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Do you believe in reincarnation? No? Me either. But suppose, just for a second that you did. How would that work? Would you get to choose where and when you went? Could you, say, go to a person who loved you or a place where you had been happy? I have often wondered about these things after a scotch or two. It's always seemed a shame to me that the scotch never produced answers, only the questions. Sam's story, while not providing any answers, at least gives me a little hope, and that's more tha
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Chapter Three: Broken Bird
jkeele777 commented on Hermit in the Cave's story chapter in Chapter Three: Broken Bird
I am admittedly terrible about reviewing a work as I read it, and in this case, for that I apologize. This is one of the best stories that I have read on this site, and I should have don my part to encourage you after every chapter. In my defense, I started reading it yesterday at about 10am. It is now 2am, and I only stopped after this chapter because it would have been awkward to explain a wet chair in the morning...keep up he good work, this is truly, truly an amazing, funny, twisted, scary, horrifying and dare I say, hopeful tale, and I have loved every word of it. -
Home run!
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First, I have to say, thank you for quoting Monty Python back to me!!! Nobody ever does, and I love you for it. Second, the imagery in this story is absolutely perfect. I loved every word of it, and while the painting is beautiful, the images I got from your words say far more to me. Not to belittle or denigrate your husbands work in any way, mind you, but your story will stay with me a long while.
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Chapter 19 Special Assignment
jkeele777 commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 19 Special Assignment
Thank you for all your hard work on this one, DD! And thank you again for publishing it for us of the "Gimme Gimme "crowd!! -
Chapter 18 General Quarters!
jkeele777 commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 18 General Quarters!
I'm still loving every word! Keep up the good work,Daddy,this is fast becoming an all time favorite!! -
Yep. We're back to "that's just fucked up." Keep up the great work!
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I have been hopelessly addicted to this storyline since the first chapter of CAP, amd while I am totally not qualified to give any sort of real peer review, I have to tell you, it just keeps getting better!
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OK, so all night marathon to read the first ten chapters, and WOW! So far I have waffled between "that's just fucked up" and "that's amazing writing". I am kinda stuck in the middle right now. Amazing story, horrifying subject matter, amd I can't wait to read more.
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I love how descriptive you are when talking about their psychic connections, without losing focus on the bigger picture of the chapter. I learn more and more from the gifted writers on this site, amd I definitely count you as one of the top of the heap!
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Another fantastic story from you! I couldn't love then ending more. I enjoyed this one from start to finish, even when I was so worried about Paul that I couldn't sleep! Thank you for sharing!
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Another amazing chapter in this lovely tale!
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As always, I am in awe of the way you are able to tell a story. Jealous as all hell, and anxiously awaiting the next episode!
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You hit me like a tidal wave rolling fast across a vast flat plain churning crushing evolving ever flowing toward the inevitable end laughing singing shouting playing quoting that old ministry song jesus hits like an atom bomb you hit me like a tidal wave
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I agree with you completely that a sequel would be difficult for this story. First, this was amazing, and touching, and a little sappy at times, but I absolutely loved it. Back to the sequel - I think you're right. This story is complete. Thank you for sharing it. I can't wait to see what you do next!
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I had a dream today. While sitting awake in my chair, staring at nothing. i dreamt of you, in another time and place, bright and cold and beautiful. laughing in the sunshine and throwing snowballs at me, just like things once were. Maybe it was a memory, maybe a hallucination. Maybe I'm just batshit crazy, but I swear I heard you laughing, and smelled that cheap, god awful cologne you love so much. then, all of the sudden, you spun my chair around and kissed me. scared me half to death, a
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a place to put the little things that bounce around my brain...
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My dear Billy, Today marks exactly eleven months since you left us. While I am still incredibly sad that you are gone, I am no longer angry with you. I love you today as much as I ever did. I hope that you found what you were looking for, and I hope you got your wish, and Jerry was there singing goddamned Uncle Johns Band when you found your heaven. I miss you every day, and I probably dial your phone number once a week, and then when your sister answers I have a mini breakdown, but I am ma
