I was laughing so hard reading this my roommate thought I was choking on food!
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    Chapter 1

    The next chapter will cover Christmas and New years (and GOD did he have fun!) I am so sorry that you had to go through that same shitty time, and I hope you are making it through. On the lighter side, our collection was / is pigs, but we have managed to lock them all in cases now!
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you so much! I will add some pics to my gallery of all the herd, and thank you for your kind words about Billy. We are moving on, but there are days when I swear he is in my house poking at me!!
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you!
  7. Do you believe in reincarnation? No? Me either. But suppose, just for a second that you did. How would that work? Would you get to choose where and when you went? Could you, say, go to a person who loved you or a place where you had been happy? I have often wondered about these things after a scotch or two. It's always seemed a shame to me that the scotch never produced answers, only the questions. Sam's story, while not providing any answers, at least gives me a little hope, and that's more tha
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    Sunday

    OK, so I am really, really bad at reviewing chapters as I go along, but I wanted to take a minute and let you know that I like what you've done so far, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
  9. I am admittedly terrible about reviewing a work as I read it, and in this case, for that I apologize. This is one of the best stories that I have read on this site, and I should have don my part to encourage you after every chapter. In my defense, I started reading it yesterday at about 10am. It is now 2am, and I only stopped after this chapter because it would have been awkward to explain a wet chair in the morning...keep up he good work, this is truly, truly an amazing, funny, twisted, scary, horrifying and dare I say, hopeful tale, and I have loved every word of it.
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    Prompt 348

    Home run!
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    Chapter 1

    I have read this, and as I recall, quite enjoyed it! Glad to see it come back to life!
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    Chapter 1

    First, I have to say, thank you for quoting Monty Python back to me!!! Nobody ever does, and I love you for it. Second, the imagery in this story is absolutely perfect. I loved every word of it, and while the painting is beautiful, the images I got from your words say far more to me. Not to belittle or denigrate your husbands work in any way, mind you, but your story will stay with me a long while.
  13. Thank you for all your hard work on this one, DD! And thank you again for publishing it for us of the "Gimme Gimme "crowd!!
  14. I'm still loving every word! Keep up the good work,Daddy,this is fast becoming an all time favorite!!
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    Chapter 12

    Yep. We're back to "that's just fucked up." Keep up the great work!
  16. I hate that my smartphone is smarter than I am.__
  17. No good with posting....here is link. https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B4mClekIQJWscDY0MHVpbHdqamM/edit?usp=docslist_api
  18. I love it! The Tennessee thing is brilliantly cheesy!
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    Chapter 36

    I have been hopelessly addicted to this storyline since the first chapter of CAP, amd while I am totally not qualified to give any sort of real peer review, I have to tell you, it just keeps getting better!
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    Chapter 10

    OK, so all night marathon to read the first ten chapters, and WOW! So far I have waffled between "that's just fucked up" and "that's amazing writing". I am kinda stuck in the middle right now. Amazing story, horrifying subject matter, amd I can't wait to read more.
  21. I love how descriptive you are when talking about their psychic connections, without losing focus on the bigger picture of the chapter. I learn more and more from the gifted writers on this site, amd I definitely count you as one of the top of the heap!
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    Chapter 16.

    Another fantastic story from you! I couldn't love then ending more. I enjoyed this one from start to finish, even when I was so worried about Paul that I couldn't sleep! Thank you for sharing!
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    Chapter 14.

    Another amazing chapter in this lovely tale!
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